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Chapter 1
“ I need to go re-up, dese muthafuqqin feeins been buyin all that new shyt Q-dub brought back” Ralow said as he finished rollin his blunt and smoked.
“Me too, That shyt be having them buzzin’ fareal” Jr eyes followed this girl as she walked past the car, looking down at her ass.

” Aye mami, cmere”
“Nygga please, fuqq you” she flick him off an kept walking
“Fuqq you den bytch, yo ass aint that big no way”

He rolled the window back up, as Ralow, Mack and Pierre laughed at him. Mack got a phone call it was Q-Dub telling them to come through and pick up some more work for him. They ended making a detour to Mack sister Shonae house.

“Man I gotta piss,yall come in I might be in here for a min”
“I hope she got sum food too” Jr said as they all hopped out the car

Shonae live in storm heights aka the projects. A lot of people hung out there, music playin all over and chillin on the side. Kids at the parks, baby mama’s arguing out-loud, people getting the braids re-done. BBQ everything, it was jus the hood.

“Who is it” Shonae answered
“Me nae-nae open the door I gotta piss” Mack yelled like a drunk alcoholic coming off of a long drunk. She let them in and she had her girls over listening to music and chilling playing cards. He pushed past her and went to the bathroom while they took a seat and watch BET’s 106 and park.

“Whats up big-head” Shonae said to Pierre
“Chillin,tryna make this money,what been good witchu mami”
“The same I see u cant call nobody nomore, but its cool”
“Naw it aint even like that a Nygga been busy tho ima hit u up later on tonight”
“Mmh..Hmm well see”

Mack came out the bathroom, after over hearin the conversation. Lookin at jodi and neci

”Whad up hoez” He laughed and walk in the kitchen
“Fuqq u Nygga” Jodi said, her and mack always argued, well he always tried to bother her. Truth is he really wanted to be with her and she like him too but they couldn’t stop arguing with each other, two stubborn people don’t work out. They fuqq a few times but he ended up going back to his baby momma Nicky, and left Jodi like she was nothing/

While everybody listen to them go back and forth, they heard a knock on the door.

“Can you get the door lo-lo since u sittin right there” Shonae yelled while goin in her room with Pierre for a min.
“I guess”
He got up and open the front door and was stunned by the beauty that stood there in his face. She was about 5’6, with light brown eyes and they were slanted because she was phillipino and black. Her hair was medium length that hung down her back. He notice her eye brow ring, her diamond studded cartiers. She had the perfect everything, and a booty that made all nyggas head turn.

“Excuse me” she smiled at him he had forgot that he was just starin at her. He fell in love with her smile and bite his bottom lip as he let her in.

“Miesha baby!” Neci yelled real loud
“Whad up mami” Carmiesha walk in and hugged her. “What’s up cuzzo u cant speak?”

”My bad cuz I aint even kno that was you,what good withchu baby girl”

They hugged and she gave jodi a hugged too.

“Where my CD’s at you was suppose to make me, oh I’ll be back I gotta go to angel house real quick” Miesha grab her keys

“Lo is them CD’s still in the car?” Mack said while passing the blunt

”Yeah I’ll get em for you ma” He looked at her. He wanted to fuqq her right then and there he didn’t care who watched, he had this fantasy for her. He never felt like this for any other girl and now he was falling head over hills.

“I’ll be back in a minute yall” Miesha waved as her and Ralow walked out the door. They walk down the hallway in silence. Both thinking the same thing but scared to say anything. Finally they got on the elevator and stared at each other.

“So whats ya name mami?”

”Carmiesha, but you can call me Miesha, and you?”

“Ralow, How old is you?”

“19 and u?”

” Dats whats up im 20, you aint from here are you cuz I aint never seen you before”

“I am from here but I moved to Detroit when I was 13, I just moved back”

“I don’t mean to seem pushy but do you have a man”

” Nope”

They got off the elevator, walking down the hallway, which smelled like piss. Little kids were running back and forth through there. Heard babies crying, everything you can think of.

“Do you have a girl?”

”Naw a lot of these bytches aint worth my time”

“Oh, any kids?”

”…..Naw im waiting for the right girl to have my kids and I still aint found her yet, so I aint giving none of these hoez my dick raw”

” I hear dat, a lot of these hoes burning anyway, can’t just fuqq anybody” she laughed a little. And he started starin at her without realizing it first.

“What?” Miesha looked at him puzzled.
“Oh my bad, its just you got a pretty ass smile, real talk, you not like these other girls out here you got class to you and…….” He was interrupted by her kissing him. He kissed her back. They stood in the hallway kissing. She put her arms up and wraps them around his neck without even noticing what she did and his arms went around her waist. She broke the kiss because she felt embarrassed.

“Oh im so sorry, I couldn’t help it” she tried to walk away and he pulled her back to him and kissed her again.

“It’s cool, yo sexy ass, I aint mind it…..I wanted to anyway I just aint want you to slap me or nothing” They both laughed a little.

“I can’t believe I did that tho, cuz I don’t know you, but I don’t regret it.” She looked at him and he just wanted her even more now.

”What you doing later?”

They walked out the doors, walked around the building to get to the parking lot.

“Nothing probably chill at home, im with my folks right now till I find a place, whats up?”

” I wanna get to kno you, how bout I take you out and introduce you to New York again.”

”Alright, where you gon take me”

”It’s a surprise, just be ready when I come get you”

”Yeah okay, what time?”

”Around 7:30 cuz I got handle some business, in a few and that’s gonna take a minute”

“Iight see you later” she unlock her car door, she had an all black G6 with all black tinted windows and the tires was black too.

“I can’t get no hug ms.miesha?”

“Oh my bad”

She walked back to the curb and gave him a hugged, she saw other females whispering and looking at them. But when she looked back at him. She knew this would be the start of her life that drama would come. But she still claimed him as her man. For some reason he had a hold on her, she didn’t like feeling this way, but she couldn’t let it go neither. She had a thing for Dark skinned men, who had a thuggish swag to him, had to be a drug-dealer. And still treated her nice and spoiled her crazy.

He watched her pull off and thought about her all the way back inside. When he got back, he sat on the couch thinking about they lips touching. His guard let down and he felt she was the one, this had never happen before to im, and strange at that but he had to see exactly what it is that he was so attracted to by her. Not only was she jus beautiful to him but she had something the girls in Harlem, Brooklyn, and the Bronx couldn’t give him and he loved that. He was still a thug tho so he maintained his self and didn’t try to get wrap up in her too quick.

“What the hell took you so long” Neci said. She was drunk and was ready to fuqq with people like she always did. She was a true alcoholic. At an early age, and on her way to an early death. She was scandalous she would do anything at the right price. She had been into so many fights; her face had scratches and marks all over. She had this one smiley that started from her eye and down to her lip, because she messed around with snoop. His baby momma was Tracy a crazy ass bytch, who knew nothing but being street. She told everybody that she was the only bytch that could fuqq wit snoop and she meant it. Even tho Neci could scrap, she beat Tracy ass the first time, but Tracy caught her while she was coming home late and sliced her face and almost her neck but Neci fought back. And the old people next door came out and help Neci to the hospital. She hadn’t really mess with snoop then, because it kept getting worse, each time Tracy would hear they were together some type of threat would be sent to her or she would try to jump her.

“Don’t worry about it bytch, Jus now I wasn’t with yo hoe ass. I aint in the mood today so take ya drunk ass on Neci” Ralow looked at her; he had this murder look in his eyes. And his eyes were so cold felt, which you knew he wasn’t playing with you. He had madd respect in the streets, he has done it all killed anybody that tried to fuqq with him, or who has ever crossed him. That why he only fuqqs with the nyggas he knew he could trust. But if they ever did anything to him, they all knew it wasn’t nothing to him about killing. It was just the type of nygga he was. He didn’t give a fuqq about nothing or nobody. Except for now.


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Chapter 2
Ralow P.O.V:
I was really startin to feel the vibe that miesha gave me. I think I might start something new with her. But then again she seems too good to be true.like the saying. It’s like…. The bytch was sent to me, but I aint did shyt good for nobody except give these feens what they need. I told the fellas I couldn’t meet them at the club tonight. That’s where we usually be every Friday night. Getting drunk and blowed as fuqq,Sometimes take a lil X. Depending if we was celebrating or not. And then go fuqq some lil hoodrat who thought she could be a star fuqqing with me or one of my nyggas. I loved the life I lived. This is all imma ever have in this world. I planned on probably makin a family,Im gonna treat my wife right and make sure she spoiled and stays happy, and make for damn sure my kids don’t live the life I had. I also plan on quitting the dope game in the future but I don’t see that happening no time soon so I live with what I have now.

I finished getting dressed just in time. I pulled up at her house; her folks live on 140th and Broadway of Harlem. I used to live down the block when I was kid. My mom Ri’Shae or bytch,to me. I aint seen her in a minute she usually be on the corner of 80th And Trevor. Just lookin at the fuqqin sky. She probably over-dose I wouldn’t give a fuqq. She use to beat the shyt out of me for anything. If I ask to use the bathroom,she’ll find some way to say I was back talking her. So she sent me to live with Ken a.k.a my pops. I gotta give the muthafuqqa credit he showed me love, not the type of love a son and father suppose to have but he kept me fed, and made sure I had a strap at all times. I learn the whole drug game by the time I was 10. And had me selling at the age of 12. He had people on the corners watching me incase somebody tried to rob my lil ass. He had me addicted to bytches too, he let one of his sexiest bytches suck my dick and let me fuqq her anyway I wanted too. I got fuqqed any time I wanted it. And I didn’t have a lil boy dick neither, if that’s what you thought. I had a full 9 inch dick and thick so they aint have a problem with giving it up. I can actually count on the nygga if I need any work or if I fall short, being raised by a pimp wasn’t all that bad.

He waited and she finally came out the house. She had on her denim pepe jeans that looked painted on. Her ass stuck out, she had a real apple bottom, her shirt match it with different designs, it was a long sleeve. Her half coat that was black and apple bottom. She had her hair comb to one side and her lip gloss was poppin’, but just enough on her. She had on her all black hi-top forces heels. Her nails matched and rings was shining. She finally got in the car.

“Whats up “ She smiled while they hugged.
“ Shyt, starin at that seductive ass body you got. We might have to make a detour to the crib then get back to the date if you keep it tight like that.” He put the car in reverse, and she gave a lil laugh, flattered to what he just said.

“Why you look so serious, you been lookin like that since earlier” She said while turning in her seat to face him.
”Gansta nyggas don’t smile……plus I don’t smile too much anyway, I really aint had shyt to smile about” He gave her a quick glance in her eyes.
“You breathing right? So that’s something to smile about”

“I see imma have to get yo ass already……but you got a point, I already see you gon be a mess.” He smiled at her as he stop at the red light, his black cutless that sat on 24’s, shined in the moon light. They were riding big you would say.

“ So where we going?”

”Just ride mami, ima get us to where we need to be tonight”

She smiled and shook her head. And turned the radio on, he looked at her. He usually back slapped girls that touched anything in his car. Besides the ones that gave him head.
Lil Wayne lollie pop played. She started singing as she turned it up loud.

“Shawty say the nygga that im with aint shyt, Shawty said the nygga she with aint this, Shawty say the nygga that she with cant hit, But shawty imma hit it,hit it, like he cant miss…..Thats my muthafuqqin part” She kept singing. ”Call me so I can make it juicy for ya” He looked at her be in her own world dancing and singing to the song until it went off.

“Alright mami lets go” He got out the car and he put his arm around her as they walk around to the restaurant. He was whispering in her ear talking about the people who walked past,just to make her laugh.

”That was so mean they were old” She laughed and hit his chest as he pulled her in front of her and he pulled her closer to him so they bodies were touching, he nibbled on her neck alil.

She accidently let out a moan and he heard it.
“Ooo….I mean”
“Naw, I heard that, I see I found one them sweet spots”
”Shut-up”
They walked in the restaurant and everybody was showin love to him as they went to their seats. They sat down in the seats in the back.

“Can I get you anything to drink” The waitress pulled out her tab and looked directly at Ralow. You could tell she was a hoe who would fuqq him if she had the chance, she stood there blowing and popping her gum, she leaned forward making her sleepy ass titties act like they were friends with each other again, her dirty ass bra showed looking like it had been wash in mud then put back on her,you could tell at one point it was white but now turned to creamy brown, and him being a nygga he looked.

“UMM….I want a strawberry shake” I looked at her, the expression on my face was speaking “bytch” real loud, I was griming that hoe. Ralow looked away and laughed quietly as me and her exchange looks but she ended up getting the message.

“And you sir?” She stood back up straight.
“I want sum patrone, tell Charlie its for lo”
“You want it in the bottle?”
“Yeah”
”Anything to eat?”
”You want something?” He saw that y face was not the same.
“Naw im straight” I looked out the window

She took the menu’s and left from the table and went to the back conversating with the other girls that work there, and telling them what happen.

“Don’t let that bother you” He grab her hand
“I aint let nothing bothering me”
”Yes you is, that’s just a ho who wanted me awhile back, but like I told you I like girls that have class…….would you feel better if she apologize?”
” Yep” She said sarcastically not thinking he was serious
“Alright,hold on……..Aye Denisha cmere”

She did her ho walk over to the table. Holding the strawberry shake and patrone on the tray.

“ Here you go, what is it that you needed”
”Apologize you disrespected my girl”

She looked at him like he was crazy.

“You must be….”
”You know better, don’t think I wont drop yo ass infront of all these people, now apologize”


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She turned an looked at me and I looked at him, and then at her.

“Im sorry if I disrespected you in anyway.”
“ You believe her?”
”Yeah”
”Im serious,cuz I’ll make her do this all over again and this time on her knees”
”I believe her lo”
”Aiight you dis-missed”

She walked away mad but she knew not to say anything, or she would get her ass beat. Carmiesha sat in dis-belief about what just happen. But it turned her on, she loved a man who had control and power over people. They sat there talking for awhile. She had already made up in her mind that she wasn’t going home tonight. His ways was to perfect,and she had to see how his sex game was to it was no getting around it. Also speaking she hadn’t had none in 2 months, she felt it was time.

“You ready to go?” She looked at him an bit her bottom lip
“Where you tryna go lil mama” He looked at her knowin exactly what she wanted
“Anywhere you take me”
“Aight come on”

They got up from the table and walked out. They drove back in silence both ready for what was about to happen. They drove out the hood and into uptown New York to big houses. They pulled to one that was by the water and it was very beautiful.

“Who house is this?”
”Mine. C’mon” He said while getting out the car, she was surprised by the outside but once she got inside she was more shocked. It was beautiful, you would neva kno a thug would live like this, everything so clean and neat, his house was gold and black all over.
I went in his room an took my coat, and shoes off. I laid in his bed and stared at the ceiling, he came in the room, he was down to his wife beater and boxers, with his low cut socks.

At that point I started having a flash back of my life. I heard “Oochie Wally” Playin in my head, I knew this nygga was about to fuqq my world up. And couldn’t wait for it to happen. He laid on top of me as I unbutton my pants and slid them half way down. His hand found his way to my left breast, caressing it all over. My eyes slowly rolled back in my head, and wrap my legs around him. Grindin deeper between my legs

“You ready?” He whisper in my ear softly. I shook my head yes and he got off of me and I pulled my pants all the way off and threw them on the floor. I slid my shirt over my head and let him look at my body up and down. I got back on the bed and crawled over him slowly, kissing his stomach and up further to his chest. I rolled my tongue up his neck and kissed his ear. He pulled his boxers down and pulled it out. His dick was harder then it can get. My coochie was wet I quickly slid over the top of it. I moaned loud, because of the size I wasn’t really ready to jus sit all the way on it but I always loved pain so it didn’t matter.

“Ooo Ralow…” she rocked back and forth on his dick. gettig use to the fit,until she can start workin him properly.
“Show me what you can do” he slapped her ass hard. And made her cry out to him,but she did like she was told and rode him like a pro. They had went at it for hrs,and neither one wanted give in so they kept bustin nuts after nuts. He had her up against the wall, shoving it all the way up in her. She couldn’t move, she arch her back more and let him slide in more. His speed started to go faster and faster till she was speechless.

“MH! Oh yes daddy please! fuqq me, fuqq me, fuqq me” She yelled loud. He smacked her ass hard again. She was able to take every inch he put in her without any fuss. He like that so he was gonna give it to her how ever she wanted.
“This mine right?” he said

”……..mmm”

He went faster and she was about to scream but she bit her bottom lip so she wouldn’t
“Lo-lo baby”

“This mine right?!”

“Im bout to cum I feel that dick.....ooooo.....”

” What I say miesha”

He grip her waist real tight and pushed hard in her fast, till she couldn’t hold her screams anymore.

“IT’S YOURS……..OOOoooooo” She suck her teeth, she had came on his dick and he had bust too.

“You betta start answerin me girl, ima beat that shyt harder next time” he pulled out slowly, makin her want it again. He put his boxers back on and threw away the condom.

” Give me one of your shirts boo” He gave her a wife beater, and she put it on, and laid down next to him she had her legs together close, she was feelin sore already. She didn’t say nothing; she just laid there as he smoked a blunt that was already rolled on his nightstand.

“You sore aint you?”

I started thinking like how this nygga kno, he always seem to kno how I was feelin, and I didn’t understand it.

“Yeah a little, how you kno?”

”You can just say i got them senses in me…..an it’s common sense cuz you curled up real tight”
He laughed, and smoked the rest of his blunt.

“Shut-up, it was feelin good so of course ima take all of the dick, you actually knew what you was doin”

He set the blunt on the nightstand an clapped the lights off, he slid down in the bed. He wanted to have they body touchin and be close to her , he put his arm around her, kissin on her neck.

”My Sex game is at the top, I been a pro at this shyt, I had to hurt you tho alil you look too damn good. I wanted you to remember this, but i aint wanna hurt you like that tho, I aint gon do that to you tho”

“……..A lot of people hurt me” She didn’t realize she had spoke out-loud and he heard her.
“What you mean?”
”Huh?”
“You said a lot of people hurt you, so how have they hurt you”
“Oh I aint mean to say that out loud I thought I was thinking that, but…..I been raped by my mom’s pimp, my mom was an addict to cain, so often times she used to leave me in the house, he use to bring her home late at night and she was so fuqqin high she didn’t know what was going on, he’d come in my room and touch me, and finally when I was 10 he rape me repeatly, almost every other day, He used to tell me I wasn’t gonna be nothing but somebody’s hoe, and layin on my back, an didn’t nobody care about me, an I actually use to listen cuz my mom didn’t care about me, drugs were here life.” I felt tears come down my cheek and I wipe them.

“My badd I aint mean to get all sensitive” She tried to laugh it off.
“You straight baby, you gotta let me know these things, If we gon try to make a relationship together you gotta let me kno all this, you aint gotta hide shyt from me”
”I just met you, an I jus let you fuqq to make it worst, you probably think ima hoe”
They both laughed.
“Naw, I can tell if somebody a hoe or not, an you not one. I don’t think I could have waited to much longer, cuz yo shyt good as fuqq mami.”
“You so nasty” she laughed. He smiled and kissed her lips, she kissed him back. As they kept stealing kissed from each other.

“I would neva guess you was so sweet” she said admiring his face.

”Yeah, but don’t under estimate me I can get ruthless at times”

“Dats what I be tryna tell people, I seem nice but once you piss me off an make me snap its another story, Im ready to beat sum ass or kill you which ever one come first”

“You aint gotta worry about that now, Ima make sure I protect you from everybody. This shyt is weird tho, I aint neva fell for no girl and now every since I met you earlier, you made me change. I aint had a relationship since I choke that hoe BreAnna”

She look like “what the fuqq” but she didn’t say anything about his last comment she just kept the conversation going.

“ I mean we aint gotta rush into nothing we can take all this slow and get to know each other more, before we ended up going to fast.”

“Fasho mami, I gotta get back to the streets tho in the morning so I might have to drop you off early in the morning”

”Fasho, nite”

She turned back over on her side and they fell asleep, he woke her up around 7:30 am he was already dressed he put his black Ackedemic Jacket on, his black dickies was crispy and new, with his black tims. And hat turned to the side.

“Wake up baby girl”

She took a long stretch and sat up in the bed, looking over at his clock and seen it said 7:32 am. She wipe her face and started putting her clothes back on.

“Look at that hair girl” He laughed and mess it up some more by running his fingers through it.

“Shut-up its yo fault, why it’s like this”

“Aww im sorry baby, cmere”

She put her coat on and walk up to him and kissed. She put her arms around him and his found a way down to her waist and rested his hands on her ass.

“When ima get to see you again?” She whined not wanting to let go of him.

”Im not sure, you kno I gotta put in work so ima hit you up when im done” He kissed her again.

“Alright, I guess” She opened up the door and walk outside, it was trying to get warm, it was still a little chilly but that’s how the weather was in new york.

“Can I drive?” She smiled at him, and kiss his cheek and said please.

“Iight but be careful with my baby, It must be something I really like about you I aint neva let nobody drive my car, specially no female”

“That’s because im not like these otha females, so that’s why you with me.”

She got in on the driver side as he got on the passenger, and she pulled off. She went back to Shonae house.

“Iight see you lata boo”

”Fasho mami”

They switch sides, he watched her walk in the building. Called Mack and Pierre and told them he on his way, he turned his music up so his sounds was loud as he sped off.


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Chapter 3
Everyday it seem like I was cheating fuqqin death. I took a chance everytime I made a deal wit nyggas, I had to get my mind off of Carmiesha and get back into focus on the game. I saw Mack, Pierre and Junior pull up. I got out the car and walk up to them.

“You got the money?” Ralow asked smoking blunt.
“Hell naw dis dumb muthafuqqa lost $2500 worth of work.” Mack said mad as hell he looked at junior and rolled his eyes.

”HOW THE FUQQ YOU LOOSE ALL DAT B?!” Ralow became heated by the second. Q-Dub had gave them $5000 worth of dope, and him loosin half couldn’t get they next package to sell. Before anybody Ralow money came first. And when you fuqq with his money, you basically spitting in his face and sayin fuqq him. He started grimmin him.

“Man I don’t kno, I was chillin wit Ciara at her crib and I got drunk at the club and….” Pierre cut him off in his sentence.

”Man fuqq all them damn excuses, that bytch took that shyt, you kno she a fuqqin addict anyway, now we don’t get fuqqin payed and this nygga want his shyt on time, I swear you always fuqqin shyt up.” Pierre yelled causing some of Q-Dub people to look out window.

“Junior, Look B im tryna keep from beatin that ass, so jus shut the fuqq up. How much everybody got on them?” He looked at everybody.

“I got 2 G’s, I left the rest at the house” Junior said.

“Give everything that’s in yo pockets nygga since you the one lost the shyt.” Pierre looked at him, an junior started grimmin him back.

“Look I kno I lost the shyt but nygga you keep disrespectin me and its gonna be a muthafuqqin problem! Yo B I aint fuqqin playin, i put that on my mother” Junior waited for a reply but before anybody said anything Mack spoke.

“Man yall shut the fuqq up yall both sound like sum bytches. Yall still fightin over that bytch from the club.” Mack laughed and got the money from junior

“Just give me the damn money I’ll add to it, stop acting like bytches ” Ralow grab the money from him. The building was dark in the first hallway. It was like going through a maze. It had doors all over, the ones that they pass were open. They had people in one room just playin cards, and watchin the game. Another one they had a girl stripping, Junior tried to stop and mack grab him by the back of his shirt. And pulled him back in line.

“Stop always tryna chase sum ass, an get this money” Mack started getting irritated with him.

Ralow looked at him, shook his head and kept walking. Finally what seemed like an eternity of walking they finally got to Q-Dub office. He was sitting in a big black chair, with a one girl on his lap while another braided his hair and he smoked his cigar. He had two man guarding the door that had ak-47’s with them. His pitbull was chained up and was barking right next to him.

“ Whats good with you Lo, Mack, Junior and P?” He gave all of them dap as they moved further in the office.

“Whats good with u B? Ralow said as he sat down. And Mack, Pierre and junior watched around them makin sure everything was straight.

“Everythang is the same, you got something for me B” He put the cigar out and sat forward in the chair.

Ralow passed the envelope to him and he open it and a smile ran across his face, as he flip through the money. Even though Ralow knew he was scandalous he still knew business would always come with the work he kept giving him. He hadn’t really did anything to him but he was waiting for the day that he would ever cross him in any way.

“See that’s why I like doing business with you my nig, you always make sure my shyt on time and have keeping everything in order” He laughed and put the money in his pocket and signaled one of his body guards to get 6 duffle bags from the back. They brought it back out.

“ You know you gave us 6” Ralow said.

“Yeah, that’s a gift for getting my shyt out in the streets for me, Yall always get this shyt done so I gotta take care of fam, Yall keep that” He stood and Ralow stood and they dapped and hugged.

“ What the fuqq you lookin at yo” Junior mugged Q’s girlfriend brother Waun.


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“You bytch!” He spat back at him.

“What the fuqq you better lower that fuqqin tone B” Mack said and Ralow & Pierre sat the bag down and posted up on him. standing real close in his face

“Yall calm that shyt down, I got this” Q-Dub said

“nygga I’ll fuqq yo ass up, soft ass nygga” He said.

“Yall chill out, I gott em. WAUN! Get the fuqq out here before I kill yo stupid ass disrespectin my nyggas like that.” Q slapped him on back of the head.

“Don’t be fuqqin touchin…..” Q cut him off in the middle of his sentence.

“bytch did you not hear what the fuqq I just told you, Get yo bytch ass out of my office…..matter of fact take that hoe ass nygga to the chamber, I got something for yo ass. Ima get at yall later” He gave them dapped and they left.

They got out to the car, mack got in the car with Ralow. Pierre and junior rode together back to Mack house. When they pulled up he seen Shonae car parked outside.

“Aint that shay car” Ralow pointed.

“Hell yeah, how the fuqq she get in my house is what I wanna kno” Mack said as he got out the car and went in the house. They quickly followed behind him. When they got in they were all sitting on the couch watching t.v.

“Why are you in my house, I den tol yo ass” He put his keys on the table and went to his bedroom to count his money. She laughed and kept braiding neci hair. Meisha was laying on the couch sleep, he walked over to the couch and hit neci head first. And sat next to her. He leaned over her and started to whisper the things they did last night in her ear, she started smiling in her sleep.

“You like that don’t you?” He said seductively. He saw the hickies that was on her neck. He kissed again in the same spot. She woke up and focus her eyes on him.

“Whats up sleepy head, I see you feeling the effects” He looked at her and they kissed

“The effects of what?!” Shonae asked being nosy as always, if it wasn’t her it was niecy.

Miesha looked at her like you already know. And a smile reached from one side of her face to the other side. And niecy had to add her two cents in.

“I thought you don’t deal with females, thought they were all out for ya money, I started too think it was a cover up cuz u was a gay”

He started grimmin her, then he got up and back slap her in the mouth like a child. She grab her mouth and tried to catch the blood coming out of her mouth.

“What the fuqq is wrong with you bytch, you den forgot yo muthafuqqin place huh? You want me to remind you of where you use to be, you kno better than to fuqqin disrespect me” He yelled at her as he grab her throat and choke her and back slapped her in the mouth again. more blood spread.

“Ralow, stop she didn’t mean it, she alil tispy, be cool please” Miesha said. But at that point he didn’t care what nobody said he was focus on what he was going to do to her. but slowly released the hold he had on her you could see the prints of his hands on her neck he squeeze so tight. Mack, Pierre, and junior came out the room when they heard all the noise.

“Whats going on, where the fuqq all that damn blood come from?!” Mack yelled.

“fuqq you, you not gon beat my ass nomore, I den tol u” Niecy yelled back as the blood fell out her mouth. she tried to get up and swung on him.
At that point miesha was looking at both of them like “What the hell?”

"What the fuqq that suppose to mean?!" She looked at him but he didnt look back at her he was worried about killing niecy first and dealing with her later.

Niecy gained balance and started swinging and each time she missed he jus stood there looking at her, he had a hatred for her. Miesha and Shonae grab her and moved her away from him and took her in the bathroom to try and clean her up.

"Yall betta clean this shyt up and hope it come up, cuz i dont need no type of police in this bytch thinkin something happen." Mack said while over it so he wouldnt step in it.

"Damn you fuqq her up, she need it tho she got too much fuqqin mouth" Pierre said as he sat down in the chair

"I tried to tell her alot of times stop fuqqin with me and you see how bytches act, you gotta take force with hoes like her. Dumb bytch" he was mad but started to calm down when he smoked a blunt, if you havent notice thats how he deals with everything through weed.


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3XC3LL3NT ADD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU COULD R3ALLY S3LL SOM3 BoOKS'Z iF YOU WANT3D!! ii F3LT LiK3 ii WAS TH3R3....3XC3LL3NT!!!!! BUMP iT UP!!!!!!!!!!

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Chapter 4

Its been 4 months since all that has happen and miesha hasn’t really talked to Ralow in a while. They would talk occasionally on the phone, she had moved into her on place. she had asked niecy a lot of times has her and Ralow ever been together, she said no but then explained that he was her pimp for awhile because she needed the money. But denied anything else abut him, miesha felt it was more to it, but considering they had been bestfriends since diaper days, and she never lied to her about anything, she believe her.
Her new place was really nice she had a two bedroom. That was roomy enough for her she didn’t need a lot of room cuz it was just her, she decorated it real nice she had a queen size bed in her room it was black, red and gold. She had got a job being a beautician she was real good at doing hair. So her God-Mom Yolanda aka Yo-Yo gave her a job down at her shop. In up-town Harlem where everybody came to get there hair done. She was getting ready to go home, she had been there since 7o’clock am, she was ready to just chill and get ready to hit the club with neci, shay and Jodi later. And since it was only 5:45pm she still had time to just chill out. The shop had closed early today because Yo-Yo had a wedding to go too. As she was pulling up to her house she seen Ralow car sitting across the street he was smoking a blunt.

I tried to act like I didn’t see him so I kept walking but him being the way he was he wasn’t going to let that shyt go, I had been avoiding him for a while, and even when we talk I would keep it short and sweet. He got out the car and started walking up to me.

“Carmiesha! I kno you hear me girl” He yelled my name so loud, people were starting to look to see what was going on. I almost laughed but I kept my composure.

“Why are you causing a scene? Jus come inside” I said not really in the mood for any problems.

“I was coming in anyway, you gon talk to me, im tired of this avoiding shyt” He always let his arrogance get in the way, but I wanted to see him anyway.

We walk inside and went up the fist 7 stairs and reached my apartment door. I open the door and he grab my waist as we walked in.

“Im luvin that outfit boo, who you tryna impress cuz I aint been around” he said as he followed her into the room.

”I bought this cuz I like it” she said as she started to change into her pajamas.

“Why you got a fuqqin attitude?” he looked at her tryna be mad but instead his eyes followed down her body.

“Cuz I still aint forgot about that stuff with you and neci I think it was more to that, and you aint called me in a month so why come over now.”

“Because I wanted to check on my baby, I miss yo ass. You don’t miss me?”

” …..Yeah I do, but you jus not about to play me, and jus be tryna get sum ass.”

“Hold up dont even try to fuqqin play me like that if that’s all I wanted from you I would have tol yo ass that jus how I tell these hoes in the streets. That night when we was talking I was bein real”

She got into her white beater and her red lil mama shorts, her new all white/red ecko socks and her house shoes. He took off his coat and his shoes. He had on his all black tee, an all black jogging pants, and hat. She had a thing for nyggas who wore all black, it was something about it the drew her attention.

“Im bout to go to sleep. So umm”

“Im bout to go to sleep too”

She went in the kitchen and he laid back in the bed, he like the way it felt. It actually felt like he had a home soon as his head hit the pillow. She came back in and crawled on top of him sitting directly on his manhood. Leaning forward kissing his face he held her hips close to him.

“You know I miss you” She said to him.

“I know baby, but you already kno you my girl, I don’t want no other nygga walking up in this muthafuqqa. Unless you want the nygga to die, I kno these nyggas out here aint gon wanna do nothing but hurt u and I be damn if I let somebody do that to you.”

“If I consider we together I want you to be here with me every night, I wanna hold you and feel you by me I be scared coming home at night and don’t nobody be here.”

“So why you don’t be calling me, so I can come over and be with you, you know I would come”

”I kno, but I be knowin you be out makin money, and I aint think you cared about me like that so I jus stay to myself”

“What?!” He looked at her with a real serious look on his face she didn’t kno what was about to happen.

“Hol up, first off u always can call me when you need me. No matter what ir may be I don’t care if you call me everyday needin something call me. I told you I care about you, Its almost to fuqqin lovin yo ass if it wasn’t for that bytch neci. But real talk ima be here for you”

She grab his face before he could say anything else. And kiss him, she pulled him on top of her. And they did there thing non stop. Till the morning came. She laid their in bed his arms was around her she tried to get up to go to the bathroom but his arm press harder when she moved.

“ Where you going” he said with his deep voice, his eyes stayed closed.

” To the bathroom” She pushed his hand and got out of bed. She peed quick and long because she held it for a long time trying not to disrupt her sleep. She got back in the bed and laid back down. She curled up next to him trying to find a warm spot it was cold in the house.

“ I like being this close to you” she made sure there was no spaces between them.

“ aww..I like bein close to you too baby. What you have a dream about last night?”

”Why you say that?”

“ Because for one you kept kickin me and almost hit my nuts, and because you kept screamin sayin my name like you was trying to find me.”

” Oh I had a dream somebody had tried to take you away from me and I was fighting some man telling him to stop and let you go and they lock me in this room it was crazy.”

“Aww you be tryna protect me ma, that’s why I love yo ass, you my down ass girl. I would go to the end of the world for you “ he said finally opening his eyes an kissed her cheek and got up to go to the bathroom.

When he came out she had turned the t.v on and was watching “ I got the hook up”


“Baby can you stay with me all today please I don’t want you to leave.” She said while looking in his eyes to see if he was going to lie about it.

“ I don’t kno I gotta make this money, baby……..But since I aint miss but once I’ll stay wit you” He kissed her and she smiled happy to hear his answer.

“Thank you boo” She laid on his chest. And they watch t.v. They were chillin, just relaxing when her phone rang and it was Angel her cousin.

“Hello?” Carmiesha spoke through the phone not knowing what the number was

“ Hey cuz whats good withchu? Dis Angel”
She said real loud and happy to hear Carmiesha voice.

“Angel, hey girl, what you been up too?

“I gotta tell you sum shyt cuz and ask for a favor, can you meet me at somewhere.”

”Yeah fasho, what time?” She sat up in the bed and he looked at her.

“Can you meet me now its important?”

”Yeah, um…. Meet me at Rozlins soul food restaurant, uptown”

”Alright fasho, thanks cuz”

”No prob, I be there in like 20 mins”

”Okay,luv ya”

“Luv you 2, bye.” She hung up and then got of the bed and started looking for a outfit in her closet. He looked at her and waited for her to look at him back.

“Where you going?” Ralow said sitting up in the bed.

“ Angel need me real quick she said its important. I’ll be right back just stay here.”

” Angel? Angel who?”

”My cuzzin angel you don’t know her, well….you might her last name is wright. She use to live with me when we were younger.”

“ Naw I don’t know her” He laid back down

“You gon wait for me right” She said giving him a sad face.

“Yeah baby, I told you imma chill wit you for the day” he smiled and stood up to give her a kiss.

“ Thank you snookies” she kissed him back

She put her clothes on and shoes she put on her baby phat outfit. And her all white high top nikes to go with it and her jacket to match grab her purse and keys and left out the door. She met her over at restaurant when she got in she spoted her sitting down at a back table she looked a mess, she still manage o pull it off tho. She lucky we were half phillipino or else she would have been fuqqed.


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AWWW ii LiK3 HiM...H3 R3MiND M3 OF MAH 3X!! BUMP iT UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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updating now

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ii LiKE tHiSz St0Rii AL0t...BUMP it UP ASAP....itSz 10x's BEttER tHAN MY St0Rii BUt itSz MAH 1St
ANYWAY...BUMP


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Sorry i been away ima start adding tonight to these stories!
7/30/08


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