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y/n and o story - love me post #1  quote:



this is my first story everyone
tell me what you think

cast:
y/n - De
Omarion aka O
sha - rell
ke - dru

yn: '' i love him but it hurts sooo much. It shuldnt b like this. Sorry i shuld introduce myself ... im y/n and my boyfriend is De, we be going out for like forever. My bestie sha is in love with rell and my other gurl ke is goin out my brother dru. and then there is O, one of my bestfriends, who is the biggest playa but the girls still love him! My parents left me and dru when we were young, and dru took care of me on his own. Me n dru are close and he is very protective of me ... only if they all knew ....''

bump if u all like !!!!
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post #2  quote:

GoOD START! BUMP iT UP AND DONT FORG3T TO R3AD MAH STORY!
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post #3  quote:

im going to add soon promise
bump bump bump bump !!!!
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post #4  quote:

GiRL WHAT U WAiTiNG FOR?? BUMP THiS'Z SHYT UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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post #5  quote:

OK immma add now!
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well here i go ... let me noe wat u all think!
..................................

yn – good morning dru! I see ur home for once
dru – shut up lil sis. You ready for school?

Dru and de are graduating this year. Yn, sha, rell, o and ke all graduate next year

Yn – I cant believe this is ur last year!
Dru – yea me to. But u better keep your grades up
Yn – my grades are up dru. U noe that. Lets go!

Yn and dru get in dru’s car and go to school

AT SCHOOL

Yn goes to class and sits with her bestie sha, they talk all through class and muck around as always. And they end up getting a detention

At lunch dru walks up to yn and sha

Dru – yn! Wat is this I hear about u getting a detention??
Sha – dru calm down. Its just a detention

Rell, ke and o walk up

O – hey girl
Yn – hey boy
Ke – dru baby wats wrong?
Dru – yn gott a detention!
O – oh foreal?
Yn – yea me and sha got one
Rell – me and o got one to! PARTY
Yn and sha – hahaha
Dru – ke ill wait for u after school. Can someone give yn a ride home? Yn don’t be going anywere with de!

At detention
Teacher – I have sum stuff to do so NO TALKING. Ill be back to check on u all! (he leaves)
Rell – he going to **** that science teacher
Everybody – lol

Yns phone ringing :baby grind on me:

Yn – hello
De – hey baby were u at?
Yn – detention
De – wtf for?
Yn – I didn’t do nufin
De – u goin to come over later?
Yn – I cant. Dru wants me home
De – ohh come on. I wanna ***
Yn – I cant de!!
De – u will regret this!!!! (hangs up)



welll i noe its a bit short i will add more soon ... but u all gotta let me noe wat u think!
BUMP BUMP BUMP
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so wat u all think??

BUMP
BUMP
BUMP
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bump
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post #9  quote:

BUMP iT UP...K33P GOiN
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bump this up it's keturah
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