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post #31  quote:

BUMP

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post #32  quote:

this is the next story i update

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post #33  quote:

ok gurl plz hurry cuz i wanna kno wat happens next

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Pimp:Why you say that?
Rachel:Nothing, u should keep yo hoez in check
Pimp:thats enough talk about her come give me wat i came for.

She smirk as they fell back on the bed. Later on that night they all came one by one meeting up at the block party it was crazy hype, they all met they crews

When niyah seen nique get out of thug car wit him and she started walking over

Angel:Look at that bytch
Yoshi:where the fuqq she goin holdin that bottle.......(She watch her and then seen nique) O hell naw cmon bytch
Angel:O FUQQ!

They took off they heels and was down to their socks as they ran down to nique when niyah swung and hit nique ova the head with it. and nique fell against thug car, and she turn quickly and started fighting niyah, they was throwin bows everywhere and yoshi, angel came up and started tagg teaming her ass, when keturah ran ova and jumped in the fight, and it took alot to try to get all them apart, at first thug didnt do nothing he watch them fight but when he seen they kept hitting his truck, him and 2 other boyz name reese, antwon help him get them apart, just as they were arguing rachel and pimp came up.

Carmen:Im tired of this bytch real talk

She start walking toward the back of her

Carmen:Niyah bytch
She grab her by the back of her hair and niyah was getting out of her grip giving her as many hits as she was giving her, they both werent stopping almost trying to kill each other, because of all the hate they had for each other was coming out.


Pimp:Damn why tonight when a nygga wanna enjoy his self

he stood in between them as keturah kept coming from the side of her eye and angel jump in and they held her back real quick so another fight wouldnt break out.

Pimp:Aye Calm dat shyt down
Carmen:Fuqq you im done,have that nasty bytch, hope she take care of you for now on too,make sure you get yo shyt out my house
Pimp:What the fuqq you say
Carmen:Nygga you heard me, you wanna be her,have that ho
Rachel:Bytch who tha fuqq iz u talkin bout i'll wope that ass again
They took rachel further down in the block party to get her and keturah, niyah calm

Carmen:Bytch u got dat azz beat, rewind dat shyt ho, and fuqq you like i said u sorry azz nygga,im glad i got dat shyt done


He was about to hit her when thug and smooth started talking to him convincing him not to do it. She snatch the necklace off he bought her for her birthday earlier this year and threw it at him as the diamonds bust on the ground, and she walk away

Nique:Fuqq him
Angel:We gotta get you to a hospital you need stitches back their
Carmen:You probably need butterfly stitches its not that bad, I cant believe dat muthafuqqa and that dumb bytch rachel i swear next time i see her imma blow her shyt out
Nique:Imma make sure dat ho get her shyt fareal, that ho snook me
Carmen:We was coming tho, I didnt kno who she was walkin up to wit that bottle then i seen you and me and angel took off running
Angel:I dont kno wat the fuqq keturah thought she was doing that why she got her azz beat too, i should go back and find that bytch again

They reach they car,and went to the hospital,thug called her phone

Nique:WHAT!?
Thug:Why you got an attitude wit me
Nique:Cuz of you not keepin yo bytches unda control
Thug: Man I aint got nothin to do wit that,Im just tryna see if you okay
Nique:.....Im okay ....bye

She hung up without him getting another word in, just as she hung up pimp called carmen phone,but she just let it ring. Once they got to the hospital she got 4 stitches on the back of her neck and they left and went back home. for the night.



Keturah,Niyah, Rachel


Keturah:I cant believe them dumb ass ho'z
Niyah:I swear imma kill nique I hate that bytch
Rachel:Naw wait till i get a hold of carmen
Keturah:Angel bout to get it im tellin you she bet not let me catch her by herself
Rachel:And pimp azz jus gon stand there and aint do shyt when he seen the bytch comin
Niyah:See I told you stop fuqqin wit him, all of them nyggas aint nothin but a fuqqin problem

They went to they car and left to go home, 10 mins later the whole block party got shut-down by the police because some drunk ass fools had to start shooting,and fuqq up the whole party. The next day came and they went back to half way normal wasnt none of the girls really talking except smooth and keturah, and smooth and angel, neither one could stay madd at him for long. Thug knock at niyah door


Niyah:What do you want
Thug:I cant come in baby
Niyah:Hell naw
Thug:Girl move im coming in

He push past her anyways and she started cussing him out

Thug:Baby just let me explain plz
Niyah:Explain wat
Thug:Just sit down right here wit me for a sec damn
She sat down and he put his arm around her even tho she tried to pull away she ended up falling back into his trap of lies, fell for him again. Once he got her straighten out he left at the right time and went to their house,when he got in he seen pimp and smooth layed out on seperate couches watching the game and smooth on the phone with ketruah, while pimp was trying to get carmen to talk to him again but she kept hanging up.

gotta go hope this will hold till tomorrow


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post #35  quote:

GoOD ADD MAMAS'Z!! THAT FiGHT WAS'Z CRAZii THoO!! BUMP iT UP!!!!!!!!!!

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post #36  quote:

bump this up

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post #37  quote:

Buuump!

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post #38  quote:

bumpz

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Talking post #39  quote:

This is hottt!!!!!! BUMP BUMP BUMP BUMP BUMP BUMP




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post #40  quote:

wooooooooo!


Chrissiefizz is growing up guys.
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post #41  quote:

BUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMPPPPPPPPPPPP
PPPPPPP


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post #42  quote:

Bump Buump BumpBUMPBUMPBUMPBUMP BUMP




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post #44  quote:

BUMPz

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