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post #31  quote:

Solitude is my only friend
With her, I am safe
Her quietness will never hurt
And she always welcomes me in.

Kris R.
12 May 2005



:::>^..^<::: ~*~The Journey is more important than the end or the start~*~ :::>^..^<:::
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Where do I begin
Here, or at the end
The words make no sense
I'm drowning
Falling
Pushed away
Left alone
Trying to climb
Don't know how
Alone
Die


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post #33  quote:

Bleeding
Crying
Alone
Dying

I've broken her spirit
and shattered her heart
I've left her without hope
and no where to start

Where does she go
To whom does she grasp
Will someone please help her
A hand given her to clasp

Save her
Help her
Fill her
Love her

Forever........

Kris R.
12 May 2005



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Kris

You are writing the same words that lie within my own heart.



sometimes I just....................
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Becker... do you write? You should.


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Kris,

Your words are very much felt. You have a way with words.

Have you considered submitting your work to a poetry publication? Each year, a new version of the "Poetry Market" is released. If you have time, it may be something that would interest you.





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No, I've never really considered it... I don't know how I would feel about doing that. I just don't think that it's THAT good. But, I will see.... where should I look?


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Kris Rucker said this in post #35 :
Becker... do you write? You should.



http://www.inreview.com/showthread....166&forumid=414


Start at post # 10 "Poodle and the Invisible Girl"



sometimes I just....................
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No, I've never really considered it... I don't know how I would feel about doing that. I just don't think that it's THAT good. But, I will see.... where should I look?


It's such a personal form of self-expression. Poetry is like painting a picture with words. Some people are able to see the picture being painted, but some are incapable.

There's always a market for it somewhere. One essential book for professionals, freelancers and aspiring writers alike is: The annually updated "Writer's Market" They have a wealth of information and guidelines for querying publishers, then submitting your work. It's filled with contact information, too.

Whatever you decide to do, good luck!




http://www.amazon.com/exec/obidos/t...526353?v=glance


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Thank you!!!


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