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Your very welcome beck, just speaking the truth


May the wind always be at your back and the sun always upon your face, and the winds of destiny carry you aloft to dance with the stars.
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Very good, Becker!


Have any more stories you feel like sharing?




I would love to read a story of yours...Animals? Maybe?


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Bad Becker


You will thank me for not posting it!





Art Appreciation
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Re: My very first stab at fiction writing. post #34  quote:

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Here goes..I hope someone will like this short story.. I will write it in installments, and continue on later....

She shone the flashlight into the wooden crate. She couldn't see anything. She slowly inched her hand into the box.
Something closed on her hand. Something hot, wet, and very sharp.
She tried to get her hand out. The something held firmly.

Poodle And The Invisible Girl

by Becker....

Alexandra was running scared. Only she couldn't run. Alexandra was strapped to the operating room table.

"I hope this surgery is necessary. Doctor Baron said there is something inside of me that shouldn't be there."

A needle pricked her arm.

"Begin counting back from 99." Alexandra saw blurred green clad people at her sides.

She heard Doctor Baron saying.."Nothing to fear, Alexandra. Everything will be all right."

Alex started counting "99-98--97" and drifted off.

A summer storm raged outside United Hospital. Loud thunder. Erratic lightning. Noah's Ark kind of rain. Doctor Baron held a scalpel over Alex. His hand lowered. Lights dimmed and went out. the hospital was dark. backup generators failed. All activity ceased.



To be cont.........



Here is the first installment


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Re: My very first stab at fiction writing. post #35  quote:

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becker said this in post #10 :
Here goes..I hope someone will like this short story.. I will write it in installments, and continue on later....

She shone the flashlight into the wooden crate. She couldn't see anything. She slowly inched her hand into the box.
Something closed on her hand. Something hot, wet, and very sharp.
She tried to get her hand out. The something held firmly.

Poodle And The Invisible Girl

by Becker....

Alexandra was running scared. Only she couldn't run. Alexandra was strapped to the operating room table.

"I hope this surgery is necessary. Doctor Baron said there is something inside of me that shouldn't be there."

A needle pricked her arm.

"Begin counting back from 99." Alexandra saw blurred green clad people at her sides.

She heard Doctor Baron saying.."Nothing to fear, Alexandra. Everything will be all right."

Alex started counting "99-98--97" and drifted off.

A summer storm raged outside United Hospital. Loud thunder. Erratic lightning. Noah's Ark kind of rain. Doctor Baron held a scalpel over Alex. His hand lowered. Lights dimmed and went out. the hospital was dark. backup generators failed. All activity ceased.



To be cont.........




More to come....


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