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rhyme form...... post #1  quote:



lyrics from "The Omega Code"



remember when Mike asked Kay "Who's being naive"?
the realest script was outlined in the deepest degrees
it ain't easy to breath while saving for water bills
sons and daughter's killed speeches delivered with fog as shields
it's all a thrill the game of life everytime is snake eyes
seems it beats the crap out everyside will take lives
soylent green with unheard of ish labled "preservatives"
addative material laced makin my nervous twitch
accessable raise the decibles man ya'll don't hear me
best departed in this ish damn i loved them dearly
and i miss you like the camoflauged riskin their lives
twenty to die instead of strugglin aimin for sixty-five
man, there wasn't just five families there was always a sixth
always so slick godfather's labled "presidents" hallways will drip
with youth's blood take it as truth cause the future's dyin
modern rome exposed as oceans rising and my scripts flyin
change the tide and i confide i'll solemnly stand strong
outshine the propoganda and command each man strong
travel on past babylonian laws and decrees
'til they fall and retreat, i'll leave this all for my seeds




thanks for reading.....




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That was great! I liked it a lot!

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me too.. very origional

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Deep and different ... have you any more ?

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VERY NICE

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