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New place new ppl...... new lover post #1  quote:



my very first story so plz enjoy

characters

y/n
Jarell
Raz
Omari
Tanya
Tiffany:Tiff
chris
Jeff
Rick
Karmel
Cindy
Mary



Its starts off in southern Canada where y/n is first moving in to a new city knowing nothing at all to where she is heading and who she is heading for.the who is her lover, whom will take her breath and always make her smile. at first both indenial but truley love could not be lied about so hear me out.

y/n: Mom, i really hope this works out
Mom: Don't worry hun, i feel this place is it
y/n: Yeah mom you siad dat about our last place. could we ever stay in one god **** place!
Mom: Sweety i know we have been running a long time to find the right place but hun trust me on this one, this place is where i grew up, this ia acutally where i found my first love, where i met you dad.


( to say y/n's dad died 7 years back, and they keep on running cuz Mom falls in love with the wornge guys and they take all dem angers out on y/n)


y/n: ew mom stop!well i know ani't no guy gunna love me, cuz iam too deep, and iam shy and plus mom they are ALL gounna get my friendly vibe.

as they get out og the mving truck y/n stares at her new house for the first time. Nice place and manly cute boys everywhere. but there one. one standing out.Just unbeliveable. y/n know a girl named tiffany(but we'll call her tiff). she and her go back to diper days!

Tiff' y/n hey baby girl how you doing!
y/n: Tiff girl omgsh this is kool haven't seen you in forever!
Tiff:I know, well this is your new home, and girl will u have a blast here, manly cuz of dem boyz. I know this guy....
y/n: Tiff! come on girl i haven't even unpacked yet!

but that guy y/n last saw she was still thinking. he was gorgeous. beautiful skin nice eyes hot clothes and a hot ass boy...

POV of y/n: WOAH i don't even know him... i shouldn't nvm.

Tiff: hey yo boys come here and help(calling out to her friends)
(but that guy y/n was checking out also came. Tiff knew him!?)




is it good so far!? trust me it's gunna have a twisted side to it. TURST ME! but is it good so far?



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post #2  quote:

Y3AH iTS'Z GoOD!! BY TH3 WAY MAH NAM3 iS'Z MONiQU3...

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Raz: Hey yo Tiff wats your homegirls name?
Tiff: Guys this is y/n.
Y/n: Nice to meet yall.
Jeff: Yo y/n, where u from?
Y/n: Oh uhm iam from....... Alberta.
Rick: (by the way he's the hottie y/n was chekcing out) Uhm my name is Rick
didn't quite get your name....
y/n: Oh my name is y/n (in a flritty way)
Rick: well y/n, you look might fine, welcome and uhm need help moving in?
y/n yeah uhm sure.
(everyone is staring at both of em, knowing they both have something for each other)

(tiff pulls y/n to the side)

Tiff: OOO LA LA someone is feelin Rick!
y/n: come on Tiff, i don't even know the guy! we JUST met remember?!
Tiff: um uhm, alright there girl i known you for long, i see you staring in him eyes and playing with yo hair girl.!!!!
Y/n: Come on girl i think he's hot in al... but let me know the guy betta!.

( they go back to everyone eles so is helping unpack, and getting things from the moving truck)

Rick: Hey yo y/n where does this box go?
Y/n: In my bedroom.
Rick: and that is.... where?
Y/n: Uhm i dunno yet wanna help me choose a room?

( he puts the box down and they both walk in the house looking at each room)

Rick: hey this room look great!
Y/n: YEAH. i think its awosme i guess this is my new room!
Rick: Hahaha. niice now i could watch you form my room see (he points to his bedroom across the street where noth bedrooms are horizontial)
Y/n: Oh well...... that'll be fun. thank you. how could i ever thank you?
Rick: Oh no problem! u could thank me by letting me show u around this place. and after we could go to this beautiful resturant, you know i'll show u around and account u with ppl? so how about it?
Y/n: uhm i'd love to go. but i'll need to be finished my packing and maybe,.
Rick: well you think about it, we'll have fun
Y/n: Sure i'll come


P.O.V of y/n: OMG HE ASKED ME OUT! already! OH MY GOD i can't belive thisssss! he is SO HOT!

(they both join the others)

---- 2 weeks later----

Y/n's phone rings

Y/n: Hello
Tiff: Hey, wats up?
y/n: Tiff theer is something i need to tell you something!
Tiff: What?
Y/m: You knwo the day i came?
Tiff: Uhm yeah why?
Y/n: Remember how Rick and i were upsratis choosing a bedroom?
Tiff: Oh yeah to bad there was no BED! ahahaha
Y/n: Shut up. Uhm he asked me out
Tiff: Omg yeah he told me but i didn't belive him. God Y/n he is so into you girl. u have to go!
Y/n: He's into me...????
Tiff: Yeah when we left that night he couldn't stop talking about you... everything was she's gunna be a great girl. she's gunna love this place. I can't wait to get to know her and so on.
Y/n: awww, well i will go and were going out tonight! Well i gotta go and think about what i'll waer bye baby girl
Tiff: Good luck and don't do anything i wouldnt' do!
Y/n: Tiff! its nour first date! Come on!
Tiff: haahha! love u girl pyc!

( both girls hang up and Y/n gets dresses)

(The door bell rings, and y/n gets it)

Y/n: hey Rick (giving him a hug)
Rick: Hey y/n.... your looking great!
Y/n: Why thank you.. and so do you.
Rick: So you ready?
Y/n: Yes.

This is all i got for now! how is it?


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post #4  quote:

GoOD K33P iT GOiN GiRL...AND CAN YOU CH3CK OUT MAH STORY ToO??

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( they both get into the car)

Rick: So... Where u think u wanna see first?
Y/N: uHm, i dunoo remember u were supossed to show me around?
Rick: I know just anywhere in paerticular?
Y/n: Uhm lets go to the mall first?
Rick: Well, that ani't such a bad idea.

(They arrive at the mall)

Y/n: Hey lets check out this store i need some new bras, but u don't have to come.
Rick: Hey! who said i didn't ( with a lil laugh)
Y/n: ( Going thorugh everything and finds only one) Hey how you lie dis one? (pointing to a hot red one w/ a play boy bunny on it)
Rick: I htink its hot and sexy. now lets go for dinner

( he then take s her to the most romantic resturant in the city)

Y/n: Oh god rick you didn't have tyo do this ya' know?
Rick: Hey, its my welcome gift. hope u enjoy!
Y/n: You know u a really sweet guy.
Rick: and ur a sweet girl

( both eat their dinner and get back into the car)

Rick: Now where shall we go?
Y/n: Uhm i wanna see your bedroom, remember i could see you form mine. ( in a flirtty voice)
Rick: Uhm, now lets see, so u could watch me or wat?
y/N: no so i could check you out.
Rick: Sounds ok to me

( they arrive at his home)

Y/n: Man u got a great home
Rick: Thankzz u knoe my momz is all about the decorating ****
Y/n: Now this must be your room (flopping down on his bed)
Rick: Yes it is.(flopping beside her) How u like it?
Y/n: Its awsome. Loookk ya can see mah room!( Looking out the window.

(Rick turns some music on and dima the light a lil bit)



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post #6  quote:

HA! RiCK THiNK H3 SLiCK HUH? LOL...BUMP iT UP MAMAS'Z!!

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Y/n: Hey whatchu doin'?
Rick: Tryin to get with ya.
Y/n: Really is that so mr.Romantic?
Rick: Uhm, well is it working?
Y/n: Maybe a lil bit.

( thenshe sits up on his bed and gets sits up aswell, both of em staring at each other for the longest time EVER! but that all changes when both of dem lips land on each other.Kissin each other for about 15 minutes, y/n is loving his soft and clam lips, and she don't know what she doing kissing someone she barley knew, but he was so good she kept on kissing him, then pulled herself off of him)

Y/n: WOAH, we just met, aim sorry but i need to get to know u better.
Rick: Ok.... what do u need to know?
Y/n: Everything.!
Rick: Ok well my name is Rick....
Y/n: HEY i know that i mean about your parents... got any sisters and bros?
Rick: Uhm my pops died 3 years back... my mom works ALOT her name is Tanya.. she a banker and got one bor his anme is Raz he is16 years old. and u knoe me iam rick and iam 18 years old. how bout u princess?
Y/n: first don't call me princess (laughing) well iam 18 to! and my moms name is Karmel. and my pops dies 5 years back. and i got a lil sis and her name is cindy. she is 15 years old.
Rick: well now that we know each other... wanna continue?
Y/n: You know ur a flirt.. but i like dat.

(back to kissing each other and this time he was feelin' her body up and down. He had a 4 pack, and she was fit. both make a great couple. but that when Raz walks in on dem)

Raz: Yo, Rick hold yo roll'.!
Rick: Get out.
Raz: Tisk Tisk, does mom now u gots a girl up in hur.
Rick: NO and u anit' gonna tell.
Raz: aiight whats yo name preety thang.
Y/n: My name is y/n
Raz: Mine is Raz, aim he's lil bro.
Y/n: well nice to met you Raz.
Rick: what do you need.a dn next time knock.
Raz: I was wondering if i could bring a girl home to watch a movie, but i guess its aiight cuz u two about to have sex up in here!
Rick: No we wasn't and who is she?
Raz: Oh, her anme is Mary.
Rick: Make sure yall don't go in yo bedroom.
Raz: and your talking.!

( he slams the door and you could here him laughing down the hall,and dats when you could here the door bell ring, wans't his mom, dat was a good thing for y/n. it was Mary.)

Rick: well he got his girl now. and we ani't gonna he intruuppted anymore.
Y/n: I know we ani't.

( and they kissing all over again, but dats when he take her shirt off, den her bra, and den her pants and panities. she take his clothes off and they both get under dem sheets until 10:30 and dats when Rick's mom comes home!)

Tanya: Rick! Raz! where are u boys?
Rick: **** my momz is home!
Y/n: Ya think ( jumping up and getting dressed)
Rick: Hurry she better not catch us having sex! (putting on his pants)
Tanya: Rick (coming up the staris and knocking on his bedroom)
Rick: Yeah mom hold on a sec.
Y/n: where do i go?
Rick: Go in the closet!
Tanya: (Opening the door) ............................................


......... TO BE CONTINUED!....................



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post #8  quote:

HA! LOL...BUMP iT UP!!

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Rick: hey mom Kncok!
Tanya: Uhm..... Rick hun u got some1 hur?
Rick: No mamaz, why?
Tanya: Cuz hun... there are lady panties beside yo' bed.
Rick: Oh uhm.......
Tanya: Who is she?

P.O.V of y/n: Oh gosh, iam new here, and i already am having sex with this guy i dunno.... and i never met his momz and she might get da wronge impression ov' me. ****, iam stupid like dat.

Tanya: (growing even angryer) who is she Rick?
Rick: her name is y/n
Tanya: Where is she?
Rick: She in mah closet.
Tanya: Tell lil missy to get outta mah house. RIGHT NOW!
(slamming da door)

Y/n: Why the **** u rat me out huh?
Rick: Yo my momz trust me i couldn't never do dat lying shyt to her.
Y/n: What the **** Rick. U an ass hople. iam stupid for falling for ya. Boy u got me trippin' but now... man get outta mah way. and this is my wlecome gift. i'd like to see my good bye gift! ( all teary eyed)
Rick: Y/n.. listen to me. your the only girl i EVER actaully fell for. the only girl i would ever go that far for. you gotta give me a chance.
Y/n: Why so u could then rat me out to yo' homeboyz. u ratted me out to yo momz. u know it ain't right 4 some1 to get da wronge impression.


( rick cell phone rings, then he puts it on specker)

Jeff: Hey yo Rick' howz y/n doin with you? (laughing)
Rick: Shut up.!
Jeff: when do u plan on telling her that u just using her to get another girl jealous?
Y/n: WHAT!
Jeff: Yo' u put dis bytch on speacker? how come u don't tell me. I was joking y/n
Y/n: Rick..(Crying) how could you...? Thought i was da only girl u would go this far for?
Rick: You are......
Y/n: Get outta mah face!(Running out the door) U a dirty liar!



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post #10  quote:

DAMN THAT WAS'Z MAD GRiM3Y!! BUMP iT UP!!

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post #11  quote:

bump bump bump

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Rick: (Running after her) Y/n plz come back, i could explain!
Y/n: NO! (getting in her car and driving away)

10 mins later y/n arrives at her house, to see her mom and sis watching a movie together, and runs to her room.)

Tamkia ( Y/n's mom): Honey wats wronge?
Y/n: Mom, i hate this place, i hate it already, and mom love stinks!
Tamika: Honey, wanna tell me wat happened?
Y/n: Yeah, i fell for the wronge guy!
Tamkia: And how do u know that, one thing that went wronge doesn't mean a whole lot sweetie.
Y/n: Mom. listen your like wat in your 40s'. no offence. but mom men who are in their teens tell you wat kind of person they are in the first couple of dayz u knoe em'
Tamika: So..... wat happened?
Y/n: Nothing mom.
Tamkia: Girl i knoe something happened. now r u gunna tell me or not?
Y/n: Ok mom, i had sex with him, and mom trust me we used protection, then his mom came home, and he sold me out
Tamika: Hahahaha, sweetie, this shows u that this boy of yours is honest.
Y/n: But mom. than jeff called and he put it on specker and jeff didn't know, then he said something about Rick using me to get another girl jealous.
Tamika: well this is yo mess to clean. don't go for him, your lucky you knew before ur feelings got crushed, and beofre u fell deeper into him

P.O.V of y/n: To bad i already fell for him and my feelings are already crushed! , now who is this girl gotta ask Tiff, she knows everything

(calls Tiff)

Tiff: hello
Y/n: Tiff i need to ask u something!
Tiff: Omg baby, i heard bout u and rick!
Y/n: what!??? how?
Tiff: Jeff told ever1!
Y/n: That bastard!
Tiff: Hun wat do u need to ask
Y/n: Whoz da girl rick is gunna get jealous?
Tiff: Y/n: baby theres something i need to tell you
Y/n: who is she Tiff..?
Tiff:...... \
Y/n: WHO TH **** IS SHE TIFF?
Tiff: it's me.......
Y/n: (dropping the phone and crying even harder)



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Tiff: Yo y/n where u at
Y/n: (Crying and crying then picks up the phone) OMG tiff why the **** u gotta do dat u knoe how i like him and u told me he was into me why?????
Tiff: Iam sorry y/n i just wanted him to like u so he could get over me. i wanted u to understand but listen u already caught up w/ some guy u don't even knoe!
Y/n: WHAT! how the f*** can u say dat.. u supossed to be there for me. U ARE LIAR!
Tiff: y/n listen to yo self.... fightin me over for some guy
y/n: u lied to me.!
Tiff: Listen hun iam sorry but i was trying show u dat Rick.. well he likes u and he gotta a lil thing for me... but baby listen iam sorry
Y/n: yeah wat eve cya
Tiff: Bye...



(the next morning)

Y/nwalking down staris after a shower) MOM.... MOM U HOME?
(looking around) OMG! WAT THE F****
Rick: scared you..?(sitting in her living room)
Y/n: who let you in?
Rick: Yo momz
Y/n: why....? and where is she?
Rick: went shopping... listen can we talk...?
Y/n: No ok i knoe u u got feelings for Tiff so go after her and leave me alone!
Rick: Ok i only said that to Jeff cuz well he wouldn't understand how i felt about u so i made up dat lie i actaully told every1 dat cuz no one would understand... bout how much i love u already.
Y/n: stop feeding me crap!
Rick: what..? i am not farell
Y/n: Explain yo feelings for Tiff
Rick: I got none.. well no more till i met you.. and thats coming form mah heart
Y/n: well i got nothing for you.
Rick: stop feeding me crap (getting closer to her and grabbing her hand)
Y/n: Ok i did but iam not ready for this.
Rick: (Kissing her) oh iam sorry (joking) Wat did u sayd not ready eh..?
Y/n: Uhm i might be but ok sorry. i really can't belive me rick ur a great guy but homz i jus met you
Rick: iight.. i come down hur for syht?
Y/n: No rick..... i like u.. alot but
Rick: But what
Y/n: but.. ok u couldn't even tell ur firends how much u like me that's but what
Rick: Forget dat
Y/n: No i ani't until u could tell dem how much u like me we n't anything



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I KNO3 DHATS'Z RiT3, CAUS3 AiNT NOBODii FiNNA PLAY GAM3S'Z WiTH HiS'Z ASS'Z!! FUX THAT!! BUT TiFFANY iS'Z MAD FUXiN GRiM3Y THoO!! BUMP iT UP MAMAS'Z!!!

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Rick: Iight baby girl
Y/n: Fine call em and tell em' (handing him her home phone)
Rick: Why?... What.
Y/n: I wanna see ya do it. love me so much prove it!
Rick: Can we do this later?
Y/n: No! see u and ****ing Liar. ya don't love me do ya?
Rick: I do... Listen .... fine gimma dah phone.
Y/n: Fine here. tell em why u lied to. if dats dah truth

Rick: iight.. (dialing Jeff's numbah and den he answers) hey yo Jeff..
Jeff: Hey Rick waddup?
Rick: Yo come down to y/n's crib we needah talk.
JEFF: yO wats goin on?
Rick: Just come boi.
Jeff: yo i gots me a girl her..
Rick: Who....
Jeff: Yo its Tiff
Rick: TIFF wat u a Tiff doing? damn boi...
Jeff: Yo .. don't say nun, man, yo i can't leave we doing shyt and she preety good
Rick: Yo nasty boi.. shut up and get yo ass and Tiff's ass here kay
Jeff: kay, we'll be there in a couple. Pyc
Rick: Pyc (hangs up)

Y/n: so he cumin?
Rick: Yess.
Y/n: Good
Rick: What u smiling bout?
Y/n: Uhm maybe cuz i know dat u'z loves me
Rick: See i told'z you
Y/N: (KISSING HIM) thank you baby
Rickk: (Grabbing her waste and pulling her in) No porblem andything for my baby girl.

(25 mins later jeff and Tiff walk in holing hands)

Y/n: Woah Tiff! (staring at dem holding hands)
Tiff: Girl plz.
Y/n: hey i say nothin' jus Waoh! wat yall do..?
Tiff: we had sex till u and yo nasty boi over der kill it!

Y/n: Haha, sorry baby girl
Jeff: wat yall need
Rick: Yo Jeff, uhm u knoe dat thing i told yall beofre bout me tryin get w/ another girl to get y/n jealous..?
Jeff: yeah why?
Rick: it was a lie.
Jeff: I knew dat!
Rick: What..?
Y/n: U knew it...?
Jeff: Yeah.. matter of fact we all'z did!
Rick: How come u didn't say anything?and how u knoe?
Jeff: cuz.. well we see yall talking and flirting and u knoe leaving dah group to be private all dah time.
y/n: Tiff... but u didn't knoe
Tiff: I did knoe
Y/n: den wat was wat ever dat happened last night 'bout?
Tiff: I ... it's between u two kay so leave me and jeff alone... see ya

(they walk out dah door and leave)

Rick: well now wat
Y/n: I dunno

(they start kissing)

Rick: Girl u ready now?
Y/n: Oh yeah (Taking her shirt and oants off) are you?
Rick: U wanna have sex?
Y/n: Yup



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