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N3W STORY>>Y3S'Z iM FiNALLY DOiN ON3! post #1  quote:



W3LL FiRST OF ALL, iM FROM ROCH3ST3R, N3W YORK. iTS'Z ABOUT 600 MiL3S'Z FROM N3W YORK CiTY AND TAK3S'Z ABOUT 7 HOURS'Z TO G3T TH3R3. ANYWHoO ii D3CiD3D TO WRiT3 THiS'Z STORY B3CAUS3 iT T3LLS'Z ABOUT LiF3 H3H iN TH3 "ROC" AND ii THiNK iT'LL B3 V3RY iNT3R3STiNG. TH3 CHARACT3RS'Z AR3 NAM3S'Z ii MAD3 UP BUT I'LL US3 C3L3BRiTYS iN PLAC3 FOR TH3 BOiiS'Z OKAY??

TH3 ROC'S PRiNC3SS'Z

CAST:

*SAHRiAH AG3 15 (MAiN CHARACT3R)
*SHARON (SAHRiAH'S MOM)
*TiNA (SHARON'S SiS)
*NANA (SHARON & TiNA'S MOM)
*OMARi AG3 17 (SAHRiAH'S OLD3R BROTH3R)
*AUBREY AG3 15(SAHRiAH'S B3ST FRi3ND)
*JAR3LL AG3 16(SAHRiAH'S CRUSH & B.F LAT3R ON..)
*TYRiQU3 (SHARON'S BOiFRi3ND)
*MARQU3S AG3 20 (SAHRiAH AND OMARi'S COUSiN)
*TH3 S-B-B'S( S3XY BLACK BYTCH3S'Z) ASH3LY, L3'SH3A, K3iSHA, AND BRiANA


ii THiNK THATS'Z ALL TH3 CAST OKAY SoO BASiCALLY THiS'Z STORY iS'Z ABOUT A GiRL WHoO'S LiF3 DRAMATiCALLY CHANG3S'Z WH3N H3R MOM G3TS'Z A N3W BOiFRi3ND. WiLL SH3 G3T iT TOG3TH3R OR WiLL SH3 B3 FOR3V3R LOST??

UM, ii DONT KNO3 iF TH3 D3SCRiPTiON OF TH3 STORY iS'Z GoOD 3NOUGH BUT YOU GOTTA BUMP iT UP SoO YOU CAN S33!!!


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Bumpz u kno u shoulda put ya gurl Laniyah n this but neways im finna write da first pt of my story but bump this **** up

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OKAY MAMAS'Z iM FiNNA WRiT3 MAH FiRST PART ToO BUT WOULD YOU LiK3 TO B3 ON3 OF TH3 S-B-B'S OR WOULD YOU LiK3 TO B3 H3R B3ST FRi3ND?? OKAY THiS'Z TH3 FiRST PART:

SAHRiAH: H3Y MA (WALKiN iNTO TH3 HOUS3)

SAHRiAH'S MOM WAS'Z SiTTiN ON TH3 COUCH PAiNTiNG H3R TO3NAiLS'Z.
SHARON: HOW TH3Y LoOK? (SHOWiNG OFF H3R FR3SHLY PAiNT3D TO3 NAiLS'Z)

SAHRiAH: TH3Y'R3 CUT3 BUT WHATS'Z TH3 OCCASiON? TH3 ONLii TiM3 YOU PAiNT YOUR NAiLS'Z iS'Z WH3N YOU ABOUT TO GoO SOM3WH3R3, LiK3 ON A DAT3 OR SOM3THiNG (GOiNG iNTO TH3 KiTCH3N)

SHARON: W3LL ii AM (SMiLiNG)

SAHRiAH SAT ON TH3 COUCH AND B3GAN 3ATiNG AN APPL3.
SAHRiAH: WHO'S TH3 N3W DUD3 THiS'Z TiM3 (NOT AT ALL SURPRiS3D)

SHARON:W3LL YOU KNO3 iTS'Z B33N A MiNUT3 SiNC3 ii LAST DAT3D AND W3LL ii M3T SOM3BODii

SAHRiAH: OKAY...WHO iS'Z iT? (G3TTiN iMPATi3NT)

SHARON: HiS'Z NAM3 iS'Z TYRiQU3

SAHRiAH: HOW OLD iS'Z H3, H3 SOUNDS'Z YOUNG

SHARON: H3'S ONLii 32, TWO Y3ARS'Z YOUNG3R THAN M3, ANYWAYS H3 WORKS'Z FOR TH3 COUNTY (SMiLiNG HARD)

SAHRiAH: GoOD, FiNALLY SOM3BODii WHO MAK3S'Z GoOD L3GAL MON3Y (R3F3RRiNG TO ON3 OF H3R OLD BOiFRi3NDS'Z)

SHARON: Y3AH ii KNO3 BUT ANYWAYS'Z, H3'S TAKiNG M3H OUT TOMORROW NiT3 (SMiLiNG HARD)

SAHRiAH: HOW LONG HAV3 YOU KNOWN HiM AND HOW COM3 ii N3V3R H3ARD OF HiM UNTiL NOW?

SHARON: B3CAUS3 W3 AR3 GOiN ON OUR FiRST DAT3 AND ii JUST THOUGHT ii WOULD T3LL YA'LL SiNC3 YA'LL WiLL B3 M33TiNG HiM TOMORROW. i'V3 KNOWN HiM FOR 3 W33KS'Z. HiS'Z SON iS'Z iN MAH PR3-SCHoOL CLASS'Z

SAHRiAH: WH3R3'S MARi AT?

SHARON: H3 AiNT G3T iN Y3T

SAHRiAH: OH (GOiN UPSTAiRS'Z)


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FiFT33N Y3AR OLD SAHRiAH, H3R S3V3NT33N Y3AR OLD BROTH3R OMARi, AND H3R MOTH3R LiV3D TOG3TH3R ON TH3 3AST SiD3 OF ROCH3ST3R, N3W YORK. SAHRiAH AND OMARi BOTH SHAR3D TH3 SAM3 FATH3R "JAM3S'Z" BUT AFT3R SHARON KiCK3D HiM OUT 10 Y3ARS'Z 3ARLi3R, H3 WAS'Z 3ASiLY FORGOTT3N B3CAUS3 H3 HADN'T DON3 ANYTHiNG FOR TH3M AND WASN'T K33PiNG A ST3ADY JOB FOR SHARON TO COLL3CT CHiLD SUPPORT. TO SAHRiAH, SHARON WAS'Z LiK3 TH3 MOTH3R AND FATH3R iN TH3 HOUS3HOLD BUT ON OCCASiONS'Z SH3 WOULD S33 JAM3S'Z DOWN TOWN AND H3 WOULD SP3AK AND SH3 WOULD WOND3R WHAT LiF3 WOULD B3 LiK3 iF SHARON AND HiM W3R3 TOG3TH3R. OMARi ON TH3 OTH3R HAND DiDN'T S33M AT ALL FAZ3D ABOUT NOT HAViNG A FATH3R FiGUR3 BUT SAHRiAH COULD T3LL iT AFF3CT3D HiM BY TH3 WAY H3 ACT3D. H3 WAS'Z BAR3LY HOM3, MOSTLY HANGiNG WiTH HiS'Z OLD3R COUSiN "MARQU3S" AND LAT3LY SAHRiAH B3GAN TO NOTiC3 N3W CLOTH3S'Z SH3 N3V3R SAW AND HiM FLAUNTiNG MON3Y. MARQU3S WAS'Z SHARON'S SiST3R "TiNA'S" SON. TiNA AND SHARON WAS'Z CLOS3, LiT3RALLY. TH3Y LiV3D 5 HOUS3S'Z AWAY FROM 3ACH OTH3R. TH3iR MOM "GRANDMA ANN3" OR "NANA" WASN'T MUCH LiK3 A GRANDMA. SH3 WAS'Z ACTiV3 AS'Z iF SH3 WAS'Z 20 Y3ARS YOUNG. SH3 HAD ALWAYS'Z B33N THAT WAY WHiCH ULTiMAT3LY CAUS3D H3R TO HAV3 TiNA AT TH3 YOUNG AG3 OF 14 AND SHARON A Y3AR LAT3R. NON3TH3L3SS, SH3 HAD ALWAYS B33N TH3R3 FOR BOTH OF H3R DAUGHT3RS 3V3N AFT3R TH3iR FATH3R Di3D iN A CAR ACCiD3NT WH3N TH3Y W3R3 YOUNG. THAT TRAG3DY BROUGHT TH3M CLOS3R.

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post #5  quote:

I WOULD LIKE 2 BE THE BESTFRIEND BUT IT REALLY DONT MATTA THO

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OKAY MAMAS'Z ii GOT YOU...

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I'LL POST MOR3 TOMORROW...T3LL M3H WHAT YOU THiNK SoO FAR

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Buuump I can't wait to see the plot thicken! :]] buuuump

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UPSTAiRS'Z, SAHRiAH ToOK A SHOW3R AND PUT ON SOM3 SW3ATS'Z AND A SHiRT. IT WAS'Z A THURSDAii AND SH3 HAD AN iMPORTANT T3ST TH3 N3XT DAii. SH3 ATT3ND3D B3NJAMiN FRANKLiN HiGH SKoOL AND WAS'Z iN TH3 10TH GRAD3 iN H3R FiRST Y3AR TH3R3 AND MANAG3D TO MAK3 ON3 CLOS3 FRi3ND: LANiYAH. LANiYAH DiDN'T HAV3 A FATH3R FiGUR3 3iTH3R BUT UNLiK3 SAHRiAH, SH3 WAS'Z AN ONLii CHiLD. BOTH GiRLS'Z W3R3 PR3TTY AND GOT ATT3NTiON FROM THAT ALON3 BUT STUCK TO TH3MS3LV3S'Z, iT WAS'Z B3TT3R THAT WAY. iT WAS'Z NOW MAY MOViNG TOWARDS'Z TH3 3ND OF TH3 Y3AR AND SAHRiAH WANT3D TO MAK3 SUR3 SH3 AC3D 3V3RY T3ST SoO SH3 COULD HAV3 ANOTH3R P3RF3CT R3PORT CARD WHiCH WOULD GRANT H3R A LOT OF R3WARDS'Z AT TH3 3ND OF TH3 Y3AR AWARDS'Z C3R3MONY. IF H3R MOTH3R TAUGHT H3R ANYTHiNG, iT WAS'Z TH3 iMPORTANC3 OF 3DUCATiON. H3R MOTH3R DiDN'T G3T TO FiNiSH SKoOL SoO SH3 WANT3D TO MAK3 SUR3 SH3 DiD.
AFT3R STUDYiNG SH3 PUT H3R THiNGS'Z AWAY AND JUST LoOK3D AT TH3 CLOCK. iT WAS'Z NOW GOiN ON 4:30 PM. SH3 GOT UP AND OP3N3D H3R DoOR AND H3ARD H3R MOM LAUGHiNG ON TH3 PHON3 iN H3R RoOM. SH3 W3NT DOWN STAiRS'Z AND TURN3D ON TH3 T.V. TH3N TH3 LOCK TURN3D AND OMARi WALK3D iN WiTH HiS'Z CURR3NT GiRLFRi3ND ASH3LY. ASH3LY HAD A SMoOTH CHOCOLAT3 COMPL3XiON THAT W3NT W3LL WiTH H3R LONG, J3T BLACK HAiR. SH3 WAS'Z W3LL-KNOWN AT SKoOL B3CAUS3 SH3 WAS'Z ON TH3 CH33RL3ADiNG SQUAD AND H3R AND H3R GROUP OF FRi3NDS'Z : TH3 S-B-B'S (S3Xii BLACK BYTCH3S'Z) ALWAYS'Z STAY3D DR3SS3D TO iMPR3SS'Z AND WiTH TH3iR HAiR DON3. SiNC3 OMARi WAS'Z ON3 OF TH3 B3ST ON TH3 FoOTBALL T3AM iT WAS'Z PR3TTY POPULAR HiS'Z S3LF iT WAS'Z ONLii RiT3 THAT TH3Y DAT3D. TO SAHRiAH, ASH3LY WAS'Z OKAY BUT SH3 SOM3TiM3S'Z TALK3D ToO MUCH AND WAS'Z BASiCALLY TH3 D3FiNiTiON OF GH3TTO.

ASH3LY: H3Y MAMAS'Z!! (HUGGiNG SAHRiAH TiGHT)

SAHRiAH: Hi (DRYLY AND CHANGiNG TH3 CHANN3LS)

OMARi: H3Y "RiAH" WH3R3 MOMMY?

SAHRiAH: UPSTAiRS'Z iN H3R RoOM (NOT TAKiN H3R 3Y3S'Z OFF TH3 T.V)

SHARON: WHO iN MAH HOUS3 SAHRiAH?!! (Y3LLiNG FROM UPSTAiRS'Z)

SAHRiAH: iTS'Z ONLY OMARi AND ASH3LY MA!!

SHARON CAM3 DOWNSTAiRS'Z.

ASH3LY: H3Y MS. JON3S'Z

SHARON: H3Y ASH3LY. MARi, ii N33D YOUR CAR

OMARi: WH3R3 YOU GOiN?

SHARON: OUT (TAKiN TH3 K3YS'Z OUT HiS'Z HAND AND L3AViN)

OMARi: MAK3 SUR3 YOU PUT SOM3 GAS'Z iN iT ToO! iM ALMOST ON "E"! COM3 ON (L3ADiNG ASH3LY UPSTAiRS'Z)

SAHRiAH TH3N JUMP3D UP AND RAN OUTSiD3 BAR3FoOT.

SAHRiAH: MA! (GOiN TO TH3 CAR)

SHARON: WHAT? (ROLLiN DOWN TH3 CAR WiNDOW)

SAHRiAH: WH3R3 YOU GOiN

SHARON: WHY? (CL3ARLY ANNOY3D)

SAHRiAH: CAUS3 iM HUNGRY, TH3R3 AiNT NOTHiNG TO 3AT iN THiS'Z HOUS3

SHARON: OKAY I'LL BRiNG SOM3THiNG BACK

SAHRiAH: CAN ii GoO??

SHARON: NO, i'LL B3 BACK (BACKiNG OUT TH3 DRiV3 WAY)

SAHRiAH W3NT BACK iN TH3 HOUS3, HUNGRY AND BOR3D. SH3 DiDN'T 3V3N WANT TO THiNK ABOUT WHAT OMARi AND ASH3LY W3R3 DOiN UPSTAiRS'Z ALTHOUGH SH3 KN3W FROM HiS'Z CONV3RSATiONS'Z ON TH3 PHON3 TO HiS'Z FRi3NDS'Z. SH3 DiDN'T KNO3 WHY TH3Y ACT3D LiK3 S3X WAS'Z SUCH A BiG D3AL. 3V3N THoO H3R GRANDMA AND MOM START3D YOUNG HAViNG KiDS'Z, SAHRiAH KN3W TH3R3 WOULD B3 PL3NTY TiM3 FOR THAT BUT SH3 WOULDN'T CALL H3R S3LF AN ANG3L THOUGH B3CAUS3 SH3 HAD H3R CHANC3 OF "3XP3RiM3NTiNG" BUT SH3 N3V3R ACTUALLY DiD TH3 R3AL THiNG. BUT RiGHT NOW H3R MiND WAS'Z ON SKoOL B3CAUS3 SH3 DiDN'T WANT TO HAV3 TO STRUGGL3 LiK3 TH3Y W3R3 NOW WiTH NoO FoOD iN TH3 HOUS3, 1 PHON3, AND NoO WASHiNG MACHiN3 AND DRY3R. THATS'Z WHY SH3 STAY3D iN H3R STUDi3S'Z SoO SH3 COULD 3ND UP B3iNG SOM3THiNG SoO SH3 WOULD N3V3R HAV3 TO STRUGGL3. SH3 THR3W H3RS3LF ON TH3 HARD COUCH AND CLOS3D H3R 3Y3S'Z....


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post #10  quote:

heyy....BUMP! U a gd riter! Now how u gon leave ya child up in da house all hungry!


BUMP BUMP BUMP!!


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THANKS'Z MAMAS'Z!! DiDN'T I T3LL YA'LL THiS'Z TH3 HoOD?? LOL...THATS'Z HOW iT B3 SOM3TiM3S'Z...LOL I WiLL ADD MOR3 LAT3R

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THANKS'Z MAMAS'Z!! DiDN'T I T3LL YA'LL THiS'Z TH3 HoOD?? LOL...THATS'Z HOW iT B3 SOM3TiM3S'Z...LOL I WiLL ADD MOR3 LAT3R

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SHARON: WAK3 UP RiAH

SAHRiAH OP3N3D H3R 3Y3S'Z AND LoOK3D AROUND AND iMM3DiAT3LY SM3LL3D TH3 AROMA OF H3R FAVORiT3: POP3Y3S'Z CHiCK3N. SH3 TH3N LoOK3D AT TH3 CLOCK ON TH3 WALL AND SAW THAT iT WAS'Z GOiN ON 6:30 PM. SH3 GOT UP AND STR3TCH3D AND SAW H3R MOTH3R'S SMiLiNG FAC3 AND A GiFT BAG.

SAHRiAH: WHATS'Z THiS'Z? (RUBBiNG H3R 3Y3S'Z)

SHARON:JUST LoOK iNSiD3

SAHRiAH OP3N3D TH3 BAG AND PULL3D OUT A BABY PHAT OUTFiT. SH3 HAD TO RUB H3R 3Y3S'Z AGAiN TO MAK3 SUR3 THATS'Z WHAT SH3 SAW.

SHARON: DONT ASK HOW ii GOT iT, JUST CH3RiSH iT AND 3NJOY B3CAUS3 TH3R3'S ALOT MOR3 WH3R3 THAT COM3 FROM AS'Z LONG AS'Z YOU K33P TH3M GRAD3S'Z UP AND K33P DOiN WHAT YOU'R3 SUPPOS3 TO DO.

SAHRiAH HAD JUST WOK3 UP BUT SH3 WAS NO DUMMY. SH3 KN3W THAT H3R MOTH3R COULDN'T AFFORD TO BUY TH3M NAM3 BRAND CLOTH3S'Z AND SHO3S'Z SoO WHY ALL OF SUDD3N SH3 COULD? SH3 WAS'Z ToO HUNGRY AND HAPPY TO DiSCUSS'Z iT MOR3 B3CAUS3 SH3 WAS'Z D3FiNAT3LY W3ARiNG iT TH3 N3XT DAii. SH3 HUGG3D SHARON AND THANK3D H3R TH3N H3AD3D TO TH3 KiTCH3N TO 3AT. TH3 N3XT DAii SAHRiAH GOT UP, SHOW3R3D, AND PUT ON H3R N3W OUTFiT. OMARi WALK3D PAST TH3 BATHRoOM AS'Z SAHRiAH WAS'Z FiNiSHiNG H3R HAiR.

OMARi: THAT'SZ N3W?

SAHRiAH: Y3P

OMARi: MOMMY BOUGHT THAT?

SAHRiAH: DUH, WHO 3LS3?

JUST TH3N SHARON CAM3 OUT H3R RoOM PUTTiN ON H3R 3ARRiNGS'Z BUT STOPP3D TO ADMiR3 SAHRiAH iN TH3 BATHRoOM.

SAHRiAH: WHY YA'LL WATCHiNG M3 FOR? iTS'Z NOT S3RiOUS'Z

SHARON: THAT OUTFiT LoOKS'Z CUT3 ON YOU

OMARi: HOW YOU G3T H3R THAT? THATS'Z SOM3 NAM3 BRAND SHYT

SHARON: WATCH YA FUXiN MOUTH AND DONT WORRY ABOUT ALL THAT (WALKiN DOWN STAiRS'Z)

OMARi: HURRY UP iF YOU WANT A RiD3 TO SKoOL OR YOU GON TAK3 TH3 BUS'Z (TALKiN TO SAHRiAH)

SAHRiAH: ALL RiT3, iM COMiNG DANG!

SHARON: SAHRiAH, BRiNG YA ASS'Z ON. YOU FiNNA MAK3 M3 LAT3!!

SAHRiAH ROLL3D H3R 3Y3S'Z, TURN3D OFF TH3 BATHRoOM LiGHT, AND GRABB3D H3R BoOKBAG AND RAN DOWN STAiRS'Z AND OUT TH3 DoOR AS'Z SHARON LoCK3D UP. AFT3R DROPPiN SHARON OFF AT WORK, SAHRiAH AND OMARi W3NT TO SKoOL. AS'Z TH3Y WALK3D FROM TH3 STUD3NT PARKiNG LOT TOWARDS TH3 BUiLDiNG, JAR3LL; SAHRiAH'S CRUSH APPROACH3D H3R. JAR3LL WAS'Z H3R CRUSH SiNC3 7TH GRAD3 FROM H3R OLD SKoOL BUT SH3 N3V3R HAD TH3 N3RV3 TO TALK TO HiM ABOUT ANYTHiNG OTH3R THAN SKoOL. NOT ONLii THAT BUT OMARi DiDN'T ALLOW H3R TO TALK TO BOiiS'Z, SO SH3 DiDN'T KNO3 WHY THiS'Z PARTiCULAR DAii SH3 WANT3D TO OV3R RUL3 THAT.

JAR3LL: WHAT UP? (COMPL3T3LY iGNORiNG OMARi)

SAHRiAH: H3Y (SMiLiNG SHYLY)

OMARi GLAR3D AT HiM AND STOPP3D AND SToOD iN HiS'Z FAC3. ALTHOUGH JAR3LL WAS'Z A 10TH GRAD3R LiK3 SAHRiAH, OMARi COULD CAR3 L3SS'Z ABOUT B3iN TH3 "BiGG3R P3RSON". A NYGGA WAS'Z A NYGGA TO HiM AND WASN'T NO NYGGA FiNNA G3T WiTH HiS LiL SiST3R. SH3 WAS'Z OFF LiMiTS'Z AND 3V3RYBODii KN3W THAT SoO H3 F3LT THAT BY JAR3LL APPROACHiN SAHRiAH RiGHT iN FRONT OF HiM THAT H3 WAS'Z DiSR3SP3CTiNG HiM.

OMARi: YO, WHAT TH3 FUX YOU DOiN?

JAR3LL: NO DiSR3SP3CT BUT ii WAS'Z JUST SAYiN Hi TO H3R

OMARi: AiGHT YOU SAiD iT NOW DONT L3T M3 CATCH YOU iN MAH SiST3R FAC3 MAN

JAR3LL THROUGH HiS'Z HANDS'Z iN TH3 AiR AND BACK3D OFF WiTH A SMiRK ON HiS'Z FAC3.

SAHRiAH: DAMN O, WiLL ii 3V3R HAV3 A LiF3??

OMARi: iM JUST TRYNA PROT3CT YO ASS. TRUST M3H, I KNO3 HOW NYGGAS iS'Z MAN. TH3Y FOUL. TH3Y'LL US3 YOU TH3N L3AV3 YOU.

SAHRiAH: NOT 3V3RYBODii iS'Z LiK3 THAT!

OMARi: WHAT3V3R GiRL, YOU N33D TO K33P YO H3AD iN TH3M BoOKS'Z LiK3 MOMMY SAiD

SAHRiAH ROLL3D H3R 3Y3S'Z AND WALK3D AH3AD OF HiM iN TH3 BUiLDiNG. TH3 B3LL HAD RANG BY NOW AND 3V3RYBODii WAS'Z L3AViNG TH3 AUDiTORiUM AND GOiNG TO TH3iR LOCK3RS'Z.


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post #14  quote:

Girll I did not kno you had a story this iz good tho IM LOVIN IT!!! fareal girl make sure you update I can relate to dis damn story fareal, I wanna be in it too if possible, but if not thats cool but make sure you bump dis!

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