I HAVE A GREAT STORY IDEA I CAME UP WITH LAST NIGHT AND ITS GONNA BE BASED ON THE BOOK "THUG-A-LICIOUS" AND ITS GON BE A TIGHT AZZ STORY FAREAL SO ALL THE PEOPLE THAT SIGNED UP ON THE LIST ALREADY I HAVE YOUR NAME DOWN AND READY TO GO SO YOU ALREADY HAVE YOUR PART JUST BE READY TO BUMP EVERY SCENE!!!!!!!
ANY NEW PEOPLE I MIGHT STILL HAVE ROOM FOR A FEW MORE PEOPLE SO LEAVE ME A MESSAGE IN MY INBOX FASHO!
Keturah Point of View:
It was an early summer morning I decided to call my girl Rachel(ray) and tell her to come with me shopping for tonight's party.
Ring,Ring
Rachel:Hello?
Keturah:Hey girl what you doing?
Rachel:Nothing chillin you still going to the block party tonight
Keturah:Yeah girl you already kno, but i was callin to see if you can come with me shoppin
Rachel:Alright, you think you can take me by to see pimp real quick i told him to give me child support and this fool think im playin wit his azz
Keturah:alright well im bout to get dress i'll be there in like 30 mins
Rachel:Alright im ready whenever you are
Keturah:Alright girl bye
Rachel:Bye
She hung up with her and turn the t.v on, 106 and park was on(previously recorded) she song along to "promise ring" by tiffany evans. as she got in the shower.
Now I know you wonderin who pimp iz Druex Pierre Fredricks other wise known as "pimp", he was a cold hearted person, every since he had been younger he stayed in trouble, he went to juvie the first time when he was 12 and has been in an out of the system for awhile now. He was always describe as "Americas most wanted" this nygga didnt give a f**k about nebody and he was down for whateva,he was one of the biggest ballers around here, but you did not ever wanna get on his bad side cuz once you did, your sentence to death.......
He has 2 other brothers they were real close and tight, Omari Ishmael Grandberry otherwise known as "smooth" and there was the baby brother Jarell Damonte Houston also known as "Thug".
She had finally gotten dress making sure what she was wearing snug her curvey body just right she had everything in the right places, she walk outside of her house and went in the garage pulled her car out and headed to Rachel house. When she got a call on her phone from Smooth.
Keturah:Hello?
Smooth:whats up ma
Keturah:nothing(Acting real dry)
Smooth:Why you acting like you dont wanna talk to me, knowin you been waitin on daddy to call you all day
Keturah:(laughing) Shut-up. but fareal im mad at you, and you played me last night
Smooth:How I play you
Keturah: Nygga you was suppose to come over and give me what i wanted an you didnt
Smooth:Oh I get it you wanted the magic on you last night and you aint get it
Keturah:Dont flatter yourself boi
Smooth:You already kno the d**k good so why you frontin,but imma come see you later on before i hit the block
Keturah:Where you at right now?
Smooth:Dont worry bout that ma, but kno imma hit you back in a min bout to get dress
Keturah:Yeah,whatever
Smooth: Yeah we gon teach you a lesson when i get there
She laugh and said bye, she hung up and pulled into rachel house, her and jr. came outside, got in the car and pulled off. they went to her mom house and drop her son off, and went on 108th where they usually hang at they park on a side street and walk up on to the ave and seen all three of them laughin and talkin bout somethin, they immediately look at them as they approach them
Pimp:If you gon start some bullshyt keep movin cuz i dont feel like hearin that shyt
Rachel:I just wanna know why you aint gave no ****in child support in two months!
Pimp:First of all who iz you yellin at you kno better girl dont make me slap yo azz infront of erebody dont temp me
Rachel:Are you gon help me
Pimp:Get the f**k out my face now, i dont wanna hear it
He look at her and she knew to just be quiet because she was still scared of him, they had an abusive relationship,they had been together for 2 years and finally she just left him. she wasnt the only girl he had a baby by, he had 4 other baby momma : pumpkin,yoshi, leisha, arianna, He had still currently with yoshi and rachel. They had alot of arguments between each other when they would all go to club 21.
Smooth:Whats that you was sayin over the phone
He said while grabbing her around the hips and slowly movin toward her face and tounge her so deeply she became wet, and wanting him right then and there.
Keturah: Boy, you better stop im not givin it to you no more
She knew she was lying, he did too. Smooth had a way with the ladys just like thug. smotth had the right nickname because it describe him exactly him and keturah had been down for each other since they were 10 years old and even tho he seen other girls she was at the top,he actually cared for her.
Smooth:Girl you betta stop playin we both kno you lyin
He whisper in her ear toungin her neck and her eyes closed enjoying the feelin and wantin to take him right across the street to the hotel and go up there for the rest of the day.
Thug: Rachel, do you still be seein nique
Rachel:naw we dont really talk like that no more since yoshi back, I cant stand that bytch
Smooth:Why you say that? aint that yo cuz
Rachel:So that bytch choose yoshi ova me so i dont care
Thug:She'll beat yo azz
The boyz had laugh and she looked at him
Rachel:F**k you thug
Thug:Naw thats my home boy job
Rachel:Cmon before i slapp this nygga in his shyt fareal
Smooth and Keturah kissed one last time
Rachel:Are you gon give me some money
Pimp: (He looked at her like she was gettin on his nerve) Here damn!
He pulled out a roll of money so much money it had a rubber band around it and gave it to her.
Pimp:You betta make sure you at home tonight
Rachel:Whateva
She laugh and her and keturah left and walk in the store strips and bought close she when to the baby store and bought there son awhole bunch of stuff, clothes,pampers, shoe,etc. After they were done with that they decided to go out to eat when they seen Nique and Yoshi walk in and they all automatically look at each other, nique walk over to the table to speak to keturah.
Nique,Yoshi, Angel ran in a crew. While Keturah, Rachel,Niyah ran together. Keturah and nique was still cool. Keturah and Yoshi had been cool since they was in 7th grade when yoshi had move there from harlem. Yoshi and rachel had been cool till her and pimp had broke up and he found yoshi when she was at a party and they hooked up from there, they never called it quits, so thats why he goes back and fourth with both of them. Niyah and nique Cant stand each other cuz they both got a baby by thug, and its the same situation. but they were starting to deal with eachother alittle bit more as they got older.
Nique:Whats up keturah
Keturah:Hey girl, you going to the block tonight
Nique:Girl you kno it.
(she notice that niyah was looking at her)
Nique:What the fuqq iz you lookin at?
Niyah:Shyt im still tryna figure out
Keturah:uh-uh yall fareal dont start
Yoshi:Come on i dont why you came ova here in the first place
Niyah:Shut the fuqq up
Yoshi:Who u talkin to
Niyah:Im talkin to you
Keturah:Fareal yall need to clam the fuqq down
Angel:Come on yall they little manager comin
Rachel:I kno we aint gotta fight early this mornin
Yoshi:Shut-up hoe
Rachel sat her stuff down and stood up like they was gon start fighting but angel pull
them away and they left the resturant. and went somewhere else, when they ran into pimp,thug,smooth
Nique:Hi baby
Thug:What up baby
Smooth:what up angel
Angel:Hi
Pimp:Cmere Yoshi, I need you to ride with me somewhere
Yoshi:I'll see yall later
Girls:Alright,be careful
She got out the car and got in the car with him. and they pulled off
Smooth:where you bout to go ?
Angel:Home she bought to drop me off
Smooth:Oh you act like you cant call a nygga no more
Angel:You already kno why i dont call you, i dont be havin time for all yo games you play
Smooth:What games
Angel:Keturah for one thing, I dont kno why you want her
Smooth:Dont worry bout that you the only one i want
She actually believe him and nique looked at her because she knew he was lyin but angel couldnt see past it. he made her burn on fire everytime he look at her he was just everything to her nothing else matter, when he started speaking, and all his bullshyt she still played into it. nique wonder if she would ever relize his game he was runnin,but really she couldnt say anything because her man was doin the same thing to her.
Yoshi:I missed you baby
Pimp:Iz that right
Yoshi:Yeah, have you missed me or have somebody taken my place
Pimp:you know I have aint nobody took yo spot
He stop at the red light and look at her and said it but all she could see in his was blackness,like he didnt have a soul. but in a way pimp still had a soft side to him but it would rarely show. but thats what i had loved about him. and had a d**k that would make all the girls go crazy, thats another reason why they are nicknames the licious brothers. Thug-a-licious,Smooth-A-Licious,Pimp-A-Licious they sex was crazy, everybody around town wantin a piece of it and it didnt matter which one you got it from because they all look good.
Pimp:Sit right here real quick dont get out the car
Yoshi:alright
He got out the car and she listen to the radio. he came out 3mins later and brought them some food, she started eating while she was in the car, and fed him some of hers too. they reached her house she live in nothing big but the average house, 4 bed.2.bath,basement, and alittle bit of a back yard. they went to her room and he took off his shoes and laid on the bed. as she finish eating they watch some t.v when he started asking questions about why she left him, and this is what started making her nervous.
bump this up to the fullest this is really good and thanks for putting me in the story i havent been a main character before i really appreciate it bump it up
She stop chewing and didnt know what to say, she paused
Yoshi:What you mean?
Pimp:Dont play with me,why you leave
Yoshi:.....If I tell you why I left promise you wont get mad
Pimp:Dependin what it is
Yoshi:(feelin butterflies in her stomach) you know how i said i might have been pregnant....
Pimp:yeah, did you ever find out
Yoshi:I was..... I got an abortion
Pimp:you what
He look at her and before she knew she fell off the bed, he slap her so hard she fell. He was strongly against abortion which is why he took that thought right outta rachel head when she had thought about it.
Pimp:Why the f**k you do that
Yoshi:Im sorry baby but at the time i was only 16 what was i gon do with a baby
Pimp:You kno I would have took care of mine, get the f**k out my face fareal
Yoshi:im sorry
Pimp:Man move fareal
Yoshi:What the f**k u want me to say i was 16, if my momma knew about it she would have put me out on the street and you stop talkin to me so i assume u didnt care....and you ended up havin a baby by rachel
Pimp:It dont matter carmen! dat was my seed you was carrying and you killed it.
she knew he was really made he called her by her first name. They had been together for awhile although he didnt take her v-card, they were sprung on each other. they met one day when pimp,smoove decided to come to school in 10th grade. Thug was in jail for boostin cars. she was sittin at her desk when he approach her, they didnt talk as much but they exchange numbers, after he did a background check on her and made sure she was a down azz chick for him he called her almost everyday.
He got up off the bed and left out the door for awhile. Back To keturah and smooth.
Keturah: Why you lookin like that
Smooth:Why you just smilin
Keturah:because
Smooth:Cuz u miss daddy huh (talkin real sexy as he bit his bottom lip and kiss her neck)
Keturah:Boy move
Smooth:I dont kno why you try to fight it
Keturah:Cuz i hate how you be playin me
Smooth:Well i'll make sure dats done by tonight
Keturah:Yeah okay
They went to they keturah house and did there thing, and fell to sleep soon after smooth was still woke,he was watching t.v. she woke up and came out the room he was in the kitchen makin crack and cuttin it up.
Keturah:What the F**K ARE YOU DOING?! Dont do that shyt in my house mari
Smooth:(Still cutting it up and look at her like he wasnt listen to her) Why you trippin
Keturah:Get that shyt out of her now
Smooth:Man go back in the room and chill out
Keturah:Im serious, you not bout to have my house get raided
He look at her like he wasnt playin but she didnt care she went over to the stove turn all four of the iyes off and he stop cuttin it and grab her before she tried to pour it out.
Smooth:Stop playin, i paid for that shyt,you bet not pour that out
He took it from her and she punch him in his chest
Keturah:you betta get that out my house
Smooth:Just let me do this one time,and i wont do it nomore
Keturah:this is the first and last time
Smooth:Alright ma stop trippin
He tried to kiss her with out touching her cuz he had it on his hands. and she didnt let her touch her face she moved and went in her room and slammed the door and he heard it cuz he thought she threw something at him and he flench alittle bit and laugh to his self as he shook his head
Smooth:That girl crazy
Nique And Thug
Hold on i'll write more after i get back from the store
09-21-2007 02:59 AM
