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CHAPTER 1

My name iz Sharmane Lynette Smith but I go by Peaches. Which is also my stage name at The Hustlers Joint. Im only 19 but thats how I make money I aint got no type of fam,I live by myself in a house I finally saved up enough money and got it. I have a all black Yukon with rims, as you can see im doing good for myself me and but it aint always easy, sometimes I have to do something extra to make a certain amount in one night, I usually bring home about 2G's a night. I know you sayin thats alot but if you seen me you would see I got the body of a goddess and I got the right amount all over my body. I keep myself up and looking pretty Im not tryna make this a habit but as of now a 9-5 aint in my head, and since this is easy money Imma keep it for a minute,well Im on my way to the club now im looking fly to I order new outfits,and I know I'll drive them crazy.

I pulled up to the club got out and as I was walking in I past a group of nyggas all of them I have seen before or have been a regular. I went inside after batting my long eyelashes at them and went in the dressing room to change

Cookie:Hey girl
Peaches:Hey girl whats up
Cookie:I dont kno Im sick I feel like I gotta throw up
Peaches:Why you aint just stay home
Cookie:I cant I gotta get this money up
Peaches:I hear dat
Cookie:You make more than I do tho,you need to teach me how to do some of the tricks you be pullin on them.
Peaches:I cant do that babygirl takes money away
Cookie:At least one of them
Peaches: If you pay me for it
Cookie:How bout I eat it for you
Peaches:Naw I dont even swing that way
Cookie:You should let me I can satisfy you more than these saggy ball nyggas out there

I laugh and went in the changing room to my locker. And got dressed and I decided to be a naughty nurse tonight. See the thing with cookie was, she was a cool girl but she been in the stripping buizness since she was 16 and shes now 24 so she turned bi-sexual after yolanda turned her out in the bathroom after she was high off of coke. and every since she been like this, but me I aint into that I strickly-dickly you would say. she seems to ask me at least 2 a week but she know not to try nothing because even tho we cool she know I dont play and I'll bust some heads.

Let me stop running my mouth and get out here, I walk out the locker room and seen my main customer, he was fine as I dont know what, And I see alot of good looking people but this boy was super fine. He pointed for me to come over, as I walk over to him I scanned the club and tried to see if I seen any ballers. not many so I kept walking toward him.

Omari:Whats up with you
Peaches:I been waiting on you daddy
Omari:(Lick his lips and gave a lil smile) yeah I been waiting on you too.
Peaches:You tryna spend any?
Omari:Yeah a G
Peaches:Lets go some where private.
Omari:Im following you.

She grab him by the hand and made sure his dick was touching my azz as we walk into my private room. Omari wasnt married but I knew I had him sprung we had did it many times before,but the thing that kept me different from all the other strippers I knew how to keep my puzzy tight, so he loved it. We went in and shut the door.

Peaches:So what you wanna get daddy
Omari:Suprise me with something,make sure its my money worth
Peaches:I will.

He gave her the money and "69" played by T-pain and J-Lyrics and she walk over to him and gave him a lap dance and stood on top of the table and made her booty clap in his face and he was enjoying every moment of it. See I didnt mind doing extra stuff for him because he was basically where all my money came from he was was sexy anyway.

I sat on his lap and turned my body upside down so that my azz was in his face as I pulled his dick out and started sucking it I made sure I made his shyt vibrate, when I humed when it was in my mouth and just before he came he sat me up on the couch and I let him be in control and I spreaded my legs wide and he bit his bottom lip an put him inside me and it felt so good when he was doing it because I hadnt had him in awhile. and he was the only one I would have sex with. so he was making sure I got some feelings out of it instead of just hitting it and quitting it he made me moan loud and he moaned a few times when I tighten up on him and he finally nutted after 20mins and I stood up and put my clothes back on and he did his too. we kissed

Peaches:You was making me feel that shyt,can I get it one more time
Omari:Yeah turn it over tho

I walk over to the counter and pulled everything back off and let him hit it from the back. Once we were done it was only 30mins till the club was over and I was tired now so I decided to leave when he did.

Omari:Whats your name, cuz I know it aint peaches
Peaches:I dont tell my real name
Omari:Can I know your age
Peaches:19,and you?
Omari:19
Peaches:explains your strength

He laugh alittle and then grab her to him and kissed.

Peaches(Smiling)What was that for?
Omari:I dont know
Peaches:Yo lips really are soft
Omari:What you mean?
Peaches:I always wonder how they felt
Omari:Umm you can have them you know
Peaches:I bet
Omari:You still aint gon tell me ya name
Peaches:Sharmane
Omari:Sharmane? Im omari
Sharmane:Dont tell nobody I dont ell people nothing about me
Omari:I wont .......Aye do you do private session
Sharmane:For you? yeah I would why whats up
Omari:Let me have yo number so I can hit you up
Sharmane:Alright

She gave it to him and he put it in his phone. then he smack her booty as they walk out

Omari:Dont let noone else have that but me
Peaches:You already kno baby

they went they seperate ways and she went in the locker room and change her clothes and check out and got in her car and pulled off and went home as she got settle and took off her make up and heels she took a bath and went to her room and laid down.

I was so glad I aint gotta work for a whole damn two weeks, I might go back before than cuz I cant let them tricks take my money. But i need some serious rest.

"Ring,Ring"

Sharmane:Hello?
Omari:Sharmane
Sharmane:Yeah who is this?
Omari:Mari
Sharmane:Mari?.......Oh whats up baby
Omari:I dont kno I was thinking about you tho I dont want you to think im some type of stalker but tomorrow see if you can come over with me
Sharmane:Alright I'll be there ,just call me tomorrow wit the details
Omari:alrigth fasho,bye
Sharmane:Bye daddy
Omari:(laughing a sexy laugh) you gon make come thourgh this phone to get you
She laugh and said bye and they hung up.


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post #2  quote:

BUMP iT UP!! IM LOViN iT!!

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bump this up

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Buump this story to the fullest..

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Buuumpp.. I'm waitin! Lol

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CHAPTER 2

The next morning mari woke up jump in the shower and wore his all black outfit and put his black forces on, he walk down stairs and grab his keys and left he went to burger king and got some breakfast and went to his baby momma k'yera house,to see his son lil O

Knock,Knock

K'yera:Who is it?
Omari:Its me open up
She open it
Omari:Whats up
K'yera:Nothing
Omari:Where Jr.
K'yera:taking his nap,but um why dont you come upstairs with me tho
Omari:For what,where that nygga of yours at
K'yera:He aint here
Omari:I cant believe I was in love with you,I just came to drop off this money for him. And you better buy him something out of it too.
K'yera:Why would you say some shyt like that, like what we had wasnt good
Omari:Was it? All I can remember was you bein a hoe and using me for my doe and just so happen you came up pregnant
K'yera:Whatever leave I dont wanna hear yo mess
Omari:Naw I aint leaving you bout to give me head tho
K'yera:What?! yeah right after you just cuss me out
Omari:Cuz you be on that bull Im sorry

He said with a smile but pulled her close to him in a seductive way that made her want him again. he was playin her the whole time tho,they went upstairs and closed her son door and closed there too. and he laid down on the bed and he unbuckle his pants and took it out for her and he was already hard and ready she proceeded in her job and put him all the way in her mouth and down her throat even tho she almost choke. she still wanted to do it. she kept doing that as he enjoyed and closed his eyes and started to think of peaches. Once he was finally to his point he came in her mouth and she quickly spit it out.

K'Yera:Damn you could have told me,but now do me
He sat up in the bed and pulled his pants back up and grab his phone.

Omari:Yeah right you must be really trippin
He put his black hat on that had L.A on it and laugh as he walk out the room and went to his sons room and kiss his face and hugged him and walk down stairs as she got up and started following him

K'yera:F**K you mari
Omari:Yeah I kno

He laugh as he got in the car and pulled off and she slammed the door shut. he pulled up at his cuzzin rell house.

Rell:Whats up man
Omari:Whats up dogg yall ready for this beat
Rell:Yeah we all in here

They went in side and they went to the studio as they were all talking they were interupted by a knock on the studio door,walks in peaches,shianne. shianne is rell girl but sharmane cuzzin, her and mari locked eyes immediatly.


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Nooo way! Aint that some stuff.. Lol! Bumpin this story to the fullest!

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CHAPTER 3

Shianne:rell Im bout to leave
Rell:Where you going
Shianne:None of yo buizness
Rell:Let me talk to you real quick
Omari:Whats up
Sharmane:Whats up witchu
Omari:I need too talk to you anyway

They walk out and rell and shianne went upstairs. they stood in the kitchen

Omari:So what you got up for tonight
Sharmane:Nothing just bout to sit at home,I aint gotta work the rest of the week I took off
Omari:You still gon give me my private dance
Sharmane:Yeah,when you want it
Omari: Today if I can
Sharmane:Alright well im bout to go with shianne real quick
Omari:Alright
Sharmane:Give me dem chocolate lips tho before we leave

He stood closer to her as he felt up her skin tight black skirt,that was short already. she wrap her arms around his neck, and he push close up against her and they kissed and started to tounge kiss, and it was something about her kisses that he loved,so he kept going cuz he wanted more.

Shianne:Alright Im ready girl

She held up one finger and rell started smiling and took shianne in the studio till they were finished.

Sharmane:Damn dat waz good
Omari:You betta call me tonight girl
Sharmane:I will daddy

She said as she walk away from him and he look her body up and down, and couldnt wait till later on.

Sharmane:You ready
Shianne:The question iz, are you?

She said smiling and omari walk past her and sat back in his chair.They walk out the studio room and walk outside,and got in sharmane truck. And she turned on the air in her truck and sped off.

Shianne:So whats up with you and mari
Sharmane:Thats the nygga from the club I been telling you about
Shianne:The one be spending all that grand on you
Sharmane:Yeah, Sexy azz
Shianne:I see you cuz, he iz sexy tho

Sharmane looked at her. See even tho shi and shar wasa cuzzin, they knew they boundries for each other, and shi seemed to like all the men shar liked, because back in the day rell was suppose to be sharmane but shianne slept with rell and sharmane broke up with rell,but she told shi next time she did something like that she was gonna beat her ass.and she said she wouldnt. but back to the story

Shianne:So yall tryna be together
Sharmane:I dont kno we might, most likely yeah cuz the way that nygga be putting the dick down on me, he be havin me shaking and wet as a muthaf**ka

Shianne started laughing, they went to the store and bought some outfits, and went and got there nails,toes done. then went back to the house. and she drop her off it was 5:50pm when she finally arrived back home, she got her a glass of alize and started drinking it. And she decided to call Omari.

Ring,Ring

Omari:Hello?
Sharmane:Hey you still coming over
Omari:Yeah where you live?
Sharmane:Meadow Hills
Omari:Iight whats the address
Sharmane:3678 Kingston Ct
Omari:Oh I know where you at, alright im on my way now
Sharmane:Dont keep me waiting(She said in a seductive tone)
Omari:(laughing sexy) You just dont kno what we bout to do
Sharmane:Bye
Omari:Peace

He hung up smiling. and she was laughing cuz she knew she had him wrap around her finger. she went upstairs and got dress in a all black victoria secret lingrie set.

Omari:Alright im out
Dru:Where you going
Omari:I gotta take care of some buisness
De:What buizness
Omari:Grown man buizness
Rell:You going to see shar
Omari:Yep
Dru:She got you open nygga
De:Just make sure you back within the hour
Omari:I'll be back man shut-up

He gave them all dap and left out he pulled up to peaches house and called her

Omari:Aye im outside
Peachez:Oh come in its open sit on the couch
Omari:Alright
They hung up and he got out the car and walk in the house, and was thingking her house is sweet. he sat on the couch and took off his shoes and she came out the kitchen and sat her glass down on the table and walk up to him

Omari:Damn

She walk over to him and sat on his lap and he felt on herhips and thighs as they kiss she took his hat off and he slap her booty and she moaned in his ear and it turn him on.

Peachez:Come on upstairs
Omari:Lets go

She got up and held his hand leading him upstairs as he watch her walk,they went in her bedroom and she had candle lit, she had a king size bed,she push him on the bed and walk over to him and sat on top of him as let him take off her bra and panties. She took off his clothes and they got under the cover and had sex all night long. both enjoying what each other is doing. They kept going till about 4:30am. They finally went to sleep and he held her and she knew she could get him to do whatever she wanted him to do. and thats the way she wanted it. but on the other hand mari was fallin deeper and deeper into her, taking thier relationship to a different level.


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BUMP iT UP!! SHARMAN3 KNO3 SH3 WRONG iF SH3 PLAN ON TAKiN ADVANTAG3 OF OMARi...

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CHAPTER 4

The next morning they woke up and kissed and he wanted to take her out to breakfast. she said alright and got dress,in her red dickies shorts with the dickies red/white shorts,with her white and red tie up heels. They left out the house and got in his truck and left they listen to the radio finally when they got there and order he grabhis hand in hers.

Omari:I really gotta tell you something
Sharmane:Whats that?
Omari:I know this started off as just sex, but I really wanna know you more than that. I wanna take it further if thats alright with you
Sharmane:You dont really know me
Omari:I know I wanna ge tto know you tho, I loving the you right here but i wanna have a real relationship
Sharmane:Damn....
Omari:I mean you aint gotta answer right now but whats the harm of trying it
Sharmane:(She looked at him and smiled) I wanna be with you too
Omari:Are you sure
Sharmane:Yeah I mean im feeling you too, Im just use to knowing a person before I say yeah,but yeah we can get to that.
Omari:Alright well I'll go first, Im19, I been hustlin for awhile now, i have a son thats 3
Sharmane:He a jr.?
Omari:Yeah,tell me something bout you
Sharmane:Well I moved from new york to here with my cuzzin shi, but I aint have no job or nothing,and I aint like livin off of her and rell, so i met this girl named cookie who introduce me to strippin, and I been doing that every since Im tryna get enough money so I can stop, cuz I plan on having a family too but I dont want them knowing that mommy strip,dat aint hot.
Omari:Did you have peps in new york
Sharmane:I called them fam but they really wasnt I stayed with this pimp name chris,we had been friends since diaper days, he took care of me when he found out how my daddy rape me and my mother she was so f**kin dumb that she didnt believe nothing that I said. So he let me live with him and ask me to be a prostitute but I aint no ho so I said no,but after that I knew it was time to go it was getting to strange around there so I got some money from my friend quincy and got on a plane and came here.
Omari:Damn thats alot,im sorry that happen
Sharmane:Yeah me too...........well tell me bout yo parents
Omari:Oh they still together,I got two other brothers marques,ryan '
Sharmane:Thats good, Is yall close
Oamri:Yeah I dont know where I would be with out them

There food came.


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BUMP BUMP BUMP!!

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bump this up

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Bump this story.. :]

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They ate and kept some conversation going. He kept making her smile and laugh and she loved that about him. after they were finish eating they went to the park and they played in the water and chase each other around. Just having a great time. He decided to take her back home. Once they arrived she gave him a kiss on the lips leaving him to want more of her.

Omari:What you got up for tomorrow
Sharmane:Nothing I think I might just chill at home
Omari:Alright imma call you
Sharmane:Iight,bye
Omari:Peace

He waited for her to get in the house and he pulled off. and went to rell house.

Dru:Where you been
Omari:What?
De:We was waiting on you last night
Omari:Oh my badd I forgot
Rell:She got you sprung
Omari:No it aint even like that
Rell:Yeah right I had her before I know the deal
Omari:What you mean?
Rell:We use to date for about 2 weeks until shi f**k me and she left me but during that time I was sprung,she had me open
Omari:Well that aint the case with me

He sat quiet while the others talk alittle,still thinking about what he just heard, and was gonna ask her about it later. They finished up and did 4 new songs,and decdied to call it a wrap. He went home and got in the shower and went to go see angel another girl he was seeing,she was about 5'4, latino,with long brown hair, was very pretty.


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