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Dru:Man I cant wait to go home
Omari:Me too we been on tour to long
De:I can taste my mom good food
Rell: Im tryna see my girl,I aint had none in awhile.

They laugh and they stop at a gas station and got some food. They got back in the car,in about 2 hrs later they arrived back home in Los Angeles, California. They each got drop off at one time since they all live next door to each other. they all went and greeted their mom and dad at the door.And decided to relax for the day,Dru heard a knock,Knock at his door and his bestfriend Dutchess came in.

Dutchess:Hey!
Dru:Whats up
He hugged her and they laid down on his bed
Dutchess:I just past rell ......lana outside waiting for him
Dru:Probaly going 2 F**k, what you been up to?
Dutchess:Nothing broke up with chris, and been alittle sad
Dru:what happen?
Dutchess: Its like I wanna be with him but im waiting for somebody else and I dont Love him like he love me,so he said f**k me its over and left.
Dru:Damn Im sorry to hear that, he didnt touch you did he
Dutchess:No,Lets watch cribs

She turn her face over because she was being teary eyed,he noticed,but didnt say anything,they watch t.v,it went on commercial.

Dutchess:Dru we been friends,how long now?
Dru:Since we was like 2,why?
Dutchess:You know when I said im waiting on somebody
Dru:Yeah
Dutchess:That somebody is.....you

He look at her,but didnt respond
Dutchess:Im sorry,I dont know why i feel like this but i want you in the most wildest ways.I cant hide it nomore. It started as friends,I still think of you that way but sometimes......I really be feeling you.
Dru:Fareal?
Dutchess:Yeah,I shouldnt have said it im sorry
Dru:No its cool I be feelin you sometimes 2
Dutchess:Its like I wanna f**k you just one time at least.
Dru:Hold on

He got up and made sure his mom and dad were gon and came back to the room and shut the door. she was laying on the bed and he laid down by her.she kiss him 4 the first time and it was exactly like she planned it to be perfect! his juicy lips so soft and smooth. his tounge all down her mouth,I understand why bytches be trippin ova him. I felt his hands sliding down my body,feeling on my breast.and down to my thigh feeling on my applebottom. enough of this four play he thought in his head.He was now ready to do the "grown up" her body was feeling right she was wrapping her legs all around him and his di*k was hard as a rock,she was feeling him thourgh his pants getting wet.he was ready to make her moan his name loud. he started unbuttoning her pants and she started pulling his pants down.she threw her pants and shirt on the floor and he threw his to the other side as well.he started to finger her and she moan alittle bit cuz it was feeling good.

Dru:You know I got a big di*k
he said while pushing his fingers deeper and deeper inside her,and she shook her head yes as she let her eyes roll back and let dru take control. He look down at his hands and seen how wet he was he pulled it out after putting a c-boy on,he enter her,she let out a moan because of the pain mixing with pleasure once she adjusted to his fit,she began making scratches on his back,and he loved every minute of it. In and out,slow then fast and each time he went deeper and deeper ,she was so tight and warm and wet it made him feel like he went to heaven .he wanted to start going fast in her but didnt want to hurt her even tho he was close to cumming.her moans began to increase louder and louder,which kept turning him on.he started speeding up his pace in her.

Dutchess:Oh shyt!oooooo! dont stop!DRU!DR.....UUUU!!
Dru:Say my name again
Dutchess:Dr....Dr.....DRU!!!!
Dru:Oh f**k! you like that...huh?!
He said while grabbing her booty and tounging her neck,she couldnt respond he was beatin her hard and she loved every minute of it as she slowly bit her bottom lip he continued to do all of it to her till he felt her legs start to vibrate and he felt his tip swell he knew he was gonna cum,but what he didnt know his mom and dad was outside his widow working in the lawn talking to omari mother and father.

Dru:You ready to cum
Dutchess:Ye..Yeah
Dru:Alright

He started going as fast as he could and she moan loudly as she came and he came after.his dad heard it! but made sure the conversation kept up so that his mom or mari mom would hear it.but he made a quick note to talk to dru later about it.


Dru:Damn!
Dutchess:That felt good as hell.oooo!

she said feeling the after effects and he pulled it out and laid on the side of her and they fell asleep with her thumb in her mouth. they woke up and she kiss his face. he was still knock out.she didnt wanna leave out this dream come true but she had too.and his parents were gon so this would be the perfect time to leave. she went home and thought about everything that happen. 15 mins later dru woke up and felt she wasnt their nomore and look at the clock it said 9:45, he smiled. and thought about what happen as well. his thought was soon interupted by his cell phone ringing.

Dru:Whats up
Omari:Nygga where the f**k you been we been callin since 3:30
Dru:I was taking care of buisness whats up tho?
Omari:Neways tonight wayne having a party and everybody suppose to be there,I wanna get drunk.
Dru:Alright I'll meet you over rells in like 30 mins
Omari: fasho peace
Dru:yep

They hung up and he laid out his clothes and took a shower and let the smell of sex leave his room.20 mins later he got out the shower and wrap a towel around him and went to his room,as he was almost done getting dress he had his pants and his white beater on as he reached for his ecko shirt his dad walk in.

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BUMP BUMP BUMP!!! I LiK3S'Z!! LOL

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sorry havent wrote in a while been busy update tonight


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OKAY MAMAS'Z!!

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They hung up and he laid out his clothes and took a shower and let the smell of sex leave his room. 20 mins later he got out the shower and wrap a towel around him and went to his room,as he was almost done getting dress he had his pants and his white beater on as he reached for his ecko shirt his dad walk in.

Dad:Aye son let me talk to you for a minute there
Dru:Oh fasho

His dad walk in and they sat on his bed

Dru:So whats up pops
Dad:I know your almost a grown man,but you still might have to respect the rules of the house
Dru:What you mean
Dad:I heard what happen earlier
Dru:What?
Dad:Dutchess

Dru he was shocked and was embrassed that his dad knew

Dad:Now I dont mind cuz me and your mom was like that too but if I was u i would keep my window closed. Alright?
Dru:Alright thanks pops

They shook hands as they hugged then he walk out his room and he finished the last touchings and started wlking down the stairs putting his hair in a ponytail and his mom and dad was laying the living room watching a movie and talking.

Mom:Where you going?
Dru:To a party I'll be back
Mom:You need some money
Dru:Naw I got it thanks tho
Dad:Lock the door make sure you got your key
Dru:Alright peace.

He walk out and lock the door and went to rell house to meet omari and de. once they got there they waited for everybody and once they were there they left and got in the car.

Jarell:Man its gon be so many hoez
Omari:I know
De:Janette coming to imma be at her house tonight
Jarell:Its been two months and you aint hit
De:Naw its some type of rule she has
Omari:I would have been left her alone
Dru:Hell yeah
De:Ohhh I seen dutchess leavin ya house all sneakative
Dru:Dont worry bout that. thats my buisness
Omari:I dont know why you said something
Rell:You know how he is about dutchess
Dru:Shut-up
they bust out laughing causing him to laugh

Dru:Yall are so ignorant

They pulled up to the party and got out and went inside and everybody was dancing, and Dutchess, Ashlynn was two stepping in the middle of the floor and they was killing it they all did they own thing they dance with everybody the boyz in competition on who they were tryna leave with and they played "Outta my system" and shad came thourgh the door also known as bowwow who had just came off of tourcame back home and he was singin it. Then dutchess step sister ciara came out.

Shad:Aye yall this what I want you to do pair up with somebody right now and enjoy this
Ciara:I aint never had nobody show me all the things that you den showed me in a special way I feel when hold me we gon always be together baby thats what you told me and I believe it cuz i aint neva had nobody do me like you

Dru and dutchess paired up

Dutchess P.O.V: Damn this nygga smell good as hell,its kind of wierd cuz i think im actually falling in love with him and were bestfriends,but oh well he the one i want

Dru P.O.V: Damn her body feeling just right beautiful everything her personality iz crazy but she my home girl but then again she said she got feeling for me so I might make her mines

Once the song was over they had almost fell into a trance with each other and didnt want to let go but they didnt want people to notice. once they let go the party continued and they kept playing booty poppin music and at the end they played"Party like a rock star" and they were all drunk actin silly as hell

Dutchess:I called you earlier
Dru:I let my sister use my phone its still with her
Dutchess:O....
Shad:Dutchess whats up girl
Dutchess:Whats up

They hugged

Shad:Damn I aint seen you in a minute
Dutchess:Shyt every time i try to catch up with you, they say you gon on tour
Shad:I know but im done for the next two years cuz im stopping so I can attend college in the fall
Dutchess:Thats whats up
Ashlynn:Gyrl come on Im hungry
Dutchess:Alright well I'll see you later
Shad:Where yall going
Dutchess:Back to my house, we got school in the morning
Shad:Oh fasho, you can still call me you kno
Dutchess:I lost yo number ,you still got mines just hit me up later
Shad:Fasho

They hugged again and she got in the car and pulled off ciara was in the back and she was kind of mad

Dutchess:What yall wanna eat
Ashlynn:Lets go to burger king or something
Dutchess:You coming back home or what
Ciara:Aint that why im in here
Dutchess:What you got a attitude for now
Ciara:Cuz you pullin that same stuff as usual with shad
Dutchess:OMG there you go,don't nobody want him if anything you should check him
Ciara:No im checking you,you always think you can have everything and everyone and im tellin you now
Dutchess:No first off you aint tellin me nothing I dont want him and I aint gon keep telling you this bytch what you can do you can get out my car and walk the rest of the way home cuz personally and truely I dont care what happens to you
Ciara:Whatever

She pulled over to the side

Dutchess:Lynn let her out
Ashlynn:No you know that aint right we in the middle of nowhere right now
Dutchess:LET HER OUT
She got out and lifted up the seat and ciara got out and she got back in and they pulled off

Dutchess:Aint gon talk no shyt to me and I already dont like you
Ashlynn:You know that was wrong
Dutchess:Wahtever then you come back with your car and get her
Ashlynn:No but im saying yall need to squash that ,ya'll are sisters and ya'll act like yall hate each other
Dutchess:That aint my sister I only have two brothers and they are in prison right now she is my dads wife child and they living in our house
Ashlynn:Yall got issues
Dutchess: Whatever

The rest of the car ride home was quiet and they walk in and some how ciara made it there before they did and she was on the couch talking and crying to her mom and dad

Dad:Ashlynn your mom said for you to come home and babysitt
Ashlynn:Oh I forgot I'll see you later girl
Dutchess:Alright fasho call me before you go to sleep
Ashlynn:Yep

She left out and dutchess went to her room but before she could go up her dad called her back down

Dad:Marie(Dutchess middle name) come here for a minute

She came back down and sat in the chair across from them

Dutchess:yes
Mom:Whats this you girls been arguing
Dutchess:No it wasnt an arguement she said what she had to say and i said what i had to say and that was it
Ciara:No you started it first
Dutchess:Grow up, dad can i go to sleep im tired and my food is getting cold
Dad:No, how did all this start
Dutchess:Everything was good till she got mad when I hugg shad
Mom:That boi I said stop being around
Dutchess:Yep
Mom:Ciara! I told you repeatly to stay away from him, you know what thats it you are grounded for two weeks you are to come straight home from school and work and thats it
Dad:So all this over a boy
Dutchess:Basically
Ciara:No it hurt my feelings when she said she dont care about me and I really do love her
Dutchess:Bytch why iz you lyin
Dad:Excuse me
Dutchess:Im sorry dad but she iz lyin
Dad:Why did you say that to her
Dutchess:Because thats how I feel I dont care who know it
Mom:Why not
Dutchess:Because I dont, I dont want nothing to do with yall two, Im only got 4 more months till I move out on my own and go to college I only care for my dad and thats it,I only respect you because my dad really loves you that it...and as for you ciara you need to stop frontin and act how you really act when they aint around
Mom:(crying)I really care about you and I love you dearly sweetie,I give you everything you want
Dad:You kno better than to say stuff like that
Dutchess:Didnt you tell me to say what I feel no matter what
Dad:Yeah but you were out of line apologize now
Dutchess:No im not apologizing,matter of fact im gone

She went upstairs and pack her some clothes and she came back down and they were still down there ciara went to her room and Monica and her dad was still there and she open the door

Dad:Where you going
Dutchess:Dont act like you care now

She walk out the door and slammed it shut and got in her car and went to dru house he open the door and let her in

Dru:Whats wrong with you
Dutchess:Cuz that bytch ciara I swear man its crazy Imma end up beating her azz
Dru:Yall was arguing again
Dutchess:Yeah because i hugged shad,so my dad and of course her mom was on her side,so i said what i had to say and left
Dru: Did you listen to them first or did you just listen to parts like you always do
Dutchess:They were trying to take her side
Dru:Im just sayin you kno how you iz
Dutchess:Man forget it i dont have time

She was walking out and he grab her hand

Dru:Alright im sorry im sorry baby
Dutchess:No im serious right now and you playing
Dru:Im sorry come on lets go to sleep

He kiss her and they laid down and went to sleep

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They were laying so she was face to face with him and he had his arms around her and she was sound asleep and they woke up late and they were late for school. so they hurried up and jump in the shower and got dress and she kept her scarf on cuz she didnt feel like doing her hair and they grab they bag and went downstairs and she was still crabby from what happen last night,and dru was being slo to her

Dutchess P.O.V:Damn will this nygga hurry up damn i already dont feel like going and he slowin around

He finally came out the house

Dru:What the F**k is wrong with you
Dutchess:Because you slowing around I said I didnt wanna go and you actin slo
Dru:Man whatever do you want me to drive myself
Dutchess:Shut-up
Dru:No dont try to take yo anger out on me I aint do nothing to you
Dutchess:Whatever man

It got real quiet and he turn the radio on and "Grind on me" was on and she turn it off and he started laughing and turn it back on

Dru:(In his deep sexy voice)Step One: You're kissin' on me
Step Two: Girl, I'm caressin' your body
Step Three: Now I'm lickin' off the whipped cream
Step Four: And oooh you're grindin' on me

And he put his hand between her thighss as he kiss her face and she look at him

Dru:Damn you soo mean
Dutchess:Im not tryna be I just have an attitude today
Dru:Alright imma stop

He held her hand they finally arrived in the school parking lot and got out and she went to class.they were in P.E and all seniors had to take it a full semester before they left and she had that class with ciara. She was in the locker room changing and she had on her shorts and put her fuddie socks on as she was looking for her shirt she notice she couldnt find it and she only had her bra so she put that on and kept looking for it then she notice she heard laughter. she turn around to see ciara ripping it up with her friends laughing.

Ciara:You looking for something

She threw it in her face and dutchess look at it, and she look at it drop on the floor and she swung out of nowhere and hit ciara in her mouth and they started fighting and ciara slammed her into the locker and dutchess pushed her hard enough to make ciara fall backwards and they lock up and was fighting each other. you would think they were arch enemies the way they were fighting

Tyonna:Aye yall they fighting

They all ran into the locker room boyz included and they watched, blood was all over they were both bleeding and dutchess had ciara by her hair and was slamming it into the sink and the mirror and she let her go for a minute cuz she lost her grip and she back up

Dutchess:Bytcxh what you want more
Ciara:F**K you

They went at it again and she grab dutchess to the floor and they started fighting and they was giving it to each other and teachers and the security guards got through the crowd and grab them apart and somehow dutchess got loose and kick ciara hard in the mouth.

Dutchess:Let me go f**k her

The other guards grab ciara

Ciara:Bytch what let me go
Dutchess:Who just got they ass wope bytch

She seen ciara get loose and was running toward her and she broke loose of her guards and they almost lock up again and they drag them to the hallway and class had just got up and it spread across the school fast and they were pulling her and she past right by omari and dru and shad

Dutchess:Let me go, Im not gon touch her

She said still trying to get loose. Ciara was already in the office and they seperated them in different rooms. and de,bobby V ran up to them

Dru:What happen
De:Man it was crazy ciara and dutchess started fighting they came out the locker room like they fighting soon as we heard that everybody ran in there its blood all over.
Omari:Who won
Bobby:Toya said she was there when it started and dutchess won
Rell:Damn I missed it,how it start
De:Cuz ciara cut her shirt up or something like that
Bobby:Damn she iz fine as f**k tho we all seen
Dru:What you mean
He look at him like he was gonna knock him out
Bobby:Nothing
De:Naw he just saying that cuz she was fighting in her bra and shorts and jays
Dru:Will you need to rephrase that
Bobby:My badd dogg
Omari:Aye lets go see the locker room
Dru:Alright lets go

They all went in and seen the blood looking like somebody had been murder. they went in the office and the office aid joy snook dru in to see her

Dru:Baby you okay
Ciara:What?
Dru:Oh my badd Im looking for dutchess
Ciara:Oh...wait before you go dru you know I always had this thing for you,I know how you use to like me and how strong our vibes was together

She walk up to him and she started kissing his neck and he push her

Dru:Get the f**k off me you kno that aint cool
Ciara:Its cool she aint gon know damn is yall together?
Dru:no but thats still my homegirl and ....

And before he could get another word out she had drop to her knees and unzipped his pants and she started giving him head he was gonna stop her but it was feeling so good he didnt want her to stop and he forgot about everything for the next 2 mins and he took it out her mouth and sat on the school bed and she crawled over to him and started giving him head again and he pushed her head all the way down and nutted in her mouth and she swallowed all of it and took her mouth off of him licking the tip of it fast with her tounge

Ciara:Bet she dont do it like that, now we can be together and you can get that all the time
Dru: Ho I dont want you, you aint got nothing on dutchess
Ciara:Thats why imma tell her

Then he stop in his tracks at the door, cuz he didnt think about that part and he walk out without saying nothing else. thinking of how to tell her. Later on after they found out they got suspended for 4 days they went home and got yelled at by there parents and she went to her room and she laid on her bed and her parents left ciara past her in the living room and told her what happen and they almost started fighting again but she stop herself and went to her room.......20 mins later after blowing her phone up dru had a feeling ciara already told her......and decided to go over there and just on time ciara left to go with her dad for the next four days he open the door with the spair key she had gave him and went to her room.


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BUMP BUMP BUMP!! I WOND3R iF DUTCH3SS'Z KNOW...HM...CiARA iS'Z A NASTY AS'Z BYTCH!!

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Dru:Hey baby
Dutchesson't you have something to tell me
Dru:.......yeah Im quite sure ciara already told you
Dutchess:Yeah she did! Why you do that too me
Dru:It wasnt like I did it on purpose.......but its not like we together anyway
Dutchess:But you know my feelings for you too, thats like me letting omari eat me out and you know how much he like me, would you like that
Dru:No but still I wasnt doing that to hurt you listen I came in the office to see how you was doing and was you alright and joy told me you which room you were in and when I went in I didnt realize she wasnt you till she came out the bathroom and from then on she just started giving me head
Dutchess:You could have said stop
Dru:You right I could have but it was feelin good

She turn her face from looking at him and look out the window and he look at her it was real quiet.

Dru:Look all i can say is that im sorry,I didnt mean to hurt you cause you are my bestfriend,I love you so what you gon do
Dutchess:Just leave me alone I dont wanna talk to nobody
Dru:So you aint gon give me a answer
Dutchess:No
Dru:Man whatever

He got up and grab his keys off her dressel and left out. and she started crying once she heard the door shut.

Dutchess P.O.V: I dont care wether it was the greatest feeling in the world he slept with her and thats all too it, he was my bestfriend,and maybe I was taking our friendship to a different level and not looking at it for what it really was.....but still he was wrong I hate that bytch,she bet not ever say nothing to me.

She decided to take a nap and she wasnt answering anybody phone call, she started watching t.v doing her homework that lynn brought over to her. when her "shad" called her phone

Dutchess:Hello?!
Shadamn why you say it so mean
Dutchess:Cuz so much stuff going on right now,im jus upset and irratated
Shad:Oh trust me I know how that can be I heard you was fighting today
Dutchess:Yeah, I fought that bytch ciara
Shadlaughing) I dont see how yall could live under the same roof and cant stand each other thats crazy
Dutchess:I know
Shad:.....Aye are you doing something later on?
Dutchess:No why?
Shad:I wanna take you out to eat I aint been eating no good food in awhile and well go to the arcade or to the movies
Dutchess:yeah I'll go
Shad:You dont have to go if you dont feel like it
Dutchesslaugh)I wanna go
Shad:Alright Imma get atchu you in like 1hr cuz imma finish this beat up
Dutchess:Alright fasho.
Shadeace

They hung up and she started to get ready she hop in the shower and stayed for about 20mins then she got out and started getting dress and put on her deniem jeans and her white and deniem baby phat shirt and her white new balances. and flat iron her hair down


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I WAS'Z DYiNG LAUGHiN @ DRU3X WH3N H3 SAiD "BUT iT WAS'Z F33LiNG GOOD" LMFAO!! BUMP BUMP BUMP

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They hung up and she started to get ready she hop in the shower and stayed for about 20mins then she got out and started getting dress and put on her deniem jeans and her white and deniem baby phat shirt and her white new balances. and flat iron her hair down

And put her doorknocker earrings on with her name in it, she grab her phone and was finishing up the touches when he started blowing outside she went to the window and held up one finger telling him to hold on she grab her purse and went downstairs and lock the door and went to the car and got in

Shad:Damn lookin good like always
Dutchess:I know
Shad:Conceit azz

They laugh and he turn the music back up and pulled off and they pulled up to the soul food resturant owned by his uncle and aunt and everybody was hugging him cuz they hadnt seen him in so long and they got seated at there table.....

Shad:Damn Im hungry,pick what you want
Dutchess:Shyt I dont know.......I want some peach cobbler
Shad:Thats all?
Dutchess:Yeah
Shad:Well Im gettin me a full meal a nygga hungry as hell

They came and took there order then they started conversation

Dutchess:So how was it on your tour
Shad:It was nice it could have been better if C didnt come, but while on stage it was cool seeing all the fans
Dutchess:Dont you be nervous?
Shad:Naw not no more I use to tho, but whats been up with you
Dutchess:Nothing really just getting ready for college
Shad:You still going to state right
Dutchess:Yep you iz 2?
Shad:Yep thats where we all going except bobby he said he wanna stay on tour after we graduate
Dutchess:Oh......Wy you look at me like that

She said with a smile
Shad:Cuz Im trying to figure out why you dont have a man
Dutchess:How you know I dont already?
Shad:Because I would have knew about it already I have people watching you

She started laughing and he smiled

Dutchess:OMG you are so silly
Shad:Im serious tho your beautiful,sexy as hell, and you have a cool personality so I dont see why not
Dutchess: Im waiting for a certain person I'll put it like that

Before he could say anything else there food came out and they ate and he got a phone call and she was playing a game on hers and he move his legs on the outside of hers under the table and was playing with her thighs and she looked up at him and started laughing and he was smiling biting his lip still talking on the phone. she moved his hand and he acted like a girl

Shad:Oh no you didnt!

she fell out laughing and he got off the phone 2 mins later

Shad:Alright you ready to go
Dutchess:Yep

They got up from the table and just when they were leaving out they past dru and omari picking up there food and they kept walking she acted like she didnt see them. They got in the car and he pulled off. and went to see a movie "BUG" the scary movie and he had his arm around her and they watch the movie and once it was over it was still early and they went to her house and went to the basement and was playing the game then started watching t.v on the bed down there. As they were laying there he turned to her and started kissing her and she was kissing him back and it kept going for awhile when she stop cuz she felt his manhood grow harder

Shad:Whats wrong
Dutchess:I dont wanna do it
Shad:Its alright come on aint nobody gon know about it

He started kissing her again on her neck but this time stronger act it and he was trying to hold her hands down and she pushed him

Dutchess:Stop! I said I dont want to
Shad:Alright......wait no it aint alright first you have me thinking you feeling me, then you say you'll go on a date with me and everytime I buy you stuff you dont say nothing about it but the first time i wanna f**k you aint with it
Dutchess:I thought you wanted to give me that cuz we were friends
Shad:Bullshyt you know I been wanting you since 4th grade and now you pulling this shyt
Dutchess:I didnt know or I would have been told you
Shad:..............

They didnt say nothing for a whole minute

Shad:Im sorry I aint mean to yell at you I just got caught up for a minute,we cool
Dutchess:Yeah Im sorry if I did send off the wrong message tho,cuz i really do think of you as a friend
Shad:You cool,lets finish this movie tho you made me miss it
He said smiling and she started smiling too
Dutchess:you started it,it wasnt my fault
Shad: That was all you jumpin on top of my body talkin bout shad I love you ohhhh baby!!!
Sounding like a girl she started laughing
Dutchess:Shut up liar you are silly

They laid back down and watch the movie and 30 mins later after it was over they went upstairs and she walk him out

Shad:I'll see you later
Dutchess:Yep
Shad:Oh! my homeboyz spec and pleasure and them we throwing them a welcome home party on friday you coming
Dutchess:yeah i'll be there
Shad:Alright see you later babygirl

He gave her a hugg but also grindin on her and she laugh and he kiss her forehead and left out she lock the door and went to her room a few mins later her dad and step mom came home from work and went to sleep the next morning they were leaving for work and she went downstairs and she kissed her dad bye as he was leaving out and her step mom left shortly after that.

she sat on the couch holding her new puppy a golden retriever it was still a baby and she was holding it and she saw the door open and dru came in.

Dru:I dont get no hi or hello

She turn the channel and let the puppy fall asleep on her and he came and sat by her

Dru:Hello did you hear me
Dutchess:What do you want
Dru:Oh you still mad
Dutchess:No why would I still be mad
Dru:You trippin
He scooted on the side of her and kiss her and she set diamond in her doggy bed and move from bye dru and went to her room,and he followed her

Dru:Why was you with shad last night tryna make me jealous
Dutchess:Nope im doing me you said you didnt wanna be with me then you let ciara give you head
Dru:You trippin you act like im still ****ing her
Dutchess:I dont know you probably are
Dru:man what i got to do for you to forgive me,you know i love you
Dutchess: Cant tell
Dru: cmere stop walking away from me

He grab her back in the room and shut the door and he kissed her and she kissed him back it was something about his kisses she love she couldnt stop him when he did it and he was walking them to the bed and he laid her down slowly and laid down on top of her and they did it for the next 30 mins and then again afterward.

Dru:Do you forgive me
Dutchess:I guess im still mad tho
Dru:I guess,well Im staying over here i dont feel like going to school
Dutchess:Why?
Dru:you aint there its gon be boring
Dutchess:Aww aint that sweet

she laugh and laid on him and they went to sleep till her phone started ringing.

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AT FiRST I WAS'Z LiK3 "WHAT TH3 H3LL SHAD DOiNG??" LOL...BUMP BUMP BUMP...I S33 DUTCH3SS'Z iS'Z STRAiGHT SPRUNG!! LMFAO!!

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Dutchess:Hello?
Shad:Hey baby whats up
Dutchess:Who is this?
Shad:Oh now you dont know me
Dutchess:Shad?
Shad:Yeah
Dutchess:Oh Whats up
Shad:Can you pick me up later and drop me off to get my car at the shop I got some detailing
Dutchess:Yeah what time
Shad:Around 4:30
Dutchess:alright be ready
Shad:Alright peace
Dutchess:Peace

They hung up

Dru:Who was that?
Dutchess:Shad
Dru:What he want
Dutchess:A ride to get his car later on
Dru:Yall talking like that now
Dutchess:No he just need a ride
Dru:Tell him I'll pick him up, I already know what he tryna do and it aint happenin
Dutchess:Calm down Aint nothing gon happen
Dru:I know its not cuz im going to get him
Dutchess:Okay whatever

She turn over and went back to sleep,and he went back to sleep too
she woke up 30 mins later and started cleaning the house up before her parents got home and after her chores were done she sat on the couch and started doing designs on her manican head doll and he came downstairs after he made they bed back up and sat on the couch and was on the phone talking to somebody then hung-up

Dru:Damn thats sweet
Dutchess:Thank-you
Dru:you always said you was gon do hair
Dutchess:Of course, and you still gon be girls idol with that voice
Dru:yeah i know
Dutchess:I wonder how its gon be after we out of high school
Dru:I know we go back on tour
Dutchess:Man you always be leaving me
Dru:Its my dream tho and i gotta make that money,where do you see yo self in the next 5 years
Dutchess:mmmmm.......finally graduating from college and getting married and start my family,and have my hair shop going
Dru:Thats whats up,I think imma get married too
Dutchess:You get married
Dru:Yeah me why not
He said laughing
Dutchess: Cuz you big baller, mr. playa playa, got girls around the nation,you gotta settle down with just one person
Dru:Man im tired of you
They started laughing and play fighting and stop
Dutchess:Alright alright im sorry
She said laughing getting out of his grip he had on her
Dru:I bet you imma get married first
Dutchess:No I am
Dru:Bet
Dutchess:Put money on it
Dru:Iight fasho 200$
Dutchess:Alright fasho you better keep the promise too
Dru:Naw you just remember it

They laugh and then somebody knocked at the door

Dutchess: Who is it?
She said getting up off the couch, she open it and it was the police
Office Taylor: Are you Dutchess Marie Williams
Dutchess:Yeah thats me
Dru came up behind her
Dru:Whats wrong?
Officer Taylor:Your mom has just been in a bad accident your father is okay but she is at the hospital right now she not seriously injured but she will need alot of stiches in the face area
Dutchess:Okay
O.T: Do you need a ride down to the hospital
Dutchess:No thats okay I have a car
O.T:Okay thank you

She shut the door and she started crying cuz she thought he was going to say her dad died and dru held her and help her calm down

Dru:He alright we gotta get down to the hospital tho and make sure everything cool
Dutchess:Alright
Dru:Its alright baby,calm down

He kiss her forehead and help her up the stairs and they got dress going to the hospital and arrived 30 mins later. dru was driving fast.

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They rushed in and seen ciara and her dad sittin and he ran up to her and they hugged
Dutchess:Is everything alright
Dad:Yeah we had an accident and the car ran us off the road and since she was driving she hit her head on the steering wheel so she needed stitches and it knock her out alittle bit
Dru:Hey dru
Dru:Hello I wanted to make sure you was alright
Dad:Im just fine thank you for driving her
Dru:No problem sir
Dad:Ciara did you say hello?
Ciara:Hi
Dutchess:......
Dad:Marie
Dutchess:Hi,Well I just came to make sure you were alright im bout to go back home and get dressed
Dad:For what your on punishment
Dutchess:Why?
Dad:Because of that mouth for one and because you are suspended from school
Dutchess:Please dad
Dad:No not this time
Dutchess:Eww man whatever
Dad:See thats the main reason right there
Dru:I'll stay witchu, dont trip
Dad:See he can keep you company and We have our flight we going to vegas for the weekend
Dutchess:So you get to go somewhere but i dont
Dad:Basically,give me kiss

She kiss his cheek and hugged him
Dutchess:Bye daddy
Dad:Bye baby
Dru:See you later
Dad:Yeah catch you later Dru

They dap and hugged and he caught up with dutchess, and as they were getting on the elevator ciara caught up to them

Dad:Take her home for me so she can get some extra clothes,no fighting
Dru:Alright

Her dad went back down the hallway

Dru:Why you aint say nothing
Dutchess:Cuz I didnt want her to go
Druont start

She came in the elevator before it closed and they stayed quiet they didnt talk to her and kept going with there conversation,they got in the car and she started talking on her phone

Ciara:Yeah they got me riding in the car with this bytch.......she aint my sister........she right here,I dont give a f**k

Dutchess fist started tighting up and she was getting mad and she was going to turn around and knock the shyt out of her and dru held her hand as they were driving, and dutchess turned the radio up real loud,and ciara got mad and she hung the phone up and they pulled up and omari was there and shad,ciara ran out and hugged shad and dutchess walk in the house and omari and shad and dru walk behind them

Omari:Why she look mad
Dru:They was bout to start arguing in the car Im like please dont start fighting while im driving
Shad:I dont geet how they sister and they cant stand each other
Omari:Nygga its because of you
He said and they started laughing and went in the house and they were both in the kitchen and they bump each other and ciara looked at her

Dutchess:F**k you gon do bytch
Ciara:dont make me wope yo azz
Dutchess:Who got they azz wope last tyme
Ciara:F**k you
Dutchess:Yeah ya man ask me the same thang

Dutchess bust out laughing


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and no sooner then she said that ciara push her hard as hell into the refridgarator and they started fighting and ciara bust her lip and dutchess did her and dru and omari and shad ran into the kitchen and broke it up and dutchess was laughing as she suck the blood out her mouth and ciara had open the cut by her eye again and it was bleedin and ciara was still tryna get to her and dutchess laugh in her face

Omariamn yall cant be by yall self
Dutchess:F**k her
Ciara:I hate you bytch, Why you want everything I got
Dutchess:What?! If your refering to shad you got it twisted
Ciara:No my man wouldnt try to come on to you,you been tryna get to him and since he didnt want you,you been tryna break us up
Dutchesslaughing) OMG, shad tell her you like me
Shad:.......
Dutchess:Tell her whats up if you a real man say yo shyt
Ciara:Cuz its not true
Shad:....It is true, i mean i do like her, I like you too but when I seen her it started to become more than friends,Im sorry but as long as I still be around her imma still want her, I love ciara and you know this but i got feelings for your sister,and the other night I couldnt help it,I aint saying like we f**k or nothing but we was close to doing it


At this point everybody was quiet and dru look at her and got mad and walk out and dutchess went after him as ciara and shad started arguing and omari and no where to go he went in the living room and watch t.v

Dutchess:Im sorry
Dru:Man whatever
Dutchess:It wasnt even like that we didnt do nothing but kiss I swear Dru


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BUMP BUMP BUMP!!! UH OH...DRU MAD NOW...LOL

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