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A poem about my heart post #1  quote:



I was just sitting here, at the pc, feeling a plethra of emotions, and this poured out from my soul... thought that I would share it here.


My Heart

my heart aches
much at stake
love so intense
life without sense

in a daze
looking through haze
which for me
shall it be

roads split apart
inside the heart
is love strong
is it wrong

needing to be
with her... me
feel those arms
kept from harm

filling my mind
one of a kind
destiny it seems
awaken in dreams

needing her touch
wanting so much
feeling her whole
inside of my soul

together as one
or do we run
near or far
she's my bright star

life takes hold
shaping... im it's mold
twisting and turning
leaving me churning

inside and out
without a doubt
leave me to be
everything but free

come to me, please
dont be a tease
quench my insatiable thirst
pulled me from the first

only with you
can i seem to get through
this life of hell
with you, my shell



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post #2  quote:

I've been writing a lot of poetry lately... some very loving, and caring, and others very dark, dripping with an acidity to it. I thought that I would share some of my writings here, and there.


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post #3  quote:

A SOULS REDEMPTION

Spectacular and sensational
Filled with an amazing grace
Pardoning my heart from this burden
The beauty of your angelic face

Save my decrepid soul
From the pitfalls of despair
Reaching inside of my deadend heart
A gentle touch... reviving care

My life lays within your loving hands
The balance of my destiny and fate
I've been forever captured by you
There's no turning back... it's too late.

K. Rucker ~ 10 May 2005



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Rippling effect through my mind
Filled with fears
Dripping down my face
Acid... in the form of these wreched tears

Wipe them away as they fall
Careful though so you don't burn your hand
The hatred forms
And now I must make a stand

You were a deadly toxin to my brain
And into my blood stream
Running in my body
Living inside a horrible dream.

K. Rucker ~ 10 May 2005



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post #5  quote:

Lies and deceit
All part of your game
Playing someone's mind
It's such a crying shame

You hurt and destroy
What someone took as gold
How dare you... how can you
Have to be so cold

Twisting and turning
The knife in my heart
Slowly, you were killing me
Your plan from the start.

K. Rucker ~ 10 May 2005



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post #6  quote:

DECEPTION

Out of control
Don't know what to believe
My heart or my head
Could I have been deceived

Were they lies or truth
How can I tell them apart
As doubt rips through me
Blazing and burning straight to my heart

Was I a fool not to see
What was laid out in front of my eyes
As you gave me more and more
Nothing but a pack full of lies

K. Rucker ~ 10 May 2005



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post #7  quote:

Rain falls... dripping from the sky above...
bringing memories back... of our once shared love.

Hearts race... skin burns with desire...
our passion ignites... we are both on fire.

Touch... sensual in every way....
freedom... together each and every day.

Completion of souls... a marriage of hearts...
through this we do give... and never shall part.

K. Rucker ~ 25 Jan 2005



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post #8  quote:

Love me forever
Life my heart
Hold me closely
Never part.

Feel my embrace
Close to your skin
Touching you lightly
Same blood... we are now kin.

K. Rucker ~ 25 Jan 2005



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post #9  quote:

my rain
my passion
my love
my obsession
my life
my breath
my happiness
my depth
my reason
my power
my giver
my warrior
my heart
my keeper
my soul
my dreamer
my sunshine
my flame
my everything
my rain

K. Rucker ~ 26 Jan 2005



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post #10  quote:

Kris...

You have said the very same things that are in my heart.

I have total comprehension.

Beck.



sometimes I just....................
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post #11  quote:

Thanks, Becker... they just seem to keep pouring out.


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post #12  quote:

The blood drips from within my hands
The stake embedded in my heart
Crimson stains across my body
My soul being ripped apart

A razors edge to walk
The jagged truth hard to swallow
Trying not to fall off the deep end
The inside is hallow

Web of deceit being spun
Around the body of life
Weaved with dark tales
Lit of fire and cut with knife


K. Rucker ~ 10 May 2005



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post #13  quote:

SLUMBER

A careless whisper
and a stolen glance
Anything to have you near
and to have that chance

You've awoken me
from a slumber of years
Your love brings such light
and chases away my fears


Kris Rucker ~ 10 May 2005



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post #14  quote:

SPARK

Crying
Dying
Flying
Trying

Don't leave me here alone
The darkness wants to claim
Burning from the inside out
Rage... and uncontrollable flame

Come to me... setting me free
But, without your love, it's empty and dark
I need your guiding hand
My life brought alive by your eternal spark.



Kris Rucker ~ 10 May 2005



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post #15  quote:

Falling
Drifting
Useless
Lost

Fine me locked deep inside
Aware of nothing near
Surrounded, smothered
Trapped inside of my fear

I can't feel myself anymore
I've become numb to all
Not feeling, seeing, hearing
Don't know how to stop this fall

Reaching out... grasping
Can't find my way
So maybe I'll just close up
Here insde my darkness and stay.



Kris Rucker ~ 11 May 2005



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