turn back the hands of time. PART 2. LAST PART. |
| Posted by: fizzycaramel12 | | if yall read my first story jarrell, ican't ake this anymore, then you'll love this story. called 'turn back the hands of time" (you rell, and partially dru)
Characters:
u
dru
omari/sabrina
rell/angel
demario//ayanna
jessyca (your cousin)
nakeeya (ayanna cousin)
omani (sabrina and omari's daughter)
omari aka mari jr (sabrina and omari's son)
chris stokes
A.J.
kelly (rashaan's daughter)
Shizzy
Alexis
Kadjo
Shami
Cynna
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| Posted by: RaZbnumba1grl | | Yay I am in the story..Thank u!!And I will b waitin..
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| Posted by: fizzycaramel12 | | (ayanna and demario have been married for a year now and during that time sabrina and omari hav been planning their wedding. but now, rell is leaving to tgo to EPIC in los angeles)
(you're at home watching down in the delta with dru when your phone rings)
u: hello
angel: hey girl.
u: oh hey whassup whatchu doin'
angel: helping rell pack.
u: awww.
angel: what?
u: imma miss him.
angel: me too. but we can still see him on tour when he blow up. and on rap city and 106 and park.
u: i know but it won't be the same.
angel: i know but anyway, i called to see if you and dru wanna come over to help.
u: uh hol up (talking to dru) hey dru, you wanna go over rell's house to help him pack)
dru: yeah o.k.
u: iight (talking to angel) yeah we coming.
angel: iight
omari: (in the background) HIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII Y/N.
u: i take it errbody else is already there.
angel: anw just sabrina and omari.
u: why just them.
angel: cause i wanted to play with their cute little children.
u: lol iight girl i'll c ya later then.
angel: iight ~1~
u: ~1~ (yall hang up. you go upstairs and put on:
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anf some blue denim shorts with:
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(when you get dressed, you and dru head down to rells house. sabrina answers the door.
sabrina: hey whassup girl. i knew you was coming when i heard omari screaming your name.
u: that's your future husband girl.
sabrina: for real. don't get it twisted (yall laugh and walk into the house.
u: hey whassup yall.
errbody: hey.
angel: bout time. here. help me move this box (she hands you the box and you nearly fell)
dru: here let me get that (he takes the box from and goes outside to put it on the trunk)
u: dayum, what you go in these boxes rell.
rell: well, i wanted to take everything with me.
u: well, you ain't gon' be able to do that.
rell: who you telling (thinking about you [cause remeber, he wanted you to go with him])
u: anyway (tryna change the subject cause you knew what he was talking about.) when you leaving.
rell: next weekend.
omari: yeah, and we all gotta do something before he leave.
angel: too bad he gon miss mari and omani first birthday in two months.
rell: i'll try to make it if i'm not busy. (dru comes back inthe house)
sabrina: man, it ain't gon' the same without you rell.
dru: not the way he packing. dayum rell, you acting like you ain't never gon' see us again.
rell: i might not. (they all look at him) i'm just playing dayum. (rell gets finished packing a box) iight, i need some help loading these onto the truck so here (he gives errbody a box except you and they all go out to the truck. so it's just you and rell)
rell: y/n you sure?
u: sure of what?
rell: you sure you don't wanna come with me?
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| Posted by: fizzycaramel12 | | chanel, you'll be in a group with y/n and some other girls a couple of months after rell joins EPIC iight. holla | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: fizzycaramel12 | | rell: you sure you don't wanna come with me?
u: rell, we went over this in the 8th grade. (picking up a box)
rell: b ut, you never gave me a solid answer. you jsut told me that angel should come with me instead. that's not a yes or no.
u: rell, what would i do in the music business.
rell: sing, that's what you do best isn't it.
u: does htis have anything to do with what we know about each toher. becuase you haven't said anything about since we were 13 until. now. so there has to be an issue.
rell: i just want you to come with me.
u: no rell, my life is here with my friends...
rell: so i'm not your friend?
u: you didn't let me finish.
rell: i don't need you to. you said enough (he picks up a box and heads to the van.)
~with ayanna and demario~
(they are in the food court in the mall)
ayanna: demario?
demario: yeah? (eating a hamburger)
ayanna: i want kids (demario almost spit his hamburger on ayanna's face)
demario: kids
ayanna: yeah. i've been looking at sabrina and omari's two children and i've decided i want some.
demario: ayanna, sabrina and omari aren't even married yet.
ayanna: but they're gonna.
demario: but i don't think that we're ready yet, o.k.
ayanna: demario, i understand what your trying to point out. i mean we are only 19 but, there is a hole in my heart and i think the only way to fill it is if i have a child.
demario: but ayanna, it takes conception and a 9 month justation period [jimmy neutron,lol] and hours and hours of labor.
ayanna: well then what do you think about...adoption.
demario: ...
~with the others~
angel: o.k. that's all. we're done for today (out of breath)
u: good. hey dru, you wanna go out to dinner or something?
dru: o.k. i'll be by your house at aroun 8:00 o.k.
u: o.k.
dru: guys i'll see yall later, i gotta go to work.
errbody: o.k. buy.
omari: yeah. me sabrina and the kids better get home too. they probably hungry we'll cathc up with yall later.
angel: hey yall, can you give me a ride to my cousins house.
sabrina: sure. come on. (they leave and it's just you and rell)
rell: ain't you leaving.
u: no, not until i set something straight! when i say something negative about our friendship (and keep in mind i didn't mean to say it) you get all cruetal(sp?). but as soon as you say something out of line which you meant to say, you think that it's o..k. to speak it to go along with your okey doke.
rell: ...
u: now, what i said, it didn't mean to come out the way it did. so don't go tell me you hurt cause you hurt me many of times in the past but i never took it out on you permanently! and all because i won't make a decision that will make you happy instead of me. what if i don't want to go with you to EPIC. you an't change that rell. so, i wish you the best of luck, but don't get mad if i'm not there. o.k. (you leave out and drive back to your house.)
~with ayanna and demario~
ayanna: well then what do you feel about adoption?
demario: adoption!
ayanna: yeah
demario: well what about...
ayanna: look demario, we can just tyr it out and see how it feels to hav a child for a week or so.
demario: ...
ayanna: i mean, i'm willing to make this relationship work. so if you don't want a child, i won't ruin relationship with a stupid disagreement o.k. ...so what do you think.
demario: ...o.k ayanna, we will try this out for a day. but i'm telling you, if i don't like it, no children.
ayanna: (smile) o.k.
~with sabrina and omari~
(they just dropped angel off)
sabrina: omari, take a detour to the mall righ quick.
omari: why?
sabrina: i gotta pick up the flower order and my dress.
oamri: oh yeah. that reminds me. i gotta go town to the tailor shop to have my suit fitted. you mind taking the children with you and i'll comepick yall up after.
sabrina: ...o.k.
omari: thanks baby (she kisses him. thye reach the mall and you put the children in the stroller)
sabrina: i'll see you in an hour.
omari: o.k. (he pulls off and just as sabrina walked into the door, she saw ayanna and demario coming out)
ayanna: hey sabrina, hi mari, his omani (in a playful voice)
sabrina: hey whassup. hey demario. where yall goin'.
demario: to the little children assoc.
sabrina: ain't that that place where you can adopt a child for a week to see how it is to hav one?
ayanna: yeah.
sabrina: whatchu going over there for?
demario: ayanna want's a child but i don't. so we're gonna see how it feels and if i like it...
ayanna: we're gonna have a child.
sabrina: awww. belive me. it's a beautiful thing.
ayanna: i know. where you goin'.
sabrina: to pick up the flowers and my dress for the wedding in 2 weeks.
ayanna: oh o.k. you still need somebody to watch the children when you go to school on monday.
sabrina: yeah would you do it,
ayanna: fa sho. it's more experience for me and demario.
sabrina: o.k. well i'll see yall later.
demario: o.k. bye
~with dru~ | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: Lily_Petal1 | | Bump bump bump...
This story is going to be great!!!
I have one question though
Wasn't I supposed to be in it somewhere ?!?
Just wondering... | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: fizzycaramel12 | | yeah i'm sorry gril. you in the story now. you gon' ba a dancer iight. | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: Omariyah | | GROAHHH!!!!!! Gurly Gurl me and some kids LOL this is gonna be funny as hell LOL keep it up BUMP BUMP BUMP BUMP BUMP | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: fizzycaramel12 | | i added 2 more character. carla and vanati. they gon' be dancer too. | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: fizzycaramel12 | | ~with dru~
(he reached the mall and goes into fottlocker [cause that
s where he works.] then a customer come in the mall and she's very pretty. she has a carmael complexion, brown eyes, and long honey brown hair. she walks up to dru who is stocking shoes on the shelf)
f/v: excuse me? (dru turns around and is nearly stunned by her beauty)
f/v: do yall have any high top white on white airs here?
dru: uh...uh yeah...um they're over there on the shelf.
f/v: (smiling) thank you (she walks over tothe shelf and a couple minutes later, she comes back up to dru)
f/v: sorry for bothering you again but do you have this in a sixe 8.
dru: i'll go see (he goes into the back and brings her back her shoe.)
f/v: thank you. i would like to ring these up now
dru: o.k. (dru goes behind the counter and rings her stuff up)
dru: um, can i ask you...what's your name?
f/v: oh. it's lashawn. your?
dru: i'm dru. um...can i get your number. maybe we can do something sometime.
lashawn: (smiling) sure. its 123-4567
dru: o.k. catch you later.
lashawn: o.k. (she leaves)
~with ayanna and demario~
(they reach the agency adn walk in)
lady: hi. how may i help you today?
ayanna: hi, me and my husband wanted to adopt a temporary child.
lady: oh o.k. follow me (they follow her in to the playroom.)
lady: we have infants, toddlers, teenagers...
demario: no teenagers.
lady: lol. o.k. you can look around and yall can make your decision. (she leaves and demario and ayanna look at the toddlers and blah, blah, blah. then the lady comes back.)
lady: have you made your decision yet?
ayanna: yes (smiling) i think we have.
lady: o.k. which one.
ayanna: ...
~with angel~
(she's at her cousins house taking a shower when the phone rings. her cousin answers it)
chania (her cousin): hello.
m/v: um hey, is angel there?
chania: yeah, who is this.
m/v: just ell her a very close friend (laugh)
chania: ...o.k. ANGEL! (yelling upstairs)
angel: YEAH!
chania: TELE! (angel get's out of the shower and wraps a towel around her. then she goes downstairs to answer the phone.
angel: hello?
m/v: open the door.
angel: what?
m/v: just open it (like a crazy person, she goes to open the door and she sees...)
angel: AHHHHHHHHHHHH!
~with rell~ | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: fizzleschulita1 | | girl put me in there make me a love interest wit raz like raz cheats on ayanna and den she finds out and he divorces her thatll be hott!!!!!!!
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| Posted by: yum-yum4b2k | | bump it gurl,!!!!!!!!!! don't forget to throw me in derr sum where!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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| Posted by: fizzycaramel12 | | ~with rell~
(he just got finished loading the boxes andhe closes the back of the truck)
rell: iight guys, you can take it to storage o.k. (the truck pulls of and rell goes back into the house. he decides he wants to call you to apologize. so he called you but i guess you're not home yet so he leaves you a message)
rell: hey whassup babygirl. i wanted to say i'm sorry for my reactions earlier. i guess i'm a little sensitive because imma be leaving my best friends soon. but i don't wanna go it my most charished friend is gonna be mad at me. so please call me back so we can talk. bye (he hangs up and sits back on the couch and starts thinking about you as he lets a tear role down your face.)
~with omari~
(he's at the tailor shop getting his suit fitted on him)
tailor: o.k. we're all done. you can go look in the mirror to see if it's adjusted right.
omari: o.k. (he goes to mirror) it's coo. its...then he looks closely in the mirror. he starts touching his face)
omari: what the hell is wrong with my face. (he starts getting little tiny black bumps on his face)
tailor: is everything alright. is the suit o.k.
omari: yes, everything is fine. the suit is coo. um...here's your money (as he begins changing) and thanks again (when he's done changing, he quickly leaves out of the store and heads to the mall)
~with sabrina~
(she's in the dress store)
lady: o.k. here you go.
sabrina: aww, this dress is beautiful.
omani: blabble (as she spits bubbles)
sabrina: (smile) you like it too?
lady: you have some cute children
sabrina: thank you.
lasy: they look just like this man i know named omari (sabrina looks at her like omari who?) especially the little boy.
sabrina: um...o.k. thanks again. (she leaves with the dress and heads to the flower store and picks up the flowers. just as she was about to go to the parking lot, omari walks in the mall)
omari: hey baby whassup ready to go.
sabrina: yeah (the get in the car and pull off)
sabrina: omari?
omari: yeah?
sabrina: do you know this lady that works in the dress store. i saw on her name tag. it said, crystal thomas
omari: ...
~with ayanna and demario~
ayanna: i think we both like the little girl right there (ayanna points to this little girl waving to them and smiling)
lady: aw yes. thats little morgan cook. she's a aweet little thing.
demario: yeah she is cute.
ayanna: see, demario is adapting to her already
lady: lol o.k. would you follow me and i'll get the paperwork
ayanna and demario: o.k. (so they file the paperwork and walk over to ther little girl.
lady: hi morgan
morgan: (smiling) hi. ...are these my new parents.
ayanna: lol, no sweetie but you'll be hanging with us for the next week.
morgan: (whispering to the lady) i like them
lady: aww, well you wanna go home with them?
morgan: yes
lady: o.k. there you go.
demario: thank you miss. bye
lady: bye (they leave and drive home)
~with angel~
angel: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! NAKEEYA GIRL. I HAVEN'T SEEN YOU IN A LONG TIME!
nakeeya: girl i know. it's been to long (they hug)
angel: whatchu come down here for?
nakeeya: i came for sabrina's wedding. me and jessyca in it/
angel: jessyca here too?
nakeeya: yep.
angel: i know y/n gon' be happy/
nakeeya: we tried to stop by her house but she wasn't there.
angel: well come in (nakeeya comes in the house and jessyca comes up and comes in the house)
jessyca: angel!
angel: jessyca! (they hug too) i'm glad to see you again girl?(the phone rings and angel answers it)
angel: hello
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| Posted by: Babygirl 4 B2K | | Thanx for puttin' me in ya story as a dancer dat's cool! BUMP! | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: fizzycaramel12 | | angel: hello
m/v: angel.
angel: who dis.
omari: it's omari?
angel: oh hey omari whassup?
omari: can i come over there. i need you to look at something.
angel: well what about sabrina.
omari: we at home. plus she goin' over y/n house.
angel: o.k. what's wrong.
omari: i'll tell you when i get over there o.k.
angel: iight ~1~ (they hang up)
nakeeya: who was that.
angel: that was omari.
nakeeya: ohh, that fine hunk of chocolate coming over?
angel: yeah but he's still with sabrina
*note: sabrina and nakeeya don't like each other becuase nakeeya always had a thing for omari*
nakeeya: ugh. i can't believe he still with that heffer (sorry sabrina)
angel: actually they're engaged and have two children.
nakeeya: dayuum, it's worst than i thought. but it'll never last. seeing that it is sabrina (sorry girl)
angel: w/e
(ok earlier what happened between sabrina and omari)
sabrina: ...her name was crystal thomas)
omari: crystal! (he nearly choked.
sabrina: whos crystal omari!
omari: o.k. when i went away for that summer to go to florida, i met her. we had a couple of drinks and went to dinner that's all.
sabrina: was i still going with you!
omari: ...
sabrina: was i dtill going with you!
omari: ...yes but it was only dinner. we didn't do anything.
sabrina: don't talk to me.
omari: sabrina?
sabrina: don't talk to me (he deosn't say another word. he just keeps driving until they get home)
there you go, lol
~with you~
(you was at home looking through appartment books when your doorbell rings. its...)
i'll tell yall when i get back from the hair dressers. sorry. i got school the week after the next | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: unleashed! | | hey girl you know who it is its yo best friend lol. anyway this is good and that crystal chick and omari better not have done anything. you don't have to say sorry when somebody say something bout me in the story its alright. its just a story. let me shut up and bump bump bump. | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: kokoalicious06 | | Hey thanx for puttin me in your story!
***Chynna Doll***
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| Posted by: OmarisFlyyChic | | (you was looking for an appartment in the appartment books when your doorbell rings. you answer it and its...sabrina)
u: hey sabrina whassup.
sabrina: (calmly) i think omari's cheating on me (she comes in the house and sits on you couch as you close the door. you sit next to her)
u: why you think that?
sabrina: o.k. this is what happened (she tells you the whole story)
u: i mean they did just go out to dinner.
sabrina: but i don't think he's telling me everything. he's stuttering in between sentences and stuff.
u: don't jump to conclusions iight.
sabrina: o.k. w/e. but i'm on the lookout. anyway, i saw your lover boy in the mall talking to some girl.
u: who's my lover boy?
sabrina: dru, you know.
u: me and dru are strictly friends for now.
sabrina: yeah for now. but anyway, she was very pretty though. they exchanged numbers and everything.
u: o.k. like i care. aynway, that reminds me. i gotta go find a oufit tonight.
sabrina: who you goin' with this time.
u: whatchu mean this time. it's just me and dru. a friendly dinner. nothing else.
sabrina: well you better cancel your plans because i think dur gon' have something else planned for tonight.
u: w/e. he wouldn't do that to me.
sabrina: o.k .think what you wanna. but i get feelings about theses type of things
~with dru~
(he just got out of the shower and he's put on a black and white sean john tee with some blue jean shorts and some black and white high top aces. he was about to go wash his clothes and he checks his pocket and pulls out lashawns number)
dru: oh let me call her. (he dials her number)
lashawn: hello.
dru: hey can i speak to lashawn.
lashawn: speaking. who dis.
dru: this dru. the ***** you met a footlocker.
lashawn: oh hey dru whassup?
dru: hey whatchu doin'.
lashawn: nothin' much. i'm bored as a mofo.
dru: um...you wanna go out tonight.
lashawn: where?
dru: to the club.
lawshawn: oh fa sho.
dru: iight, i'll be over there at 8:00 iight.
lashawn: o.k. see you later
dru: iight by beautiful
lashawn: (smile) bye (they hang up but then dru just remembered he had dinner with you tonight)
dru: oh shyt. she gon' be so mad at me. but i can't just break the date with lashawn. let me call y/n (he calls you)
u: hello.
dru: hey y/n
u: oh hey whassup dru?
dru: um... we can't go to dinner tonight.
u: oh...why not?
dru: because...uh...my momma want me to help her at the church-off cook-off ....yeah.
u: oh well, i guess we gotta do this another time then.
dru: maybe...iight bye (he hangs up and yo turn to sabrina. she gives the i told you so look)
u: i don't care. i doesn't bother me.
sabrina: yeah right.
u: anyway (you see that you have messages so you check them. you get the message from rell)
u: ugh, let me call him (you pick up the phone and dial rells number)
rell: holla at me.
u: hey rell.
rell: oh whassi[ y/n. you get my message.
u: yeah.
rell: i'm sorry.
u: it's o.k.
rell: um, can i make it up to you.
u: you don't need to do that.
rell: well, do you just wanna go to the club tonight then.
u: oh o.k. i'm in the mood for partying.
rell: iight, i'll tell errbody else then
u: o.k. see you then.
rell: pick you up at 8:00 ~1~
u: ~1~ (yall hang up)
sabrina: where you goin'
u: we're goin' to the club.
sabrina: all of us.
u: yeah.
sabrina: what time?
u: 8:00
sabrina: i don't hink ayanna and demario coming though.
u: why?
sabrina: (she tells you the story)
u: aww that's cute. i hope it works out.
~with ayanna and demario~
(they reach their house)
ayanna: this is where you'll be staying.
morgan: it's pretty
demario: come on, let's go inside (they go into the house and up to demario's guest room
note: ayanna moved in with demario
demario: now unitl we can get you some stuff, this is where you'll be staying.
ayanna: yeah, and we're goin' shopping tomorrow.
morgan: i'll like that.
ayanna: o.k. (the phone rings and ayanna answers it while demario plays with morgan)
ayanna: hello?
rell: hey ayanna.
ayanna: whassup rell.
rell: nothin'. you wanna go to the club with the rest of the crew.
ayanna: sorry i can't
rell: why
ayanna (ayanna tells him the whole story)
rell: oh
ayanna: hol up i got somebody on the other line. (she clicks over)
ayanna: hello
sabrina: hey ayanna
ayanna: hey whassup.
sabrina: i know rell called you already didn't he?
ayanna: yeah he on the other line.
sabrina: you're not going are you?
ayanna: naw.
sabrina: you think you'll feel like watching mani and mari.
ayanna: sure no prob.
sabrina: thanks yay. you the one.
ayanna: i know.
sabrina: well i'll cathc you later iight.
ayanna: o.k. (she clicks back over) sorry bout that rell)
rell: it's iight. we'll just catch you another time o.k.
ayanna: iight ~1~
rell: ~1~ (they hang up)
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| Posted by: OmarisFlyyChic | | OH AND THIS IS ME JAZZY, NOT OMARISFLYYCHIC. SORRY BOUT THAT | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: unleashed! | | whats goin happen with me and omari?
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| Posted by: fizzycaramel12 | | ~with angel~
(she left her cousins house and drove nakeeya and jessyca to her house. she then helps them carry their bags into the guestroom when her doorbell rings. she answers it and it's omari)
angel: hey omari
omari: you see my face.
angel: omari what's wrong with...ewww. what the hell is that.
omari: i don't know. i came over here to ask you since you was an expert in this kinda stuff.
angel: come in (omari comes in and angel and him sit on the couch)
angel: What do you think it is.
omari: i think i'm breaking out from something
angel: well... (touching his face inspecting the bumps)...we can set and appointment for you for the doctors.
omari: iight.
angel: i'll call for you o.k. and let you know (still touching his face)
omari: um....uh you see that one right there.
angel: right where
omari: that one, above my lip. that's the ugliest looking one
angel: (moving closer to his face so she can see the bump) i don't see no... (he interrupted her with a passionante kiss)
~with ayanna and demario~
(demario is playing with morgan when ayanna walked over to them)
ayanna: so morgan, where did you live at first.
morgan: here. i've always lived here. or at least i think.
demario: you have a very large and intelligent vocabulary for a 6 year old.
morgan: well i learned a lotta things from my mommy and my daddy before they both died.
ayanna: how did they?
morgan: my mommy died when i was this much (holding up 3 fingers.) she died in a car crash. people say it was becuase she was drunk...but i know that's not what happened.
demario: what do you think happened.
morgan: i think my daddy killed her. he never loved her.
ayanna: i am so sorry.
morgan: he just stayed with her because they had me.
ayanna: what happened to your daddy?
morgan: all i know is a couple of people killed him.
demario: what was your mother and fathers name.
morgan: my mommy's name was penelope asia jones.
demario: pretty. what about your daddy?
morgan: i don't know his middle name and my mommy and daddy didn't get married so i don't know his last name either. all i know was that his name was rashaan. (ayanna and demario look at each other with surprise in their eyes) | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: fizzycaramel12 | | ~with angel~
(she left her cousins house and drove nakeeya and jessyca to her house. she then helps them carry their bags into the guestroom when her doorbell rings. she answers it and it's omari)
angel: hey omari
omari: you see my face.
angel: omari what's wrong with...ewww. what the hell is that.
omari: i don't know. i came over here to ask you since you was an expert in this kinda stuff.
angel: come in (omari comes in and angel and him sit on the couch)
angel: What do you think it is.
omari: i think i'm breaking out from something
angel: well... (touching his face inspecting the bumps)...we can set and appointment for you for the doctors.
omari: iight.
angel: i'll call for you o.k. and let you know (still touching his face)
omari: um....uh you see that one right there.
angel: right where
omari: that one, above my lip. that's the ugliest looking one
angel: (moving closer to his face so she can see the bump) i don't see no... (he interrupted her with a passionante kiss)
~with ayanna and demario~
(demario is playing with morgan when ayanna walked over to them)
ayanna: so morgan, where did you live at first.
morgan: here. i've always lived here. or at least i think.
demario: you have a very large and intelligent vocabulary for a 6 year old.
morgan: well i learned a lotta things from my mommy and my daddy before they both died.
ayanna: how did they?
morgan: my mommy died when i was this much (holding up 3 fingers.) she died in a car crash. people say it was becuase she was drunk...but i know that's not what happened.
demario: what do you think happened.
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| Posted by: Lily_Petal1 | | What the heck is the matter with omari?!? Did he lose his frekin mind?
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| Posted by: jarellsboo | | omg wassup wid omari man!!
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oooo we goin 2 da club lol!! | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: fizzesdyme18 | | OOOOOOOOOOOO THATS HIS BABIE OH MY GOD LOL BUMP BUMP BUMP BUMP BUMP BUMPB UMPB UMBP UBMP BUMBP UBMPBU BMPBUBMPBUB MBPBUBM,B PB BUBMB PUBM BPB UB MBPB
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| Posted by: yum-yum4b2k | | omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!dis story is crazy!!!!!!!!!!1, well if anyone brakes up, and omari needs another girl, holla at cha gurl alexis!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!lol
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| Posted by: Omariyah | | LAWDDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!! Rashaan's baby!!!!!! WTH is going on with O?? Do I needs to get tha belt??? LOL | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: *JaReLLsGuRL* | | BUMP BUMP BUMP
omg!!!....i can't believe morgan is rashaans baby
dis is sooo good gurl! keep on writing!! | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: Babygirl 4 B2K | | BUMP! BUMP! BUMP! Morgan is Rashaans baby and Omari kissed Angel - OMG! Dis story crazy, post some more! BUMP! | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: unleashed! | | why in the hell in omari kissing my friend???? i don't like that ****.
anyway bump bump bump bump | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: J-b's girl | | Oh my goodness. These people in this story are trippin'. Bump bump bump | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: fizz wifey | | bump bump bump bump bump bump bump bump!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! bump bump bump bump bump bump bump bump!!!!!!!!!!!!! bump bump bump bump bump!!!!!! | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: razblover_4life | | THIS STORY IS HOT  .........I LOVED THE FIRST ONE AND IM LOVIN THIS ONE TOO........I CANT BELIEVE OMARI KISSED ANGEL!!! Y/N AND RELL NEED TO GO AHEAD AN HOOK UP AND STOP FRONTIN'
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| Posted by: fizzycaramel12 | | ~with omari and angel~
(he interrupts her with a passionate kiss)
angel: omari, what are you doing?
omari: um...uh...i don't know.
angel: oh my gosh (she stands up)
omari: i'm sorry angel i just, i just got caught up in the moment.
angel: omari i think you should leave.
omari: angel i'm sorry.
angel: i'll make the appointment for you but you have to go...right now.
omari: but why (getting up)
angel: because i'm hot and bothered from that kiss and if you don't leave, we both might do something we'll regret.
omari: oh o.k. are you sure (he said sexily)
angel: (trying to control herself) mmm....hmmm (he comes closer to her)
omari: are you sure (kissing her neck and rubbing her thigh)
angel: mmmm....yes (trying to restrain herself from taking off his and her clothes.)
omari: shhh, nobody will know
angel: but my cousins.
omari: come on let's go in to the room (he picks her up and she wraps her legs around his waist and they head upstairs in to angels room and locks the door. they didn't think they could make it to the bed so they got to the nearest wall and angel took off her pants and her underwear and as omari took off his pants and slipped on a condum and...)
~with u and sabrina~
sabrina: iight look, i should be goin cause i gotta go home and pick out a outfit and drop the twins off at ayanna's house.
u: oh iight. see you tonight.
sabrina: o.k. c ya (her and the twins go home first so she can pick up some things for the twins tonight.)
sabrina: wehre is omari? ...he probably over rell house (so she picks up some things and head over to ayanna's house but she can see them rushing out of the house with morgan)
sabrina: hey hey hey. where you going?
ayanna: we've gotta go.
sabrina: but what about omani and omari.
ayanna:well be back soon. we'll still be able to watch them
sabrina: well what's wrong?
demario: we'll tell you when we get back
sabrina: but...(they get in the car and drive off) ...well let me go drop them off at angels house before i bring them back to ayanna and demario's house (so she gets in her car and drives to angel's house)
~with angel and omari~
(omari slips on the condum and...you know what heppened [they're freaky cause they're doing it on the wall,lol]
~meanwhile downstairs~
nakeeya and jessyca head downstairs to get something to eat before jessyca goes to your house.
nakeeya: dayum where the hell is angel.
jessyca: yah she supposed to be riding me down to y/n's house.
nakeeya: she probably upstairs using the bathroom or something.
jessyca: let me go get her (so she goes up stairs to the bathroom but sees angel's not in there. but then she hears noises coming from her room so she listens in closely, and she hears angel screaming omari's name)
jessyca: ain't he engaged to sabrina (so she takes a bobby pin and gets the door unlocked and she busts into angels room)
jessyca: what the hell is going on here? (they jump and omari drops angel from his waist they hurry to get their slothes and put them back on)
angel: oh my gosh!
jessyca: omari, ain't you supposed to be engaged to sabrina
omari: please don't tell her!
jessyca: i just might. this is wrong what yall doing. and didn't you tell us in the car that you go with rell. i should just tell him too.
angel: jessyca, you can't! please you can't (they hear the doorbell ring jessyca goes to answer it and sees sabrina with omani and omari)
jessyca: hey sabrina (smiling) we was just talking about you. (yelling upstairs) angel, it's sabrina!
angel and omari: oh shyt! (they quickly striaghten theirselves out and head downstairs)
sabrina: what the hell! omari what is goin on. why were you in the room with angel!
omari: ...
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| Posted by: unleashed! | | i can't believe he did that to me:starting to cry: angel is a backstabbing you know what.
anyway bump bump bump bump its still good even though he did what he did | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: razblover_4life | | DAMN!!!!! I N BELIEVE WHAT THEY JUST DID??????? OOOOOO..... ITS GETTIN REALLY GOOD........BUMP BUMP BUMP. | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: yum-yum4b2k | | omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!i cann't believe they just did what they did,(but if u need another gurl to get heir freak on wit omari, don't hesitate put put alexis in derr lol)
these people needs to stop frontin, and just get wit da ona they really love!!!!!!!!!!!!! | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: rellsosexi | | NOOOOOOOOO......i dont want O like that ...rells muh man..damn .nooooo...come on now..shyt..angel isn't like that...
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| Posted by: Lily_Petal1 | | OMG OMG!!!! What the heck is going on!?!?!!
Anyways bump bump bump......... | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: yum-yum4b2k | | omg!!!!!!!! rellsosexy i know u ain't like dat for real!!!!!, now j-boog..... maybe, but i know u don't want omari like dat!!!!!!!!!( but i do, so don't forget if u need another gurl to cheat wit omari put alexis in derr !!!!!!!!lmaorotf j/p!!!!!!!)(i'm not like dat in real life, but i would like to be wit omari! in dis story!!!!!)
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| Posted by: J-b's girl | | Omari and Angel know that they wrong as hell for doing that to Sabrina. Yo' this story is the bomb girl, bump this! | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: yum-yum4b2k | | thank you, but i was just keepin it real!!!!!!! if u need sum one to get wit omari, put alexis derr, not some one, who don't even like him like dat!!!!!!lol
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| Posted by: fizzycaramel12 | | *not with dru,. i got writers block for him*
~ayanna and demario~
(they reach the agency)
ayanna: um excuse me miss.
lady: oh hey, back so soon/
demario: we don't wanna keep her.
lady: is she bad?
ayanna: no it's not that but, i really decided that i do not want children right now.
lady: well we did have a contract...
demario: SHYT WE AIN'T SIGN NOTHIN' BYTCH. NOW TAKE HER BACK HERE (he gives morgan back to the lady and they quickly leave out and speed off)
~with sabrina, angel, and omari~
sabrina: ...why were you in the room with angel!?!?
omari: ....(he looks at angel who looks at jessyca who goes into the kitchen)
angel: uh....he came over.
sabrina: for what?!
angel: because he said that he wanted me to look at the spots on his face since i did have a little experience in this.
sabrina: (she looks at omari face) oh (still partially believing him) well i did come over here to drop off omani and omari till i could get dressed and send them over to demario's hose but uh...i think i can manage. omari you coming, all of us supposed to be going out to the club tonight.
omari: um...yeah. you not still mad at me.
sabrina: not now at least (looking at angel) come on omari (they leave out and angel starts crying. jessyca comes out of the kitchen)
jessyca: you can take me to y/n house now.
angel: look jessyca i hesitated...
jessyca: spare me the detail. i don't even wanna here it. i'll be waiting outside with my stuff in the car (she grabs her things and goes to the car. angel leaves out too and drives her to your house)
*later that night*
~with you~
(you just got out of the shower and you put on:
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| Posted by: yum-yum4b2k | | omg!!!!!!! they didn't have to do morgan like dat, she didn't do anything to them! it's not her fault that rashaad is her daddy!
holla at cha gurl! | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: fizzycaramel12 | | (you get out the shower and you put on:
http://www.queenfashions.com/images/two_piece/8617.jpg (without the hat) and you wear it with a kangol bermuda stretch hat.
(then you go downstairs when your doorbell rings. you answer it and it's rell)
rell: dayum girl. where you going with some underwear and a bra.
u: lol rell it's a outfit (he comes in the house)
rell: it looks like you goin' to bed.
u: shut up (you go into the kitchen. you get 3 oreos out of the cabinet and a glass of milk. you eat all three oreos and drink the milk. when you odne, you turn around and see rell standing at the door)
u: how long have you been standing there?
rell: long enough.
u: well stop staring at me like that, you scaring me
rell: oh really. (he turns out the light so you can't see)
u: rell. (that's when you feel him grab your waist and sit you on the counter. he gets between your legs, you turn on the extra light [yall know that light that be on the other side of the kitchen if you don't feel like walking over to the other one,lol]
u: rell...we gotta go.
rell: no we don't. we can be late [errbody tryna get thier freak on today ain't they,lol]
u: no you got angel to think about, i'm not like that (you get off of the counter and walk into the living room)
rell: can i just get one kiss?
u: ...
~with sabrina~
(she got ready and put on:
http://www.queenfashions.com/images/two_piece/8569large.jpg
*yall sorta gonna be matching with the bicini top pieces*
(her and omari ride to nakeeya house with omani and mari)
nakeeya: hey yall.
sabrina: hey, we came by to drop off the twins.
nakeeya: oh yeah come in (they come in the house and sabrina set omani and mari on the floor)
sabrina: so guys what happened earlier.
omari: whatchu mean?
sabrina (ignoring him): why yall leave so fast.
demario: iight, here's the 411 (they tell them the whole story.
omari and sabrina: dayum!
ayanna: this is just like 12th grade all over again.
sabrina: we betta tell the others tonight.
demario: well we ain't gonna keep yall waiting.
omari: iight we'll catch yall later.
ayanna: o.k. bye (they leave out to the club)
~with dru~
(he just picked up lashawn and they head to the club)
dru: dayum this club is banging.
lashawn: and i know something else that can be too (smiling)
dru: you wanna...oh yeah (they head into the bathroom and do the freaky -deaky,lol)
~with you and rell~
rell: can i just a kiss
u: ... (just then the doorbell rang and you answered it)
u: oh my gosh, jessyca!
jessyca: y/n! (they hug)
u: girl when you get here?
jessyca: i was staying with angel but i had to come over here and stay with my cuz.
u: i'm do happy to see you. you coming to the club with us
jessyca: yeah nakeeya here too. she coming too
oh by the way, jessyca had on this:
.jpg]http://www.exoticfashionmall.com/images/dresses/8495[1].jpg (but instead it was light blue)
u: nakeeya here! yall could at least called me
jessyca: lol, oh yeah, hey rell. i'm sorry.
rell: for what?
jessyca: nothing
rell: ...o.k.
u: so where angel?
jessyca: she headed to the club already.
rell: why she ain't wait for me.
jessyca: i don't know, ask her.
rell: anyway, y/n, i'll meet you at the car o.k.
u: iight. (he goes out to the club)
u: o.k. jessyca, what's really goin' on?
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| Posted by: yum-yum4b2k | | omg! i wish y/n and rell would just f*** already!!!!!!!!!! i'm sorry but this is sick! he loves her, she loves him!, he wants her, she wants him!, y/n needs to let him........ well u know! i could see if she was a virgin!, it would make sense, but it ain't like she don't want him! i play hard to get too, but this is goin to far! they need to just admit they love each other!!!!!!!!
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| Posted by: Lily_Petal1 | | What the h*ll is up with y/n and rell?!? they got issues i mean they've loved each other since forever! And i agree with u yum-yum4b2k they just need to get their freak on!! i mean come on everybody else is!!
anyways bump bump bump!! | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: rellsosexi | | O my gosh..now y/n and rell...plz somebody help me i think imma bout to die..lol...its gettin hot..BUMP BuMP bUMP | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: jarellsboo | | hey!!
bumpbumpbump!
4real! i cant wait 4 da club girl! bump that! | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: yum-yum4b2k | | it sumthin in da water, cause everybody gettin dey freak on!!!!!!!!!1lol
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| Posted by: fizzycaramel12 | | alexis girl you is crazy. y/n and rell might get their freak on but just be prepared for the ending. | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: fizzycaramel12 | | u: o.k. jessyca, what's really going on...
jessyca: ...
~at the agency~
morgan: exuse me miss lady ma'am,but why did they give me back.
lady: i don't know, maybe something came up.
morgan: o.k. can i use the phone.
lady : sure (so morgan goes to use the phone)
f/v: hello
morgan: hey.
f/v: morgan? what's the matter.
morgan: i think i found them.
f/v: how.
morgan: if you come and pick me up, i'll tell you o.k.
f/v: iight, c ya in a while.
morgan: o.k. (they hang up)
~with you and jessyca~
jessyca: o.k, but if i tell you, you can't tell rell...or sabrina
u: o .k. i won't tell. what is it?
jessyca: i found omari and angel f***ing
u: what the hell, and she was talking about me! aw hell naw! how she gon' tell me imma hoe when she out here f***ing with omari.
jessyca: y/n, calm down.
u: i'm calm.
jessyca: jut promise me, w/e you do, don't ell rell o.k.
u: but he's my friend. sabrina too. i couldn't do that to them.
jessyca: promise me. i don't want anyone to get hurt. promise?
u: ...o.k. jessyca i promise.
jessyca: o.k. now let's go get out party on.
u: i ain't mad atcha for that (so they all leave to the club
*by the way*
angel had on this: http://www.queenfashions.com/images/two_piece/8627.jpg
nakeeya put on: http://www.queenfashions.com/images/two_piece/8652.jpg (she was wearing the red one though)
(all of yall arrive at the club. sabrina and omari are already dancing and yall see angel sitting at ta table so yall join her.)
rell: hey whassup angel.
angel: whassup. hi jessyca, hi y/n
jessyca: hey
u: w/e
angel: o.k. rell you wanna go dance.
u: what omari wasn't enough for you. (jessyca hits you_
angel: um..come on rell.
rell: what is going on?
angel: nothing, they just playing mind games (They go on the floor and start dancing)
jessyca: i told you to keep your mouth shut.
u: but i can't just sit around and let my baby get hut like that.
jessyca: baby?u: um...uh...i gotta use the bathroom (so you get up and walk over to the bathroom, you knock on it first but no one answers. the door is unlocked [dru and lashawn are idiots,lol] so you open and you see...
~at the agency~
f/p: um excuse me, can i take morgan for a quick second please
lady: oh go right ahead
f/p: o.k. thank you. come on morgan (they leave out and get in the car)
f/p: so you said you think you found them.
morgan: yeah, cause when i told them my daddy was rashaan, they just hestitated and took me back.
f/p: mmm, you remember the address.
morgan: no but i remember how to get their.
f/p: good.
morgan: and mommy
f/p: yes.
morgan: what's gonna happen when we kill them?
f/p: they'll be dead [duh,lol]
morgan: no, can we release the k.y.a from jail, please.
f/p: o.k. we'll do that then sweety. now you go back into the building. i'll come pick you up 2morrow.
morgan: o.k. (she goes back into the building)
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| Posted by: fizzleschulita1 | | ::singin:: fizzy keep on writin and lemme see dat hot azz story go bump bump bump | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: fizzesdyme18 | | oooooweeeeeooooohh no that lil heff@ dident rat on them i should go put her in a head  lock and what is the k.y.a ?"????
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| Posted by: fizzycaramel12 | | the k.y.a is a group that was in the first story. it's stand for Kill Your Azz, lol. and fizzleschulita, you crazy gurl,lol
*here go more*
~on the dance floor~
(while sabrina was dancing with omari, omari kept sneaking glances while angel was doing the same. )
rell: baby you o.k. you've been avoiding me all day.
angel: oh...yeah i'm fine. i just gotta lot of thing son my mind. sorry.
rell: you wanna go sit down?
angel: if it's o.k. with you.
rell: yeah i'm fine, i'll probably go in the louge anyway.
angel: o.k. i'll be back later baby (she kisses him on the cheek)
omari: sabrina, is it o.k. if i rest cause girl...whoo..you wearing me out.
sabrina (smiling) o.k. baby. i 'll just go dance with somebody else
omari: o.k. (omari walks over to the table with angel)
~with you~
(you open the door and see...a regular bathroom [yall thought yall was gonna see dru didn't you, lol]. so you use it and decided you ain't feel like dancing yet so you go to the lounge. then this dude comes up to you.)
m/p: hey shorty. (you look up and see this fine azz ***** with a clean shave, hazel eyes, caramel complexion, he was a a little short but hey, he was fione!)
u: whassup (he sits next tp you)
m/p: what's you name ma?
u: it's y/n. you
m/p: i'm shad? [he's 20 in this sotry o.k.]
u: i knew i knew you from somewhere! you're that famous rapper, bow wow.
shad: the one and only.
u: oh my gosh, i love you!
shad: oh really, i can definetly get used to you (scooting closer to you)
u: (smiling) oh fa sho, i'm loving that?
shad: (sexily) you wanna do something sometime (pulling on your strap)
u: mmm, hmm. especially withchu.
shad: o.k. can i get your number (you give him your number and)
shad: iight, besutiful, i'll be in contact (he runs his finger on your cheek and he leaves the lounge. you put on a big kool-aid smile when you see dru walking in with some girl)
u: what the hell, i thought had to baby-sit his sister [see i forgot what he said he "had" to do so i'm just sticking with that] (so you walk over to him and "the girl" cuddling on the couch.)
u: dru.
dru: oh uh y/n. hey. i didn't know you was gonna be here.
u: you what, i'm thinking for you!
lashawn: dru, is this your girl!
dru: no she not my girl lashawn. she just a friend.
lashawn: well then why the hell is bytch getting all worked up!
u: hol up, bytch. i got your bytch, bytch. dru, hold my hat (taking off your hat but dru pulls you out of the lounge before anything can happen)
u: no, dru let me go! i got some trash to take out!
dru: y/n calm down.
u: no how can be calm dru. you in there with that trick.
dru: y/n you act like we go together.
u: i know we don't go together dru. i'm just mad at the fact that you would lie to me. you didn't have to lie, you could've told me that you was going out with someone else. i could break one dinner date if you really liked her.
dru: i didn't wanna make it seem like i stood you up. i didn't wanna hurt your feelings.
u: well you surely didn't do a good enough job, now you wonder why i can't be a relationship. and....and i can't tell rell i love him. that's why right there. because i can't take any more heartbreak. i've had enough already. with my father dying when i was 3. with angel going wit |
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and i may have lost it for a minute, but i ment it!!!!!!!! they need to .......well 
.........um. 
......... ya'll know!!!!! 
it's about time! 
they did sumthin nasty! 
lol, 
i mean if she got sum i don't think she would be so uptight, but then again, she won't get none cause she won't let boog hit it! see it's gurls like this that make boys go crazy! either tell him u really don't want him or let him......... u know! the boys were i'm from would have gave up, and bought sum baby oil, or sum baby lotion, and keep pimpin!(lol) (don't get da wrong impression of me i'm not a freak, i haven't even had sex yet but people like this just drive me crazy!!!!!!)