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Posted by: T-Un1t

A cold night. An even colder heart. The feelings of solidarity growing with each passing day, each day passing more quickly than the last. Footsteps. A woman. Alone. Who? Why?
Why not?
“Hello”
"hi"
Silence. Cold. Footsteps. Alone.
Why? How? People? Ants. If only....
footsteps. A woman. The woman.
“I'm Hope, what's your name?”
How? Why? Ants? People.
Footsteps. A man. A woman. People.

by Travis Neufeld

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Posted by: Preston L.

H there,

Wondered if you might be interested in this image on Ebay UK. It's a piture of God's signature on a brick.

http://cgi.ebay.co.uk/ws/eBayISAPI....:MESE:IT&ih=004

Is this sacreligious or not? Imagine if it said 'Allah'. I reckon there'd then be outrage amongst many muslims.

Preston.

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Posted by: Dekka00

did you bid on it?

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Posted by: LAGOUADER

Evocative enough.

http://habib66.wordpress.com/

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