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Posted by: jarulz_gurl

Yo, this is a freestyle thread/ no1 says we gotta spill sum red/ i don’t wanna lay out no deaf bed/ cos we all 2 youn 2 die/ im tired of Cing my life fly by/ i mean im only 15 but i feel my eyes 2 dry/ its 2 much now, i cant even cry/ so dont look @ me if u gonna lie/ i kno pain iz love/ but aint it enough/ tha i try/ cos on da inside im soft/ jus my edges tha r 2 rough/ itz tough/ i wanna b alone so i lock miself in da loft/ hungry but aint eating ought/ lookin but aint Cing ought/ tired but aint sleepin much/ jus thinkin there gotta b mo to life than such/ wit itz rulz/ u can look, but don’t touch/ u can taste, but dont swallow/ life must take uz 4 foolz/ n i cant deniy tha i luv dem jewlz/ they keep me feelin fresh/ n i dont kno wotz best/ mo iz less/ r less iz mo/ if so/ my fingaz will do wit 4/ it all comes down 2 dat pappa/ u kno u got 2 get dat doe/ mayb hustlin a friend r a foe/ but not wit my beau/ were eva he go, i go, he wanna move slo, tha kool I can flow/ he wanna go fast, then this iz already da past/ n no matta wot i do, da rest of yall wont last/ cos i always endz wit a blast.

KABOOM!

so wot u fink whyte, still fink i aint no gud, holla
wot boutz u guyz jinder, DMX#1 (if u still here) shante, t-l, and ne1 else
feel free 2 do woteva u want 2 do

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Posted by: Jarells_Honey

man i'm tired of weak cats tryin to spit and rap/ tryin to be thugged out sayin they got this and that/ it's a fact that i don't rap or can spit 8 bars/ but since no one here i'm the one they left in charged/ i'm the princess of rap somethin like ashanti/ but i can do much better without wack a** irv gotti/ my name ring bells in the hood/ thats why I got what got/ and if you comin up talkin smack you/ liable to get popped/ I don't mess with kids so when you comin come correct/ if not i'll make sure i'll put ya lil a** in check/ you can talk about the way i spit, rhyme, rap, whateva/ but i don't give a <REMOVED> you can say what you want/i'm up out this <REMOVED> / so holla back ONE


LMAO AHAHAHAHAHA like I said I don't spit so i just figured i'll say somethin so I can have a reason to come back to this thread. And if you didn't like it so WHAT, i don't care cuz like I said I don't SPIT , I SING so whateva yo. ONE

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Posted by: jinder

whoa Rulz gurl that was crazy, u steppin it up!
LOL Shante we dont really need to care wots ppl say just keep the threads alive, u not as bad as u say u are!
if i gets time ill do a lil sumat sumat

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Posted by: jarulz_gurl

yeah, shante dat woz quiet hot, no playin! well im not stoppin u from singin like gurl jinder does.
i iant hatin on t-l wen i wsw thios, but i fink u iz even betta than her!

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Posted by: jinder

we only got ONE LIFE, thats why:
i live every day as if its my last
learnt it all from my past
had a young brother die
right infront of my eye
he was just thirteen
what had he seen
left his sista cryin
wantin to be dyin
but now i see
what was meant for me
i gotto stay strong
even when others do wrong
gotto support my mother
be there for my sista n brother
learn to respect each otha
cos all we got is ONE LIFE

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Posted by: jarulz_gurl

dat iz gud!!!!!!

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Posted by: jinder

thx gots anotha one 4 yall

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Posted by: Jarells_Honey

THANK YOU, and yall raps is tight too much better than mines, i re-read that mess i wrote and it look 10 kinds of stupid but yall is HOT

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Posted by: jinder

the way u make me smile
make this life worthwhile
the way u hold my hand
make me wanna give a damn
the way u look in my eyes
make me realise...

your the one that i can trust
and our love will neva rust
no one can keep us apart
wot we got is heart to heart
when we got no where else to go
i sneak u in thru the back door
u be leavin late
but me callin me up straight
when are next gonna meet
neva knowin when thats gonna be
u be runnin from the cops
leavin my stomach in knots
i be stayin awake
untill i know u made it thru the day
thoughts runnin round my head
as tears be gettin shead
then u come rushin by
wipe my eyes dry
promisin me foreva
cus all we got is each otha
your the air that i breathe
and the blood runnin thru my veins
i day without u, i cant see
feelin already drivin me insane
our loved filled with so much passion
wilder than anything u can imagine
tongue kissin so i can check yo pocket
so i can buy me a diamond locket
have your name inscribed
and a picture inside

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Posted by: jinder

Shante it werent crap gurl keep doin yo thing im still postin my crap is betta than nothin

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Posted by: jarulz_gurl

yall aint 4 rell,
this tuff u doin iz crazy!
hey ths may souynd full of myself, but i gots 2 say, damn, i have got talent!
lol!

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Posted by: jinder

LMAO

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Posted by: jarulz_gurl

yo, i have a sudden feelin 2 do sumet ruff, i aint spittin @ ne1, im jus freestylin wot i feel:

Murda, deaf, kill/ u kno blud gon spill/ wata runnin in da bath, u kno it gonna ova-fill/ but u dead, so no1 gonna C till/ da cops run ova/ im watchin from ma range rover/ they turning of yo taps/ tryna fill in so many missin gaps/ lik hug on n done this?/
U woz takin da piss/ but lik jaddakiss/ i gave u da kiss of deaf/ now u on yo last breath/ im da realist chik left/ so i bet u wished u had neva messed/ u shoulda been smart n guessed/ but now itz ova 4 u, ima let it rest/ itz 4 yo grievin fams best/ cos ill put em thro da test/ wot dey need mo luv r monE/ now u gon honnie/ I dont fink dey fink itz funny/ mayb i shud come ova and tikle der tummy/ cos u woz jus a dummie/ nah wah a means/ i seen der greeds/ filled up der loss up wit greens/ buyin dem cars, houses and b-ball teams/ now they aint hustlin/ instead they on dem gamblin machines/ but wen itz l8 @ nite, al they hear iz leaves rustlin/ they rememba u/ u lik sum stiky guu/ stuck 2 da bottoms of they shoe/ n no matta how much i pay they fink of u/ so out of da blue/ bang, bang, bang/ a drive by gang/ shot dem dead/ n im sittin watchin from my Cad/ the cops aint bearin 2 look @ da scene/ it dat bad.

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Posted by: jinder

anotha killa rap
keep spittin aight gurl

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Posted by: jarulz_gurl

thx, i will, lol!

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Posted by: jarulz_gurl

hello??????
ne1 still therre???

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Posted by: jinder

yo im bk gurl but no one posts on this thread so wots the point i mean everyone prolly just laffin at us my poems are crap. your gud keep doin ya thing

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Posted by: jarulz_gurl

i bet they noit laffin, they mayb h8in tho...

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Posted by: jinder

i dunno but i dont wanna post anythin untill some mo ppl get on this thread and jus say wot they think cus if they dont say anythin it means im crap. but no way u r gurl u gud keep doin it

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Posted by: DMX#1

Ur good Jinder who cares wot other ppl think

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Posted by: jinder

ok so ill post and that means u gotto post too cus i think u gud aswell

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Posted by: jarulz_gurl

yeah, c this is mo lik it.
now post some stuff!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted by: jinder

go on then DMX#1

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Posted by: jarulz_gurl

yup, go on, plz

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Posted by: DMX#1

We'll since im goin 2 samoa i wont be on for about 3 weeks so i left yous a freestyle. I'll be back. Laters (Dont miss me 2 much lol)

Ill slash u with blades
Word of me spreads like cancer and aids
Ur crew scream "incoming" as i launch grenades
to you and your crew
Ur lips will stick together like hot glue
Im like a jew
speaking psalm poems in hebrew
As i perfect my rhymes **** gets scarrier
when i rap
im guarenteed to break the barrier
youre inferior
effects of ur rap make me sleepy and yawn
You breath smells stink like ur ***** like rotten prawns
I cud battle u from dusk till dawn
But I rather watch low budget softcore porn
with a bad aerial
Keep talking **** u'll need a burial
Im like Jack the ripper ima serial, Killer
that will make ur brains splat bloods stain on ur mat
You thought u was phat
Till u heard clak clak clak
My mic is a gat
and my ammo is rhymes
I cud beat u a million out of million times
My rhymes rip u to shreds coz im lethal
its brutality
ill split ur anatomy if wanna u battle me
finish with a fatality,
Coz im split nationalities with a split personality
The other half of me is evil with bad morality
In reality
im wild
ur raps are mild
Ur a demon that im a exercise u spit vile
Thats why its worth my while
to finish u Mk style

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Posted by: jinder

My mic is a gat
and my ammo is rhymes

liked those lines

that was a hot rap serious u shud do more
awww ill miss u just make sure u have a gud time and come bk!

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Posted by: DMX#1

Yeah i will thx

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Posted by: jinder

why arent u on msn?

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Posted by: jinder

b4 Jas gurl says it i will do somethin when i get time

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Posted by: jarulz_gurl

yeh, i woz gonna say, ill rap ulotz a lil sumet sumet...
newayz, boi u will b missed, have a T.O.P time!!

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Posted by: jarulz_gurl

that will make ur brains splat bloods stain on ur mat
You thought u was phat


i like that line,
dang, tho its all hot really, nice 1 dmx#1!

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Posted by: jinder

I know that u feel the same
But your findin it hard to say
Don’t be scared babe
Im with u all the way
I just wanna hear
U whisper in my ear

Those three precious words
Show me theres no otha gurls
N that ur feelins are sincere
U have nothing to fear

Im dreamin of the day
U say wot u need to say
Don’t leave it as a dream
I need it to be real
Im ready boy so cmon ova
Then maybe I cud show ya
And take all your worries away
So u can find it easier to say

Those three precious words
Show me theres no otha gurls
N that ur feelins are sincere
U have nothing to fear

U ringin on the doorbell
Cmon in I wont tell
Take a seat babe
Hear my heart beat babe
Come a little closer
Put your arm around my shoulder
If u wanna go further
And go a little deeper
Im willin baby
As long as u tell me

Those three precious words
Show me theres no otha gurls
N that ur feelins are sincere
U have nothing to fear


there ive dropped mine too now
lets do a thing now if u like wot ppl post tell us wot ur fave part is aight

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Posted by: jarulz_gurl

dang. dat wz real gud.

my fav lines 4m dat weere:
"U ringin on the doorbell
Cmon in I wont tell
Take a seat babe
Hear my heart beat babe"
but the whole ting woz so solid, keep doin it.


ill b doin my rap soon, but it might not b dat gud, compared to yalls stuff.

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Posted by: jarulz_gurl

k i aint got much time but ill lay this down 4 yall:

damn,
met this guy,
homeboi sure iz fyne,
he spendz all his tyme,
by my side,
and soon his pa getting him his own ride,
we gonna cruz,
wit him i neva lose,
cos babe a winna,
don’t fink ne1 treated me betta,
n i can c cares in his eyes,
so he don’t need 2 send me a love letta,
yeah, we been thro his lies,
but all boo needed 2 say woz
‘babe i love u, so don’t eva cries’
dats all i need 2 hear to give him anotha tries,
only if its his 1st mistake,
cos i trus the world it aint dat fake,
u prolly doubt him,
n tink dat im so gullable,
believing wot eva im givin,
nah, im jus easy lovable,
n i don’t care cos 4 now he keeping me livin,
wit this real real gud feelin,
boi u got me prayin,
fo da day we b layin,
side by side,
hands all ova my thighs,
aint got nothing 2 hide,
cos u there 4 my lows,
let me give u my highs,
n u kno how it goes,
comin outa ma clothes,
there mus b a law,
makin u illegal,
cos no way has this gal,
eva taken extasy,
but wen babe iz nex 2 me,
make me believe,
dat ima total freak,
even tho im not in da bed,
n i so cant go to his pad,
cos i kno where it will end,
damn.

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Posted by: jinder

woah she killed that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
gurl that was on fihay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
givin us a lil different style
i loved it all but my lines r:
"u prolly doubt him,
n tink dat im so gullable,
believing wot eva im givin,
nah, im jus easy lovable,
n i don’t care cos 4 now he keeping me livin,
wit this real real gud feelin,"
lotta lines but i cudnt decide

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Posted by: DMX#1

***** like u shud worry bout makeup and blotches
Coz wen im finished with u ull b leavin in crotches
With a high level of spittin that can neva b rivaled
Batllin me is a battle 4 ur survival
As i spit hot **** at u that'll turn ur brain 2 ashes
murdered Mcz by large masses
Drop em in caskets
With every line i drop, ur life decreases dramatically
Thats why i murdered every mc, dat ever battled me
They saw da otha half of me they shouldve never tried battlin
The split personality thats caused so many casulties
Summoning heat seeking projectile rockets the size of comets
to blast ya
Ull be goin in2 da heavens faster than NASA
Im The freestyling master
turning all u ***** ass mcs into casper

"hands all ova my thighs,
aint got nothing 2 hide,
cos u there 4 my lows,
let me give u my highs,"

"I know that u feel the same
But your findin it hard to say
Don’t be scared babe
Im with u all the way
I just wanna hear
U whisper in my ear"

All of ur stuff was good jinder and jarulz gurl.

Im back. Damn it was phat man i didnt wanna come back. The beaches man its paradise ova there. Heaps of gurls wanted 2 get with me man they luv da halfkasts lol. I hope us didnt miss me 2 much.

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Posted by: jarulz_gurl

damn yeah we did, gud 2 have u bk, even tho u enjoyed urself so much!
this sounds stupid but me n jinder were worried bout u, u kno cos we thot samoa is pretty close to where the tsunami happened.
oh by the way tight ass rap u jus did.


"With every line i drop, ur life decreases dramatically
Thats why i murdered every mc, dat ever battled me
They saw da otha half of me they shouldve never tried battlin
The split personality thats caused so many casulties"

yeah those linez were hott.
its funny how u used the word murdered 2ce...

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Posted by: DMX#1

thx wow yous worried bout me.

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Posted by: jinder

lol yeah we were but its ok u had a gud time hope n u safe n all that. u a halfcaste lol i didnt even know that. so wot race r ya?

anyways the the rap was so gud!

"As i spit hot **** at u that'll turn ur brain 2 ashes
murdered Mcz by large masses"

u know it was all tight tho

ill do my thing soon

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Posted by: jarulz_gurl

yea, we woz!

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Posted by: jinder

Fairytale

In the middle of the dance floor when I caught ur eye
From that moment on I knew I just had to make u mine
So I did my thing, grindin real low
Saw u head straight for the floor
Then u did ur thing, while u held my hand
Ur touch was like no otha man
But u was gone as soon as ma gurls came
Didn’t even get a chance to grab ur name

Boy come lets have anotha try
Cus I like how it felt the first time
U had me feelin so rite
So ill see u at the same place tonite

The nite went by kinda magically
A fairytale that’s meant to be
Princess had finally found her prince
U neva left my mind eva since
I wanna know that ur reality
N u felt the same chemistry
It was getting heated n I know u like that
Don’t worry well pick it up were we left It at

Boy come lets have anotha try
Cus I like how it felt the first time
U had me feelin so rite
So ill see u at the same place tonite

This time not letting u outta my sight
Ill have my eyes on u all theu the nite
So I get ready while I call my gurls
We lookin hot as we rock them furs
I see u waitin for me at the door
U say tonite u aint gonna let me go
So we kept it all between each otha
N the nite ended happily eva afta

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Posted by: jarulz_gurl

dang gurl, dat woz a killa!!
i liked the these lynez:

Princess had finally found her prince
U neva left my mind eva since
I wanna know that ur reality
N u felt the same chemistry

p.s
chek out the pic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted by: jinder

thx gurl oopsy that was full of spellin mistakes i aint goin thru it all but the bit u quoted was posed to be "princess has finally"

so whos go is it now?

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Posted by: jarulz_gurl

i guess itz myne, soz, taken me a while, neva had tyme... here goes ne way:
yo the way i move,
the way i groove,
may b too much 4 u,
cos no1 does this the way i do,
im too hot, too smooth,
i set fire 2 the ***** ****** booth,
the way my sounds diffuse,
itz lik wen nelly spreads da news,
cos itz getin hot in herre,
but dats not where my tru talents at,
but on the dance floor rite thurre,
the moves i bust r phat,
u can ask da balers dat,
(im like)
hey durtty,
i kno u wanna hold me
(he like)
yeah shortty,
u really do kno me,
good cos now i kno u aint a phoney,
n inko u gonna call me,
c i like a dude with mixtures,
n all kinds of textures,
hu always takin me 2 da pictures,
not like ne of us is watchin,
we 2 bussy kizzin n touchin,
4 dat i undastand he b thuggin,
cos every1z gotta make a livin,
so i give him extra lovin,
jus as long as he aint pimpin.

lil short n all. awell.

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