I Hate the Sunrise!~An Invisible Original Fan Fic.

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Copyright 2004~Marti J. Ketterer

Hey guys~I came up with this stupid idea at about 4 oclock this morning. I have a made up character with a strange affliction. I hope you enjoy it. Cuz Im kinda dumb sometimes when it comes to my fics. Sometimes I just let the Random Stupidness flow you know?
As always...read disclaimer before reading my fic...blah..blah...
"I Hate the Sunrise"
Chapter 1
Sabyn dabbed a bit of perfume on to her neck and straightened her dress. She was getting ready for the forth date with Clayton. He liked to be called Clayton. She thought it was kind of sexy. Something he reserved for all the special people in his life to call him. Sabyn heard the telltale knock on the door. Two knocks, Pause, one knock, pause, two knocks. Clayton, right on time.
"Hi Clayton! Come in" Sabyn smiled as she kissed his cheek.
"Wow! You look amazing!" Clayton's eyes were wide as he drank the site of her in. "Just for me?"
"Of course." Sabyn grinned as she wrapped her arms around him.
"How long do you have?" Clayton asked her.
"Sunrise is at 6:00am. I have just until then." She told him and Clayton moved his hands to the side of her face.
"I'm sorry you have to go through all this trouble." He told the beautiful woman before him.
"I should say that to you. I'm used to it. You have to work around me and I appreciate it." Sabyn kissed him lightly and beckoned him. "Let's go, I'm starved."
They rode in the limo to the Midnight Corral. A resteraunt that served a buffet. Sabyn and Clayton sat to eat their supper and Clayton reminded her of the day they had met 1 month ago. He was on his first stop on the tour and met her backstage. He asked her on a date. Sabyn honestly didn't really want to at first. usually when people found out about her disease, she was shunned like moldy fish. She, as did Clay, had the time of her life. When he found out about her affliction, he was sympathetic. It served him better to go out with her only at night to begin with. Clayton's busy schedule during the day made it close to impossible for a social life. This night they brough the subject of her disease back up.
"Sabyn? Do you ever miss the sunlight?" Clayton asked as he held her hand across the table.
"Yes. Not being able to run and swim with the sun at your back, feeling the warm rays in your hair, the sweating from the heat bouncing of of tan skin. Of course I miss it. But, I don't miss it too. I'm so used to it now that I don't know what I would do my first day in the sun." Sabyn answered. Since she found out she was allergic to sunlight 21 years ago when she was 3, she led a sheltered life. Only go out at night, only shop at those 24 hour stores that gave her the protection she needed from the deadly rays, black curtains and every crack in her house covered from 6:00 am to 8:00 pm, such was her life.
"Someday, Sy, you will be in the sun with me. I don't care how I have to do it, I will make it come true." Clayton told her.
God she was falling in love. She knew he meant what he said and she was greatful to find someone that understood her limits but hoped along with her.
"I hope that can happen someday too, Clayton!" He took her hand and led her to the limo to head to the club....

(Is it stupid so far? Should I scrap this or continue? Let me know)

that is really interesting!! i really like it.. i want to see how all of this goes on

That is awesome really keep it going!

Sabyn and Clay headed to the Taylor Hands Bar. It was a nice quite place that had slow, quiet music. Clayton had felt like being a little more romantic when he planned this night. He liked Sabyn alot and something in his heart told him that They would be together for a long time. Clayton pulled her chair out for her and noticed her reforming to her habit of checking her watch every 4 minutes.
"Sy, it's not time yet." He grinned at her.
"I know. It's habit Clayton. If I get even the slightest sun i will stop breathing. I would like another date with you so I'm trying hard to keep oxygen flowing. I hate the sunrise!" She exlaimed angirly.
"I love your lttle habits. but, trust me nothing is going to happen to you on my watch." He sat at the table and looked at her. They passed the time quickly. Clayton stealing kisses when he could and Sabyn leaning into him as close as possible. Clayton stood and told Sabyn he would return soon. She checked her watch..3 oclock? already? dang! Just then Sabyn heard her favortie song (Non Clay song) coming from the house band.
The first time...
Ever I saw your face....
I thought the sun rose...
In your eyes....
The moon and the stars...
Were the gifts you gave....
To the dark....
and endless skies my love....
To the dark...
and empty skies....

She loved the reference to the sun rising. She couldn't tell you why. Sabyn received a tap on the arm and turned to see Clayton with his hand out..
"Dance with me?"
"I'd love to." She whispered.
As Clayton held her close he ran his fingers down her arm. Her milk-white skin was a turn off to others, but not to Clayton. He loved everything about her. Her ice-blue eyes, her heart shaped mouth, her platinum blonde hair that fell just above her shoulders, every curve of her body. he was completely in love. It was something that he hadn't felt before and he knew that now that he had found Sabyn, he would never be the same....

to continue soon!

Claysgurl? are you allowed to tell me your real name? If so let me know..I want to work it in to this story..if not...give me one of your favorite names...thank you in advance....

aww this is too cute

Aww thanks for wanting to use me in your story, my mom doesn't want me to tell you my name, I know really wierd, sorry. You can use my favorite name Alexia.

Sabyn danced and talked with Clayton for what seemed like forever. She happen to glance at her watch and wanted to cry.
"Clayton? It's 5:30. We have to go. NOW!" A tear slid down her cheek.
He wiped it away for her and took her hand to lead her to the car. Just as Clayton had expected, as soon as they walked out the door, the flashbulbs caught them. The chauffer threw his coat around Sabyn at Clayton's insistance and they ran to the car together. When they arrived at her house a pink tinge was starting to smear the sky. Sabyn ran inside and quickly ripped her curtains closed in every room in the house.
"I love you, Sy! I know it may be too soon to tell you that but, I do." Clayton told her as he kissed her goodbye.
"I love you, Clayton. Sorry about having to rush." She buried her face in his shoulder.
"No. No appologies. I would walk to the ends of the earth for you." Clayton kissed her goodbye with a promise to call her later in the day when he arrived at his next destination. She ran to her light-proof bedroom as he opened and shut the front door, which allowed the morning sun to briefly paint her living room. When she heard the door close she let out a sigh and turned on her low watt bulbs in the bedroom. She turned on her television and flipped mindlessly through the channels. She was about to turn it off when a commercial caught her eye. It was of a man and woman in the park, sitting in the bright yellow sunlight, holding hands and having a picnic. This was the only way Sabyn could experience the way things looked in the sun, from pictures. She knew that that was what she wanted to do if she ever got to feel the morning light ever again. She wanted to have a picnic in the park, with the sun shining down on her face. With Clayton. She laughed at herself.
"Get your head out of the...." Sabyn had started to say clouds but stopped herself.
She wondered what the clouds looked like today. It would be suicide to her sensitive body to even sneek the smallest peak. So she refrained. Changing into her clothes for bed, she thought of Clayton and how much she cared for him. The problem was, Clayton could deal with all of this now, but how would he hold up in the long run? Would he get tired of never going anywhere with her during the day? She figured he would. So many men had. Why should he be any different. Slipping into a slight depression, she slid under the covers and mumbled to herself as she drifted to sleep, "I hate the sunrise!"


To continue...

I have the perfect way to use that name claysgurl...I officially make claysgurl the official co=owner of my character Alexia Faregate (To come later)......

haha...love it invisible!

You are such an excellent writer! I can't wait to see where you put my favorite name at! Invisible!

This is such a great story, I finally got around to reading the My Best Friend Clay story and I absolutely loved it!!!!!!!!!

Thank you guys! I will post more tonight. I was afraid to make this story because there are people who are afflicted with this disease. I mean no offense to those who do. I just had the idea from Clay working with special needs children. I wondered what it would be like if he dated someone who had special needs.

See you guys tonight!

Ok Invisible....It's very interesting and if I really thought about it Clay would be that kind of person

Sabyn awoke a couple of hours later to her phone ringing. She answered after pulling herself out of the warm bed.

"Hello?" Sabyn answered groggily.

"Morning Sunshine!" Alexia Fargate, her sister, answered.

"Allie? Oh GOD! I miss you so much. Why are you calling this time of morning?" Sabyn answered ignoring her sisters sarcastic remark about the sunshine.

"Just checking on you. I know I haven't called in about 3 months but this whole lawyer business is killing me. At least I called right. So...tell me what's happening." Alexia inquired of her younger sister.

"Nothing. I just met a man is all." Sabyn smiled.

"WHAT? WHO? Does he know?"

"His name is Clayton and yes he knows, and the best part is he doesn't care. He loves me. He just told me tonight. Oh you'd love him Allie. He's handsome, caring, charming, sweet, and did I mention handsome?" Sabyn laughed.

"Sabyn. I am coming down there next monday and you are gonna tell me all. Have you been to see Dr. Stratton?" Alexia wondered.

"No! What's the use? He's just going to tell me the same thing he always does. That I will be a vampire for the rest of my life. What's the sense in spending my disablity money if I can't get a cure. When he calls me and tells me I can walk out the door in broad daylight to go and get my checkup then we'll talk." Sabyn joked.

"Don't put that off Sabyn. It could be important. Maybe Dr. Stratton has found a way to help you. How do you know if you don't see him?"

"I love you and I'll see you at next week and tell you all about my man." Sabyn blew a kiss in the phone to her beloved sister and hung up the phone. Alexia didn't understand. Sabyn didn't want to waste her time with calling Dr. Stratton in for a housecall when she knew perfectly well what he was going to say. 'your the same, sabyn. Keep on doing the usual." That's what he would say. She snuggled under the covers and thought about what her sister had said. Wouldn't it be great if they did find a way for her to see sunlight?

"Well, a girl can dream right?" She said to herself and went back to sleep, to have sweet dreams of her man Clayton!

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To continue.....

I really like it and thanx for using my favorite name!

yay!

That is sooo good and I love it so much.

Clayton boarded the plane twelve hours after his date ended with Sabyn. His bodyguards were ever present and they sat close to him as he sat at his seat and picked up the latest magazine that had come out just that morning.

CLAY AIKEN DATING VAMPIRE~LIKE WOMAN

Does Clay Aiken's tastes in women led more towards the Macabre. Mac Loren, Celebritiy Secret's ace reporter, caught sight of Shakin' Aiken leaving a small nightclub in the town of Forrest, NC (A/n: Made up town guys!) with a shy, paste white, lady of the night after a night of dancing and romancing. Female fans have flooded the streets hoping to catch Clay entering the lady's home.....

Clayton was so shocked he stared at the last sentence for almost 10 minutes before coming to his senses and telling Joey, his manager, to give him a phone,

"NOW!" Clayton demanded. He dialed the number and a machine answered. After the outgoing message and beep sounded he stammered into the phone...

"Sy? It's Clayton, Baby. Answer the phone. Im worried."

"Clayton?" She picked up the line. "What's going on? There are people in my street and calling me on the phone. I didn't notice them there until it turned dark and I finally opened my curtains. They have flashlights and everything. I'm scared Clayton." Sabyn sobbed.

"Aww Sweetheart. I'm so sorry about this. Seems some reporter caught a glimpse of us on our date and decided to spread the word. I'm turning around and coming right there!" Clayton told her he loved her and not to worry. Before Sabyn could protest, Clayton hung up the phone and turned to his mananger. "Joey? I gotta go back. She's alone and she's frightened and it's all my fault."

"Clay. I know you like this girl but all she has to do is call the police and have them escorted. I'll send some people over there to get rid of them for you. You have dates to keep, Clay." Joey scrunched his eyebrows and gave an angry look to Clayton.

"I know I have a date to keep. That's why I have to go back!" Clayton yelled back at him as he went to the cockpit of the plane.
"Turn this thing around. I have something important to get to." He told the pilot and returned to his seat.

This might be easily remedied for anyone else . He thought, but my Sy is special. I told her I would be there for her and I will. Hold on Sy. he silently told her in his mind, I'm coming!

you do such a great job on your stories, good job.

omg! i just caught up w/ the story, i just wanted to tell u that i think that u are a awesome writer and that u'r story is really really good and extremely sweet, keep writing!

diddo!

Thank you Claniac_girl41. and WELCOME to the board. We are sisters here and look out for one another. Hope to see you around often.

If you are 15 or older let me and Clayfan4ever know and you can recieve specially written stories by E~mail as they are finished. If not..there are always stories here on the Clay forum. Welcome again!

Guys. This story will have to wait for a day. My grandfather died this evening and I am taking time to help out with that right now. I will post on this story later tonight so you all have something to read.

Then I will continue it on Thursday!

aww im sorry to hear that.. i hope u and ur family get through it.. i know it was always hard for me when family members die..

Oh I'm soo sorry to hear about your lose Invisible. I just had a grandparent die a few weeks ago.

yeah my great grandma died in january.. it was really hard to get through

Well my g-ma died in February.

Thanks for your sympathies guys and sorry for your losses as well...but you aren't going to believe what happened. not 3 minutes after i posted that, they called me again and said that he was revieved. OMG. I was stunned. He is still in grave condition and they don't expect him to live through the night but...wow, I have never had that happen. Have you ever heard of something so strange. I will post more on this story tonight. or tomorrow. Im still shocked. WOW

WOW!!! nope.

wow

Clayfan4ever...sorry I got kicked off Msn...I'll try to get on here in a while..I don't know what happened.

Sorry to hear about your losses.

Yeah they tried to revive my grandma, but it didn't work, shouldn't you be with them instead of being on here. Don't waste these last few moments that you could be spending with them Invisible.

yeah

yeah Invisible!

I am writing another update to this story to keep my mind off things. My grandfather died this morning at 2:30. I had to do something to keep from crying, so this post is in memory of my grandpa (Love you, Grandpa).
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Clayton took a taxi to Sabyn's and saw what she meant. There were people everywhere and when he pulled into the driveway everyone went wild. Policemen were trying to detour everyone but it was doing no good. Clayton knocked his knock on the door and Sabyn buzzed him in.

"God, Sy! Are you okay?" He held her tight as she cried.

"Clayton, all those people out there. I finally had to unhook my phone. Girls were calling me and threatening me. What should I do. I can't leave." Sabyn cried.

Clayton held her close and told her, "Im so sorry, Sy. I didn't mean for this to happen. I am going to fix this once and for all. I'll be back in a few hours okay. Don't call or answer the phone or anything. I love you!"

"I love you, too! What are you going to do?" He said.

"Watch the news. You'll see!" He kissed her softly and left. One hour later she turned on the Television and found Clayton sitting in an interview chair. He had just started. Flashbulbs went off all around him and he gave a small wink which made Sabyn smile. She knew that was for her.

"I called this conference today to tell my fans that I am appauled at their actions. My girlfriend, that's right, my GIRLFRIEND has been threatened, had her house vandelized, She has had to unhook her phone because of this. If any of you knew what a wonderful woman this was, you wouldn't be acting the way you are. She has done nothing to any of you. I love her. She is NOT some vampire, which for some dumb reason you all want to think she is. She has a rare disease that makes her unable to go out into sunlight without suffering horrible consequences. I accept her for this and always will. I am saddened that those who call themselves my 'fans' would treat someone I love this way. I want it to stop. NOW!" With that Clayton walked off the set.

Sabyn could have cried. No one had ever done that for her before! Little did she or Clayton know..what he had done had just fanned the flames.....

To continue....

Sorry if it's not too good guys. Got alot going on in my brain right now! Thanks for your support guys...you are true friends...those close to you are lucky to have you! As am I to know you. Hopefully someday we can all meet face to face...I'll post more later!

i'm sooooo sry for u'r loss, i think the story was great anyway tho, u must be a talented writer to be able to write with that much on u'r mind

oh I'm so sry Invisible........my prayers are with you!

mine too. if you need any one to talk to im here and im sure the rest of us are to!

same here, if u ever just need to talk, even tho i'm pretty new here, i'd be more than happy to listen

I would definately talk because I know what you are going through.

anytime Invisible you know my yahoo sn

I'm sorry about your grandpa's loss, im sure he would be proud of you very much! You have great stories.

I bet that her grandpa was very proud of her already.

I have the best e~friends ever guys~~that means you! The service was beautiful, thanks for all your thoughts and prayers. Here's some more story.
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[Clayton stayed with Sabyn that night, cancelling most of his engagements for the rest of the week. Newspapers and Magazines swarmed with the news that not only did Sabyn look and live like a vampire but she had a disease! Clayton felt awful. He only wanted people to leave her be but instead it just got worse. Sabyn didn't blame him. She knew he meant well, but there were more fans than ever outside her door since they all knew that Clayton was staying there.

Sabyn looked out at the dark sky and noticed the signs glowing in the streetlamp. Things like...

"Vampiress, let my Clay go!"

"Clay, marry me not a freak!"

"Vampire's SUCK!"

"How sophmoric." Sabyn laughed. "Vampire's suck? I could have come up with something better than that."

"Well, that's because you, unlike them, are smart!" Clayton complimented her as he came up behind her.

He took in the scent of her hair. She smelled like apples and he closed his eyes and imagined them in the apple orchard on the east side of town, picking apples, eating lunch together under the trees.
"Clayton?" Sabyn asked him.

"Hmm?" He answered.

"Tell me about our first day in the sun." She told him almost reading his mind.

"We'd go out to the apple orchard on the east side. I'd spend the entire day with you in the sunshine, picking apples, picnicing, dancing, and laying with you in the grass. Just holding you would be enough for me." He turned her around and planted a soft kiss on her lips.

"How can it be that I feel like I've loved you forever, and it's only been a month? I know that this lifestyle is going to wear on you after a while. You can't deny it." She sighed.

"Nothing but you matters to me. If I have to be a nightowl to be with you then I will. I love you. And it doesn't matter how long we've known each other. I may not have loved anyone before but I know that I love you now! I only want you and your happiness." Clayton put his hands on her cheeks and pulled her in for a long kiss.

"Clayton? I'm glad I have you. I hope to do the things you say we are gonna do in the sunshine. If I can't share it with you then I will share it with no one." She loved him so much. "So what do you want to do now."

Clayton picked up the phone. "I want you to call your doctor and get an appointment. I saw on your calender that you have cancelled 4 times already. If you want to make me happy, call right now!" He said seriously as he handed her the phone.

"Alright, but JUST for you! It's going to be the same old same old. But since your such a whiney baby!" Sabyn joked with him.

Sabyn hung up after talking with her doctor and went to her calender to mark the date.

"Two days from today! Are you happy?" She asked him.

"More than you will ever know!" Clayton kissed her again.

There was then a loud knock on the door and a muffled voice yelling.

"SABYN? WHAT THE HECK IS GOING ON AROUND HERE! LET ME IN!"

Sabyn ran to the door and pulled the person inside.

"ALLIE! I'm so glad your here." Sabyn yelled and grabbed her sister in a hard hug.

Alexia spotted Clayton and held out her hand swinging her hips just a little more than Sabyn would have liked.

"Alexia Fargate. Sabyn's sister. Clayton Aiken I presume?" She purred.

"Charmed. I see great looks run in the family." Clayton quipped. Sabyn could have choked them both.[/COLOR]
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To be continued...

wow I JUST read the whole story. Invisible, it is amazing, and I am so sorry for you grandpas death I hope your family is doing ok. I really love this story.

Thanx for keeping up with the story even right after your loss of your grandpa, and the story is GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

great addition to the story as always. keep writing, u'r very talented

she is very talented!

she is amaizing.. i would kill to have writting skills like her

yeah, that would get me an easy a in lang.!

Did any one else who gets my R rateds giggle when she said Easy A...


and thank you for the compliments. I tutor English in my college courses so its nice to know my writing skills are appreciated. guys...more story tonight.

Thanx and np on the compliments.

yeah invisible whae she said that i was like INVISIBLE'S story!!easy a ha ha ha

haha i thought that EXACTLY too! haha i was like hehe that's invisible's story!! haha

lol

your so great claysgurl... Your funny and nice and you always make me laugh..all of you do!

yay!!! we make you laugh my neice was showing her butt earlier........litterally

if you get it

haha

Sorry double post....story below

Alexia and Clayton stood there staring at each other for what seemed to Sabyn like hours. Finally she broke the unbearable silence.

"Allie? I thought you weren't coming till later?"

"I wasn't" Alexia stated, still looking at Clayton. "I wanted to see you so badly, I just took off."

"Well, if you wanted to see me so badly then why are you staring at my boyfriend?" Sabyn seethed.

"Wow! This is new. Someone is jealous because of little ole me." Clayton stated with sarcasm.

"I'm not jealous!" Sabyn spat. "Listen, what do you want Allie."

"I love you." Alexia said turning to Sabyn and giving her a great hug. "Have you made the appointment yet?"

"Yes, two nights from now. Happy?"

"Yes I am. Well so. Where am I sleeping?" Alexia asked.

Sabyn directed her to an extra bedroom where she claimed tiredness and shut her door.

Sabyn stalked to the living room where she found Clayton staring at Alexia's door.

"Would you like to go in?" She asked him.

"Yes....I mean NO! Of course not. She's just very lovely. Stop being silly." He told her and gave her a soft kiss.

Just then Alexia's door opened and out she came to Sabyn's discontent, in nothing but a purple bra and thong underwear.

"Sorry! Off to take my bath!" She purred looking directly at Clayton. Sabyn felt her temperature rise when Clayton removed his hands from her hips and she looked to find him WALKING TOWARDS THE BATHROOM.

"Clayton? If you don't get out right now I swear to GOD I am going to bury you. NOW!"

Clayton came out of his trance and stared at Sabyn as if he didn't understand why she was so upset. "Sy? What's the matter. I'm sorry. I was just so taken there for a second. Forgive me."

"Get...OUT!!!!!" She screamed. Clayton protested as she shoved him out into the black night. She locked the door and headed to the bathroom. She could see the headlines now. "Crazed Vampire Drowns own Sister in Bathwater." The thought brough a smile to her face.

To be continued....

ahh i like that.. lol very good!! Cant wait to read more!

Alexia grinned as her sister opened the door. She knew Sabyn would be here soon. Alexia felt her sister's presence and greeted her without seeing her.

"Oh, I wondered how long it would take you to come in here and lay into me!" Alexia laughed.

Sabyn said nothing for a while. She just watched her sister lather up her long legs to get ready for shaving. Sabyn sat on the toilet and faced her sister.

"Why did you do that. Just once, let me have a man to myself. I always have to fight you for them. You know your powers are stronger than mine. I got Clayton on pure personality, let me enjoy it for once." She told Alexia.

"Sis, I'm sorry. I couldn't resist. You know when I get excited, my power levels jump. I wasn't going to take him away from you. I was just having fun. Relax." Alexia grinned.

She really wasn't trying to take her sister's silly boyfriend. But she couldn't help showing her magic off to Sabyn. When she was an only child she loved her powers. She could do anything with them. She certainly couldn't tell very many people about them, but she couldn't help showing off to all the kids on her block and messing with them when they weren't looking. Then Sabyn was born. It made Alexia angry at first because her parents were so busy now putting Sabyn through all the necessary tests to see what kind of Witch she was. A white or black one. Alexia and Sabyn had come from a long line of white witches (Good powers-white, Black Powers-evil~~Just so ya know).
At birth, When they found out she only had half the powers her ancestors had they were slightly disappointed. Then when they found out that the other half of Sabyn was Vampire they freaked out completly. They shunned her because she would never be able to see the daylight. They were told it would most definately kill her. Alexia was suprised that her parents hadn't killed her by putting her into the sun, just so they could put away the shame of thier daughter being a "blood sucker" but they hadn't. Sabyn was forced indoors during the daylight hours never ever to see the sun. Alexia took pity on her younger sibling and raised her. She was only 7 years older but in all reality, Alexia was Sabyn's mother, for Sabyn had never spoken one single word to thier birth mother.

"Sabyn. Really, i'm sorry. Don't cry!" Alexia toweled herself off and slipped on a robe before putting her arm around Sabyn.

"I'm sorry Allie. I just am not like you. I have never once used my powers except when absolutly necessary and I can't use them on Clayton to keep him from you. I'm not strong enough. You've done this before Allie and succeeded. Don't this time, Please?" She sobbed.

"I promise on my magic. I won't do it again. Is Dr. Stratton really coming day after tomorrow?" Alexia asked.

"Yes. He says he wants to research a few more things about my condition. He's not going to find anything. There is no cure for Vampirism." Sabyn thought it sounded funny saying it.

Dr. Stratton was the ONLY doctor in the free world that knew about Sabyn and her sister. He had found out on accident and revealed that although he had no powers himself, his mother had been 1/8 White Witch and 1/8 Vampire. He agreed to help her anyway he could. Alexia and Sabyn trusted the 60 year old man with their lives.

"You're not really a full fledged Vampire you know. You haven't ever fed." Alexia reminded her.

"I know. I've never had the urge thank God. But still. To never see daylight? That alone is enough to drive me crazy. God, I absolutly HATE the sunrise." She spat as she looked at the clock. It read 5:54am.
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To be continued.
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HA....What did you think. All the vampire references? You all thought it was a joke. I know this story is WAY out there. But there will be no violence or blood sucking I promise. Its just a silly story that I thought up whilst going mad in the early morning hours. Please continue reading. You'll like it in the end I think.
See you all tomorrow~Marti

hahahahahahha that's so funny! hehe i like this story! it really is fan FICTION! haha hehe i like iT!!!!!!!!!!

i like it too!!

It is VERY interesting, but I think that I REALLY like it!

this story is now si-fi and im dying for more!

i almost get addicted to storys with witches and such its wierd

add on PLEASE!

Oh I'm so glad you like it. I was afraid that you all would think it was a little too wierd. I've never done a sci-fi thing before but thought this would be interesting. I'll add on more tonight after my kids go to bed. YAY! You all like it. I'm happy!

yeah its really good. i'm very excited for if clay's gunna find out and how he will react if he does.

i cant wait to read more

dont worry about writing stuff like this invisible, usually if its si-fi, ill like it

yeah Clays#1 fan likes movies like Start Wars and lord of the rings and like troy, so she really likes make believe.

Troy isnt make believe deary, its history

but yea i love make believe stuff like Star Sars, LOTR, and Harry Potter

ok but back on subject, PLEASE ADD ON TO THE STORY INVISIBLE!

yeah what she said back to the story oh and guess what I GOT DIANA'S CD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sabyn called Clayton the next night and was greeted with profuse apologies. She accepted and told him that she wanted him to come by after her appointment the next night. He readily agreed and told her he loved her.

Sabyn and Alexia passed the night talking about olden times. They never once brought up the subject of their mother. They instead talked about jokes they had played on the neighbor’s children that were cruel to Sabyn. They would shine flashlights in her windows and say, “Woo…the sun’s coming out…it’s going to get you!” Alexia would retaliate by putting a translucent spell on herself and haunting their bedrooms at night.

The next evening, Clayton came knocking a little early.

“I wanted to be her for your appointment.” Clayton told Sabyn.

“Oh. No Clayton you can’t. I mean…I don’t…” She trailed off.

“I’m not leaving unless you tell me why I cannot stay.” He rebelled by sitting right in front of the doorway.

Sabyn looked at Alexia for help. She just shrugged her shoulders at her young sister and sat on the couch.

“Oh..God, Clayton. I didn’t want to tell you. Okay here goes. I am a witch.”

Clayton stared at her emotionless.

“and a vampire.”

He continued to stare.

“I’m not lying Clayton. I know it’s hard to believe but It’s true. I didn’t want to tell you but I felt so bad about lying. Clayton say something.” Sabyn felt tears welling in her eyes at the look on Clayton’s face.

“I don’t believe you.” He simply stated. “Prove it.”

“Alexia is stronger. She can show you.” Sabyn started.

“NO. YOU!” Clayton yelled. “I’m not in love with HER Im in love with YOU!”

“You…you are?” Sabyn stuttered.

“Do it!” He growled.

Sabyn closed her eyes and concentrated on the energy around her. She raised one hand and muttered an incantation.

“Flere Ronet acendona”

Clayton rose as he noticed that every flower in the house had risen and was floating in mid-air. She muttered something else. “Spinia Flere” and all those flowers rotated in slow circles. She muttered a final incantation, “Clayton, flere axonia” and the flowers rotated towards him and slowly decended to the floor, forming a perfect circle around Clayton.

“Oh. My. God.” Clayton stared at the circle of flowers. He looked up to find Sabyn smiling. “Alexia? You too?”

“Yes, but I am full white witch. Sabyn is only half. That is why her powers can only do trivial things like that. She cannot change her appearance, or make money out of thin air, or transform into anything. I can pretty much do anything, except kill.” Alexia informed him. Clayton suddenly remembered something Sabyn had said and started to back away from her.

“You said Vampire. What…what do you mean by that?” He asked not really knowing if he wanted the answer.

“Clayton? She has never, ever, ever, fed. She hasn’t even had the urge. Dr. Stratton doesn’t know why but he figures maybe there just isn’t enough Vampire in her. You have to be full Vamp before you get the urge really strong.” Alexia answered for her sister.

“And that is why you can’t go out into the daylight.” Clayton finished for her.

“Yes. I’ve never ever been in the sun. From birth, my parents kept me in my room with no outside light. I’m so sorry I lied to you. But you see why I couldn’t tell the truth. Don’t you?” Sabyn asked sobbing.

Clayton said nothing but instead, walked back out of the front door towards his car. Alexia started to go after him to put on the memory spell but Sabyn stopped her.

“No Allie. Let him go. Without Clayton, I just don’t care anymore.” Alexia held Sabyn while she cried.
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To be continued....
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So? What do you think? The end is coming near. Will Clayton accept Sabyn as she is? Will he shun her? Will he break it off gently as not to hurt her? or just never come back? Time will tell, my pretties....

awww that was so sad!

he just walked out of the house!!! i'm like speechless...

that is sooooo sad, why would he do that to her? i feel soo bad for sabyn, she can't help it, but i reallly like the story and I have no clue how it will end.

i'm hoping it's gunna end happily... but i am sooo excited to see what's going to happen now that clay just left her house!

that is sooooo sad! im in shock that clay would do that! add on more im getting into this!!!

I am so addicted Invisible!

I have to admit, I do like the PG stories alot!! it doesnt make me blush like the R ones! hahaha !!

i don't really want to read the r~rated stories, they sound really bad.

Oh...I'm so flattered. Someone copied thier siggy colors from me! Ha...J/K. More story below!
Happy Independance Day you guys and Happy Whatever Day to all who are from other countries .
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Sabyn sat on the couch for a long time. She didn't know what to think. She certainly expected Clayton to be upset. But she never thought he would just walk out without a word. Just as she was getting up to move to the door, their was a knock. It was Dr. Stratton.

"Hello, Dear. Are you ready?" He asked her.

"Whatever. It doesn't matter anymore." Sabyn frowned.

"Have a seat." Dr. Stratton asked and she did so. After she was seated on the couch again, he made a strange remark.

"I want to tell you that I am going to run one test, and one test only on you. You will not feel a thing. I came to a conclusion last night after going through ALL of your records and this is the only other solution that I have not thought of before. If you fail this test, I think you will be overjoyed."

"If I FAIL this test I will be overjoyed? Shouldn't that be the other way around?" Sabyn asked, confused.

"Just do what he says." A voice came from the doorway.

Clayton was standing there with a vase of white roses.

"Clayton!" Sabyn cried. "What made you come back?"

"Sy, I love you! No matter what or who you are. I can deal with anything you put before me. All that matters is I fell in love with you and want to be with you." He told her with tears.

"Oh, Clayton. I love you too." she cried as she sprang up to give him a kiss.

"Ehem. Could i finish please?" Dr. Stratton imitated being annoyed but in reality, he was quite pleased that someone had finally given Sabyn the love she deserved.

"What? Oh..Yes! Allie? Dr. Stratton is going to start." Sabyn yelled to her sister in the kitchen.

Alexia sat on the floor and Clayton stood ready to support Sabyn in anything she asked. Dr. Stratton took a needle and looked at Clayton. "Do you mind?" He asked Clayton, indicating the needle in his hand.

"Um...I guess not." Clayton said with apprehension. Dr. Stratton pulled five drops from his arm and pushed the liquid onto a glass slide.

"Dr. Stratton? What's going..." Sabyn started.

"Hush." He stated simply.

The elderly doctor put the slide into a magnifier and checked for any foreign substance. Satisfied that it was clean, he put a gloved finger into the blood and smeared some on Sabyn's bottom lip.

Sabyn trusted this doctor but this was crazy. "Gross. What is this all about?"

"Open your mouth and put a bit of the blood on your tongue. Clayton you must move away in case I am wrong." Clayton moved way back and waited. Sabyn did as she was told but the thought really made her ill. When she did as she was asked, Dr. Stratton measured her teeth, her face, her eyes, and her pulse. He turned to Sabyn and simply asked, "How do you feel?"

"Sick! UGH. Can I rinse my mouth out now?" Sabyn asked. The old doctor got a huge grin on his face and nodded at her. After drinking several glasses of water and spitting them out she returned to her seat. "Well? Mind telling me what that was going to prove. Did I fail?"

"OH! My dear girl. You failed with flying colors. I have some news for you my lovely woman. But I will not tell you until 6:30 this morning." He grinned.

"What? That's two hours away. Why not now?" Sabyn cried.

"Patience my child. I shall return." With that he gathered all of his supplies and walked out the door.
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6:25 am The conclusion
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"Clayton could you let the doctor in when he gets here. I can't get near the door. The sun has been up for 15 minutes now." Sabyn requested.

"Of course." As soon as he said it, Dr. Stratton was knocking. Clayton let him in and the doctor went straight to the bedroom.

"Come with me. This is your final test." Dr. Stratton told her.

"I can't. I have to pull my curtains and..." Sabyn started.

"No you do not. It's all taken care of. Put this on please." He told her as he handed her a blindfold.

She did as she was asked and took Dr. Stratton's hand. Sabyn couldn't see where she was going but trusted the doctor not to hurt her. She felt him pulling her and as she had the house memorized by years of moving in the dark, she knew he was leading her towards the door. "NO! I can't! Dr. What are you doing?"

Clayton came behind her and put his hand on her shoulder. "Trust me I won't let him hurt you."

"I will never, ever hurt you my dear. Trust me. I know what I'm doing." Dr. Stratton pleaded with her.

She put her trust in him and felt herself being pulled on the porch. Maybe it was an overcast day, she thought. Solor eclipse? She wondered. But all of the sudden she heard Clayton exlaim. "Oh. God!" She felt a strange sensation on her skin. Oh no! She was burning alive. The prickly feeling on her skin was the sun's deadly rays, eating her!

"Let me go! OH GOD CLAYTON! LET ME GO!" She screamed.

"No Sy. Look!" He told her as he pulled the blind from her. The light blinded her temporarily. She had never seen the sun so it took quite a while for her eyes to adjust. She was panicing and ran into the living room before setteling her eyes on anything. She slammed the door and Dr. Stratton came running after.

"YOU COULD HAVE KILLED ME YOU OLD CRACKPOT! HAVE YOU GONE MAD?" Sabyn screamed at him.

"I most certainly have not!" He grinned. "You, my love, are NOT a vampire! " He revealed.

"What?" Came a chorus of all three onlookers.

"When I left, after your test, I went to see your parents. Yes. I tracked down your parents." He told her at her surprised look. "I told them that I needed certain information and if it were not given to me then I would be forced to bring them up before the witches council. For withholding information. I was bluffing of course. I had no clue there was a witche's council."

"Where are you going with this?" Alexia asked him. Angered that he dared bring their mother and father into this.

"I'm getting there, Alexia. Patience! Anyway. They made it up. The vampire part. They were so ashamed of you only having half powers that they investigated. Your mother was having an affair, Sabyn. You are the result of that affair. Your father was so ashamed of you that he vowed to lock you away never to be seen. He saw it as a sign of embarassment. That is the reason you only have half powers, you have a non magic father. Who is dead many years now, by the way."

Sabyn looked at the doctor. She wasn't sad, happy, thrilled, anything. She was shocked however, that the news about her mother was not a surprise. "So what this means is...."

"You have been denyed the sunlight for all these years because your father was ashamed of you. You mother went along because everytime she looked at you she felt the shame she had brought on her family." He stopped, he had more to add but he wanted her questions.

"So why didn't you figure this out before. The whole Vampire thing." Clayton asked and Sabyn nodded.

"I could only go by research. I have never treated Vampirism before. I only had past recordings that your parents had done and Your own word that you had it. I finally came to the conclusion that the bloodlip test was the only thing that I hadn't done. I read about it years back but thought it was too risky. After all, you claimed Vampirism and by all acounts you were so why chance someone getting hurt right? So, Sabyn. You may walk into the sunshine, picnic, swim, run, anything. At ANY TIME! My services are no longer needed here!" He grinned.

"Oh I don't know about that." Alexia stated.

"What do you mean?" Sabyn asked, still shocked at her news.

"Well. I may need someone to deliver this baby! I want it to be Dr. Stratton." Alexia looked at her sibling. "Remember Donnie. The guy I was dating a while back?" Sabyn nodded. "He is the father. I told him last week and he is absolutly thrilled. I didn't want to tell you because you were having such a difficult time. We're getting married on Christmas."

"ALLIE! I'M GOING TO BE AN AUNTIE!!!!" Sabyn screamed.

"Yes." Clayton said from behind her, "and you can go out into the sunshine and go to the park, and we'll have picnics, and playdates with them..."

Sabyn took one second and her news sunk in. "I can walk in the sun." Clayton took her hand and led her to the door. "I will see rain clouds for the first time, sunshine on the river, flowers in bloom." She started to cry.

"Take it slow. Your body has never had sun. You will want to wear protection so you don't burn until you get used to the light." He had to stop because Sabyn was grabbing him around the neck and hugging him fiercly.

"Thank you so much, for giving me my life back!" She told him.

"Are you ready?" Clayton asked taking her hand and Allie rubbing lotion on her bare shoulders.

"I am ready." Sabyn smiled as she opened the front door.
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Epilogue tomorrow guys. have a safe holiday!

ohhhh.....Epilogue! hehe good cuz i dont wat this story to end! it was SOOOOOOOOOO good invisible! thank you so much!

aww yay! this is a good story!!!

yay! that is and awesome story! i cant wait till the epilogue!

that is a great story, i will be very impatient until you post the epilouge tomorrow, but with such a good story, i'm willing to wait. i hope that you guys all had great new year's eve parties!

it was the forth of july hunny not new years eve! it was "mondays eve" according to that one guy but i dont think people would have mondays eve parties!

OMG I can't believe that I said New Year's Eve parties, I think it was cause the guy that I like was at my party trying to confuse me by saying that it was like Monday's eve or something and I got really confused, but now I think that I got it down.

awesome story invisible! i'm glad u decided to make clayton come back. i love happy endings! can't wait til the epilouge! keep writting!!!!!!!!!

yea keep writing pretty plz with a cherry on top!

uh no cherry cherry cant sing. so lets loose the cherrys

EPILOGUE...3 1/2 YEARS LATER:

Sabyn laced up the silk corset on her wedding gown. Alexia was standing next to her with her twin daughters, Asa and Ariel.

"Auntie Sabyn?" Asa, a beautiful 3 year old that looked like her mother, asked.

"Yes?" Sabyn answered.

"Tell me again how you and Uncle Clayben met." Since as long as Sabyn could remember her neices had called him Clayben. They said He was always so close to his soon to be wife that they might as well combine thier names. Alexia said that she was lucky that her daughters had chosen Clayben instead of Saton.

"After the wedding my lovely." Sabyn told her.

"Can I do my magic please." Ariel begged.

"Just this once. Put my necklace on please."

Ariel's little face screwed up in concentration and just when Sabyn thought that she'd never do it, Asa came to the rescue holding Ariels hand and giving her sister her half of powers to made up for Ariel's lack of half. The diamond necklace sailed up in the air and landed gently around Sabyn's golden tanned neck. Alexia completed the task by clasping it in place.

"Clayton is one lucky guy." Alexia stated smiling at her younger sister.

"I'm the lucky one." Sabyn grinned as she headed out the door. The bright rising sun was already hot on this july morning and Clayton stood in front at the outdoor altar waiting for her in his white tuxedo. She saw tears slipping down his cheeks as he held her in his gaze. She shifted her wedding gown and whispered to no one.

"I love the sunrise."
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THE END...
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MARTI KETTERER (INVISIBLE)

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Hope you enjoyed.....

Oh that is a GREAT ending! Great job, now asap you should put out your next story!

thats awesome!

yay!!! and at the end of the wedding clay can sing hold me thrill me kiss me!!!!! yay guts tonight is the first time i have ever heard that song from clay!!!!! and im in love with it!! i love when he says kiss me!! yummy!!!!!!!

*** guys ha ha ha ha lol guts

wow, that was really good invisible, that was really really good

wow! I loved it Invisible! Thank you so much!

hehe claymybuttercup, hold me, thrill me, kiss me is an awesome song, eh?

Wow, you are from Canada, my dad was on msn tonight with Clays#1 fan, and he said eh?, then he wrote, wow I must be Canadian to say eh?, so I thought that was funny, sorry if it was like REALLY lame though.