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| Posted by: ClayFan4ever | | Hey everyone I am writing a soon to be r-rated thing it's not to interesting but it will be.. Invisible you have sparked my writing! But anyhoo leave your e-mail and I will e-mail it to you!  | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: ClayFan4ever | | yayayayayayayayay!!!!!! It is going to get better I promise!!!! | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: clayfan101 | | NO! it has to start slow... ya know? like he just meets sum1 and stuff... but its good. i dont think it sucks at all. | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: ClayFan4ever | | thanx blame invisible she is turning me into a sicko!! j/k invisible!  | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: ClayFan4ever | | if anyone has invisible's story chapters 1-6 I am in need of those chapters they are not in my mail center no more!! I am off to write some more story! | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: clayfan101 | | i don't have them anymore... i deleted them once i read them...  | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: ClayFan4ever | | dang oh well.... INVISIBLE I know you have to have them!! It's ok Clayfan101 don't worry be happy and think CLAY!!  | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: Invisible | | I'll wait to send out my next one until Clayfanforever? is done with her story.
Don't want to bombard everyone at once. Im still working on mine so I have time to wait.
I can't wait to read it.
By the way...I know this sounds stupid but I have never heard the song Touch before. I don't have the CD so...
OMG...I found my favorite song...TOUCH...i bet he had me in mind when he was singing it too!
Just kidding..but wouldn't that be so wonderful....mmmmm | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: ClayFan4ever | | ok Invisible it is still not to good but I am working on it!!!
I will send out yalls chapter!!!!!  | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: clayfan101 | | yay ..... i am excited to read it! 
wow Invisible.... you haven't heard Touch? Have you heard it now, and that's why you like it? Thats probably one of my least favourite songs on Clay's cd! haha But it's still good, cuz I like them all. | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: ClayFan4ever | | yeah that is not his best song ever....
Did you get chapter 2 clayfan101?? | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: Invisible | | I'm enjoying the story you have written. Great Job.
I've heard the song touch now! I got it from someone last night and they let me burn it off of a cd they had. Of course my all time fave is Invisible (of course) but touch comes pretty close...well Run To Me is in second but touch is pretty close to that....well...no more sad songs....
Okay I could go on for like ever on this so ill stop and say...I can't really think of too many songs ofm Clay's that don't send shivers down my spine....hehe | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: clayfan101 | | haha good for you, Invisible!! haha that's really funny... as I was reading that I kinda forgot about the song "Invisible"... my favourite is Perfect Day | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: ClayFan4ever | | ok I sent it to you claymybuttercup!!
It really means a lot to me to get praise from you Invisible my story will never live up to yours!! | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: ClayFan4ever | | well they won't and you should be taking that as a compliment Invisible! I love your stories and claymybuttercup told me that I took after you Invisible! | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: Invisible | | Thank you! I do take it as a compliment. I just think you also have a great talent.
I'm turning you all into sicko's. Wait till the next story comes out. Lot more sicko stuff in there too. Good sicko stuff but sicko stuff just the same.
When's the next chapter coming clayfan4ever? | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: ClayFan4ever | | more story will come out tonight and yes it is SICK-O STUFF OK! I can't help it.... I am showing my creative side just like clayfan101 siad! | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: Invisible | | I was on another fanfic site for Clay aiken...just reading the stories that they wrote..and they have a name for the kind of stuff I write...it's called..
Clorn...
I guess a shortened name for Clay Porn..
I thought it was funny! | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: clayfan101 | | oooooooooooooooo i will try to find some later hahahahahhahahahah clorn HAHA  | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: Invisible | | Oh just in case someone reems me for sending you to a site with such graphic stories, I must say that the Aiken4facfiction also has other Clay stories too. Romantic, humor, general, drama. Not just mature content. I read some of them and there are some really good authors.
I was gonna post something there but...I save all my stories for you guys!
Aren't you special!  | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: ClayFan4ever | | yeah we are special.....we love your stories so much invisible!! | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: ClayFan4ever | | hey everyone I want to hear your comments on chapter 3 it is out! | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: Invisible | | I loved Chap 3. Especially the part where he goes into the store.
and exellent teaser for the ending!
Why should she yell rape though? For monetary gain perhaps? See what I mean? Leaves you guessing! Wonderful
I give it a 9.2 | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: Invisible | | I went to another web site and saw our own Mr. Doing the cha cha.
So..Im going to see if he'll do it here. If not, ignore my stupidness..here goes
nope he won't do it here! Too bad...it's really funny! | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: ClayFan4ever | | go INVISIBLE!
I can't make a perfect 10 story this is the first story I have written in a while! I sent it to hot4johnstevens too! | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: Invisible | | no one can make a perfect 10 story. Not even the likes of Stephen King (my fave author) or J. R. R. Tolkien (LOTR). In every single story there ever was, there is always a different road that could have been taken to improve it. Always!
You should be proud...for your first story it is HONESTLY an amazing work! | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: ClayFan4ever | | yayayay!!! *tear* yay!!! I am so happy! More story will be coming out later!!! claymybuttercup said that I take after you invisible! | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: hot4johnstevens | |
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ClayFan4ever said this in post #54 :
go INVISIBLE!
I can't make a perfect 10 story this is the first story I have written in a while! I sent it to hot4johnstevens too! |
hey I didn't get chp. 1 and 2...but chp. 3 was great....thanks for mailing it to me.... 
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| Posted by: ClayFan4ever | | ok when I send out chapter four later I will send out chapters 1 and 2 to you! | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: Invisible | | MWAHAAAHAAAA (EVIL LAUGHTER)
Ive turned you all into pervs...my evil plan has succeeded.
MWAHAAAA (MORE EVIL LAUGHTER)
No seriously, Im glad ive brought out all of your hidden talents... | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: hot4johnstevens | |
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ClayFan4ever said this in post #58 :
ok when I send out chapter four later I will send out chapters 1 and 2 to you! |
thanks that means a lot to me!!!!
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| Posted by: ClayIsMyHero23 | | lol all these are great! invisible.. are u going to send out more of ur East A or is it over?! | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: Invisible | | Thanks...Ill read it here in a second....MAN there are so many people on tonight I don't know what to reply to first.  | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: Invisible | | Easy A was done...
My next story entitled "Rainy Nights" is done but I won't send it out until the Clayfan4ever is done...
Besides..Im too into her story to worry about mine right now.. | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: ClayFan4ever | | lol... I am excited that I have everyone waiting! That reminds me there will be the second part of chapter 4 and chapter 5 coming out today! And hot4johnstevens check your e-mail.. | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: hot4johnstevens | | yea I got 4 too and wow....it's so good..I am so waiting to see what happens....it's good  | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: ClayFan4ever | | but you have to wait till later.... anticipation building?....
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| Posted by: ClayFan4ever | | like I said in the end of chapter 4 Clay's temper is going to get the best of him.. I have to wait until later to type it but I have it all set up in my mind, I have to wait because I can't think right now too many people! | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: hot4johnstevens | | awesome...it's funny because when I read it I try to kinda put Clay in the story.....like picture him in it | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: claysgurl | | I REALLY want the story! Can you by any chance send it to me through pms? | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: ClayFan4ever | | if you want to recieve e-mail r-rated stories you have to be 15, we are looking out for the young people | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: hot4johnstevens | | the story is good.....I'm happy though that you are watching out for the younger ones because the story is a little for "older" people if you ask me.....
I'm dealing with a broken heart, see ya'all monday | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: claysgurl | | i know that it's what you should do not to post the stories, but i can't wait until i get older so that i can read them! | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: ClayFan4ever | | I know yall want the story but you can't have it! Older ppl only! hot4johnstevens we have missed you but I hope that you feel better! | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: Stephanie13 | | I don't mean to be rude but so I see r-rated things all the by that I mean on tv | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: ClayFan4ever | | I know that there is that kind of stuff on tv but here at inreview we are trying to do a lil something called "prevention" | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: hot4johnstevens | | Yea, I have started my own story but like I have said before...I'm not that good at writing them so I am so leaving it off of here | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: Invisible | | My stories are sexually graphic. The way I rate them is..my oldest daughter is coming close to 13 and I will not post anything here that I wouldn't allow her to read. And the same goes for sending them out. I won't send anything to anyone that is not 15 or older. My stepdaughter is 15 and I trust her to read the contents of my story because she is old enough to handle it. and her parents think so as well. So that is how I decide who to send my R rated stories to. They should be rated NC-17 but I bent the rules to my stories a little and took care not to use the "Dirty" words. I use what's called Fluff words. But they are still graphic. Sorry. When you turn 15 let me know and I will be happy to send what I have written to you.  | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: ClayFan4ever | | Yeah I completely understand that too Invisible! I think we all try to preserve MINDS!!! Invisible plz get on yahoo! | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: hot4johnstevens | | yea I agree with you all and Invisible, your last one was the best by far.....I don't know I just can't write stories like that. Mine are always about like family things...I don't know, I guess I just don't have it in me to write...r-rated stories.... | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: ClayFan4ever | | I didn't really think I would but I tell you once you think of an idea and then go and start typing it will just start appearing on the page. I have started writing my next story everyone! | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: claysgurl | | I fully support you Invisible, ClayFan4ever, and the rest of you guys here, just make sure to never bend to the rules or you sure will pay. | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: Invisible | | I think she means bend the rules on who we send our R stories too. Right? | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: hot4johnstevens | | The ones who write the stories, you all really do come up with some great ideas. I am so happy that ya'all let me read them....I enjoy them so much....you guys are really good at writing them....  | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: ClayFan4ever | | I am working on my writing skills and I have nothing else to do! | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: Invisible | | Hot4johnstevens. I enjoy writing them. Glad you like them. I'm trying to do a sequel now to Rainy Nights called Gray Mornings. It will be shorter than Rainy Nights...Still good...Hott too....whew....you'll get that one automatically when it's done! You do get the R stories right? | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: hot4johnstevens | | yea I get the r-rated stories...I think Rainy Nights was your best story so far....waiting to hear more....your great | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: ClayFan4ever | | awesome Invisible! I am writing another story but I am now on low time to get it done! | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: Invisible | | Thanks Hot4johnstevens, It will be awhile for my next story. I have been posting a some stories on another board so I have taken some time to do shorts over there. Im done with that now so I can work on my next one!
and might I say YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!!!!!!!!! Clayfan4ever is writing another. I can't wait!!!!!!!!!!  | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: claysgurl | | I have some close to r-rated stories, but since I'm not 15 can I send it to yall? | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: claysgurl | | I will get the story done and then I will ask my mom if I can send it to you guys. She doesn't want me to give away my e~mail address, so I don't know how this will work. Sorry if she won't let me, I mean REALLY REALLY sorry. | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: hot4johnstevens | | Invisible, your stories are great. I am writing one....it's not like yours though...it has Clay in it...but playing a different role then you have ever placed him in...he's a dad in my story, with a child who has a gifted voice....but anyways....
Claysgurl, if you can....you can e-mail it to me at
emslonestar@hotmail.com | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: cLayAiKeN313 | | yah i loved it...and did u notice there is a guy watching u in both stories...lol | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: hot4johnstevens | | yea....ya'all really know how to write and keep someone guessing....... | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: claysgurl | | I actually don't have anything written down as of now, but I have some pretty good ideas cooking in my head. And that is a good idea to make another e~mail address for yall to see, thanx for the idea ClayFan4ever! | | Reply To this Message
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| Posted by: claysgurl | | You should, now all I have to do is convince my dad that it is a good plan. | | Reply To this Message
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